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Dragons of Caerel [accepting!]

Rolf readied himself during the encounter, but made no actions. His companions had it well in hand. He might have arrived first had he not already unsaddled Forge; he would have mounted and been on the newcomer in moments.

As events transpired, however, he stood in the background, one hand holding his sword and the other supporting his pipe, which he was loath to give up.

When everything was over, he sheathed his sword and went back to his patch of the camp, unusually quietly. He had to hold Forge back from frolicking with the other dragons, but he made himself clear by giving his partner a taste of his suspicion and dislike for the newcomers. They had soured his mood, but he tried to salvage it by rekindling his pipe and resting, his back leaning on Forge's warm belly.

When the time came to discuss their followers, he would voice his opinion of them. But until then he'd keep his own council. Let the kid think for a night that he might get to join them.

Hogwarts: Ignition - Year One

Had he not stopped to reassure a student, Richard might have gotten a counter attack as well as a shield, but distracted as he was it was all he could do to intercept the incoming curse. He caught it on the tip of his wand, and twirled it over his head, redirecting the curse back into the woods. It flew wild and high, and Richard lost track of the source.

The night was exploding, and Richard shoved Roze back roughly toward the bulk of students, and lifted his wand. A bulb of light, brighter than the moon shot from it and hung just below the canopy of trees, casting both light and shadow over the forested landscape.

"Charlie," he called urgently, not taking his eyes off the tree line, his wand raised in a dueling position. "Trouble." He shot another curse of his own back, but refused to move from his defensive position.

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

Cool stuff, looking forward to the bio. Do you have any questions or need of guidance?

So I had two thoughts, one serious and one silly.

Serious: The Korriban chapter should end with a duel between Saidor and David. Regardless of the ending, David and the Jedi will have to flee(because even if he wins, he'll have just beaten one member of a hostile faction whose base he's still in). I had in my head this image of Saidor investigating the ship, where David is still in hiding(having sensed him, or just gotten curious), and them dueling there, possibly fighting through the ship and eventually bringing the fight to the landing pad and out into the public view, probably the first time most of these people have seen a lightsaber.

Silly: I had this thought, in writing not in audio, of a conversation between David and Dren which would go

"Saidor, I presume?"

"It's pronounced Saidor, but yes."

"Oh, my apologies."

Because I don't actually know how to say his name.

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

I... I think I counted wrong the second time. Twice. You're one short now, I think. How many skill points do you have in? I'm counting six, is that not right? Was eight wrong last time? Why can't I count today?

Anyway, Unknowable, I'm going to assume that the Yit was one of the two ships landing.

Dragons of Caerel [accepting!]

Dragon and rider were eager, as most were. Rolf found throughout the trip that he had to reign Forge in to keep to Keltor's orders against fancy acrobatics. The dragon knew this was a good flight, and was eager to show off in front of so many dragons, both familiar and strange. As the flight wore on, however, Forge became easier to control as he started getting antsy to land. Both were glad that Forge hadn't needed to carry all of their gear the entire trip. He had left his iron bound oak shield and steel tipped lance with Inirath, leaving Forge with just Rolf, his armor and spare clothes and supplies. They were still feeling a little too heavy as the land came into view.

When he saw it, Forge gave a great flurry of flapping and started to accelerate, moving ahead of the formation. Rolf pulled the reigns and flooded his companion with his feelings of displeasure at the lapse in discipline. He got annoyance back from the dragon, and knew he was being hypocritical.

He didn't openly acknowledge the action, and when they landed(Forge was small and did not in fact knock any trees over) Rolf immediately stripped the saddle and bags from his mount and friend. When that was done, he gave Forge a quick rub down, and only then did he start picking pieces of his armor off.

He stopped when he was half stripped and sat down on a rock, filling his pipe to take a break as everyone else landed and dismounted.

"Nice little ride, eh?" he called out to the other riders, resisting the urge to massage his thighs.

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

I may have given you the wrong numbers before. Your stats are fine, but you're one over for skills. There should be seven points, I'm counting eight. I would suggest just taking "lift heavy object" off, because it doesn't really mean anything specific.

I would also suggest changing "quick draw" to "blaster" unless you mean for her to have that skill only at the very beginning of a fight.

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

Not a problem.

I've had a thought about where she might work:

She could be Dren's current tech person, but he would hire a new one(Diabolicalrhapsody's character) because one person wasn't enough.

About that titan pad you guys are working on your post at: Is it blanks? I follow the link and there's nothing written but instructions on how to use titan pad.

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

Cool stuff, a few things:

The stat section is just kind of hard to read, if you could just bold the stats, so that it's easier to see the skills that go under them. Maybe put some extra spaces in between for more clear division.

You're two points short in stats(I know you're not finished, but I wanted to make sure you knew this) and one short in skills. When you write the skill, don't write how many points were put into it, write the number of points pluse the stat that controls it. Because that gives you the dice you roll and that's the important number. We can do the math, but you don't need to make us.

Lastly, I want to be clear that I don't want to retcon your character into the Jedi entourage. You'll need to start as non-affiliated with either order, and at this point in the game the best place to start is employed under Dren's archaeology company.

Dragons of Caerel [accepting!]

Is Inirath willing to carry gear for the smaller dragons?

Star Wars: Opposing Forces

Absolutely, and always. But, I can really only pick up Jedi.

On that note, I'm going to move forward, and if my MIA players rejoin, great, but if not too bad.