Etcetera

Myriad Reality

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*Naomi sucks in through her teeth and gains a vacant sort of look.*

NAOMI: When I was little, I didn't... exactly have a family. So I lived in an orphanage for a while; I wasn't really a model kid, so I never got adopted. And, the guy who ran it...

*She pauses for a long, long time, unconsciously crossing her legs defensively.*

NAOMI: He was a pretty bad guy. And he never really got punished for it, y'know? I trust Mr. Lucy's judgement on this, but, if it were up to me, I'd make a world where people like that can never hurt anyone again. It'd be safer that way. People like being safe.

@Tank O The Lake

*Nods*
Safety, something at the very core of all our desires. Does Mr. Lucy not think the same way?

Myriad Reality

@Tank O The Lake

Noted! Thanks for the CS!

Myriad Reality

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NAOMI: Get me a tequila, strong as it gets.

*The robotic flight attendant disappears down the aisle, then reappears a few minutes later with a few sealed zero-G-proof pouches containing the cocktails. Naomi sips at hers, then turns to look at the two.*

NAOMI: We're doing really good work here. I hope you know that. What we're doing is going to change the world.

@Tank O The Lake

Mm...
*Crosses my leg over my knee*
Naomi, what does a perfect world look like to you? Don't constrain yourself to realism.

Myriad Reality

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NAOMI: Daiquiris are still pretty good; they're basically straight sugar. Can't really mess that up no matter what you do.

@Tank O The Lake

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*Half smiles*
You had me at sugar. I'll take two.

@Legend

I would be remiss to turn down hospitality. I'll have one of the same.

Myriad Reality

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not really, something with magic would be cool, like a swords and sorcery type thing maybe
but not really picky

@TruckKun

Just a quick heads up that you don't need quotes for character dialogue, it's assumed. And if you could add a linebreak between action symbols and dialogue, it would help. Thanks!

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just cus my character isn't bloodedge griffin the shadow ninja of the stoic monastery doesn't mean I'm not capable of seriously engaging. if anything a slightly wacky and out there character allows for a more interesting setting than "cyborg bounty hunter #47" is trying to shoot mcbad guy and he hits every shot cus I say so

@JFK

Sure, there's McJRPG guy on one side of the spectrum, but I'm not totally convinced the other side of that spectrum is alien JFK.

Myriad Reality

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not really, something with magic would be cool, like a swords and sorcery type thing maybe
but not really picky

@TruckKun

I'm sorry, I've been on a business trip. That sounds good, I plan to set it up tomorrow.

Myriad Reality

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Honestly not really, they are more of a merc, they just wont do anything targeting children, and sometimes animals depending on the situation

"You think that 'hero's' are infallible? I am standing here as proof that they are not. They came to where I was and they left us all there."

@TruckKun

So sorry, I totally missed this comment! I have an idea. Do you want to start them in a world somewhere? Like, any preferred setting for a universe they'd be visiting?

Myriad Reality

so @DarkwolfX37 is my character good, or do i need to add/ change stuff?

@TruckKun

I think it's pretty much fine--do you have any goals/motivations in play? I can try tying them into something going on depending on what that looks like.

Myriad Reality

Would Halius know Latin, or is Varric a new form of Latin, just curious?

@darkred

I'll defer to Tank on that, but I want to point out our style again:

*Holds my hand up, fist on his chest, in a Roman Salute, and my voice carries the authority of drilled formations and battlefield command*
Marius: Amicus sum. Centurio Marius Titus, Legio XIV Gemina. (I'm friendly, I'm Centurion Marius Titus, 14th Legion of Rome, Gemina.)
*Eyes the men*
If there's a Rome still here, then I stand ready to serve it. Under what standard do you march?

TL;DR, needs to be first person, actions need to be marked with *, and quotes aren't necessary around dialogue. On the language thing, I'd probably prefer a general *Speaks in Latin* once for the character instead of doing live translation, but I probably won't enforce that unless it becomes excessive.

Myriad Reality

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I have a backstory, and also I did read the post format and the other rules

@TruckKun

Could you provide details as well as info on how they became interdimensional?