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Ya it works! Thank you so much!
I do have a question about adding characters.
Do we put the form in the reply box???


Could you clarify what you mean?
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Oh! Okay!


If that works for you, let me know if you have any questions or ideas.
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Mhm! I've read the rules and guidelines!
There's just one teenie weenie thing-
I write in 3rd person,and I don't know if that's allowed here-
If it isn't, that's totally fine!


Yeah, ours is a bit different in the sense that we only use first person. Everything you write is assumed to be dialogue, and everything in action symbols (asterisks) is supposed to be an action as if viewed from a camera. That can be in either first or third person, but usually the subject is removed, since we all know who the subject is anyway. For example,

*Runs up to the group*
Hey there!

Alternatively,
*I run up to the group*
What's up?
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*The aura retracts almost immediately, condensing into a single point around my hand, and I blast toward you tearing through absolutely everything in my path*


*The hand extends toward you*
That's enough.
*The robot's gravitational stabilizers turn off, crushing everything not protected by the barrier with the gravitational pull created by the mass of the shell condensed into the size of the bot*
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*It reflects off a curved transparent barrier in front of me, and a ripple is sent out through space*


*Barriers form around our allies*
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*Generates a magical mirror of my own in its path, angled toward Avis*

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Grah!
*Looks down at them, then after a moment they shatter like glass, and all the bits are vaporized*


*Another mirror appears in its path, redirecting the beam to another mirror, which directs it toward you*
Wow! This seems really cool!
Would you mind if I could join?


We're always open to newcomers! Have you read the rules?
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*Is slammed into the ground despite blocking it with my hands*
You're gonna hurt your friends with a weapon that big.

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*The special properties of the lightning wither the blade away as the hammer lands directly, due to me blocking Data's blow*

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No.


So be it.
*A complex labyrinth of magical mirrors appear; the hand of the robot opens and shoots a beam the size of its palm, which the mirrors redirect and focus into a beam the size of your body, trained on you*
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Your arsenal never ends, does it?


This was the aim from the start.
*Punches you with a planet-sized fist*
Made another animation.



I like this one. You might enjoy the short game "Marble Marcher," which is a similar concept in real-time.
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