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  • Old Guild Username: Ellri
  • Joined: 12 yrs ago
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    1. Ellri 12 yrs ago
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7 yrs ago
Current Peace is a Lie, there is only Passion. Through Passion, I gain Strength. Through Strength, I gain Power. Through Power, I gain Victory. Through Victory, My Chains are Broken. The Force Shall Free Me.
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8 yrs ago
"Never was, never will be."
8 yrs ago
We find that our favorite damage type is collateral.
8 yrs ago
We do not corrupt mortals. We teach them enlightened self-interest.
8 yrs ago
Peace is a lie. There is only passion (for cookies).
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The guild was down for unknown reason. It was simply slow in getting back up.
In Hello 11 yrs ago Forum: Introduce Yourself
We'come to the guild. What be your preferred genres and post lengths?
We'come to the guild, @redbaron1234.
To offer suggestions, it would help to know a bit about your preferences.
Do you enjoy writing long, short or something in between?
Are there any themes/genres you prefer?
What sort of RPs would you most enjoy? small groups? large groups? 1x1? Arena fights? playing an entire nation against other people's nations? Tabletop RPs (using various grades of mechanics from just the setting to full dice mechanics)?
We'come to the guild.

To cross the bridge of cheese, we must ask you these questions three:
What is your favored genres?
What is the length you most typically write? (sentence or three / a paragraph or two / more than that)
How would you react to someone slamming a cake into your face?
@Rtron
Would you please add a timestamp to your post?
@OSIEIPPO
The things we noted in your CS as feeling a bit odd:
The use of "Mr. and Mrs. Rambu" when referring to his parents. - it feels rather... Earthy. Doesn't give the feel of being star wars. (yes, minor thing)
How he got to Coruscant after the Jedi who found him could not continue guiding him to the planet. It feels like a missing tale.
Also, there's no mention of the ongoing Great Galactic War here. Even on the most peaceful worlds in the galactic community, the war was felt in some way, yet the CS never makes any references to it.

Even if his skills are lacking when it comes to non-Force, he must have some skills. Perhaps he's decent at diplomacy? at talking his way out of trouble? Nobody's useless at everything.

The long term goals point is what you see your character doing as the RP progresses (so long as he survives), not his personal goals.

Otherwise its fairly decent.
We personally don't like dollmakers, as the options are far too limited and never really match our "wants". But for people who are less demanding, we can see them being useful. Its certainly better than a lot of photographs.
with extra bits this time, Fallen. i.e. more carefully (or carelessly) than usual.
In Mahz's Dev Journal 11 yrs ago Forum: News
guild was down earlier today,@TheMaster99. around 5-7 in the morning CET.
We'come to the guild.

We recommend giving this topic a read. It'll illuminate many of your questions.
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