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robotgirls said
I don't know if anyone's said this before (I'm not one to sift through thirty pages, as interesting as this stuff can actually get), but this ticks me off so much.When you try repeatedly to make contact with other characters (ie: talk to them) and they ignore you. Mostly in group roleplays. Maybe it's just that my characters can try to do this at a bad time, but it still makes me mad. Like, you talk to everyone else, and now when I step in and try to make conversation, you're suddenly going silent and just doing your own thing.Then again, it might be my fault for trying to talk to people at the wrong time of a roleplay, but still...


One time my character went to the restroom (slice of life RP) and by the time I was able to return to the group (it was supposed to be a few minutes) they had basically a 15 minutes conversation and didn't acknowledge my return to the table. Sometimes you get some bad people who don't pay attention or accidental skipping from people who SKIM READ (augh) to other stuff, but it's always frustrating. Yeah.
Yeah, I like to read and as one of the credos go—to improve on your writing, read more—which is something I try to do often. There are two of my friends (Dervish, Pachamac) that I will read even if I have no interest or ability in joining them in their prose. I’ve posted in the OOC of them sometimes and joined in idle chat but have been shooed away before, which hurts but I get it as some people think such chat should be directly involving participants and not lurkers.
If the second part of my post is influencing the scene/effects of my actions too much, let me know. I can always trim it down if needed. I’ve only been in a handful of other advanced sandbox games and they previously left a lot of cause and effect (as well as NPC interactions) in the hands of the player. If I’ve stepped out of line let me know and I’ll make edits accordingly.
Edessa Thorne & Emil Errant


Edessa knew it was going to happen as soon as the first attack came in the forest and that was before the cover of fog gave the bandits an advantage they did not previously hold against the caravan. She hated that they had what should’ve been her home field advantage, one of the villages where she had grown up after her fleeing of Gorgon was not too far from here and she remembered fondly of the training that she experienced here all those years ago. Edessa should have had the advantage due to the familiarity of the wood.

Damn the fog.

That’s when the first casualty of this attempt at wiping them out came, as a man was tossed to the ground as the cold steel dived into the mercenary’s shoulder, of course this was to the rear flank of the archer so she only could hear the tumble of the strike. She had to make sure the front was safe for the caravan to follow through. The safety of the unarmed was an important precedent even though every nerve in her body screamed at her, trying to tell her to make a hasty retreat and call it done. The raven-haired girl frowned as she let loose her first arrow once the first person in her sights became visible—the raining field of arrows from the bandits not causing a careless reaction from her.

“Don’t choke.” She muttered under her breath. “Hit the target.”

For a moment it was like she was transported back to when she was much younger, when her guardian had bestowed to her the first bow that she would hold and one she had given away a little before she met Emil. The day was as clouded as the present, as fog had settled in whilst Ser Edwic had set up a target beyond the fog that she could barely make out.

“It’s too far.” She had complained, “It’s impossible to hit it.”

“With that mindset you won’t hit any target, especially when they are firing back at you.” He had lectured as he nocked an arrow in his own bow and released it—the target hitting with a resounding thud.

“You must be resilient and doing so you will realize having a destination will remove all frustration by your short term failings. You have talent and genius in your affinity, do not abandon them because it seems hard—life will plague you with struggles and difficulty, and you will never succeed if you believe in absolute impossibility.”

She remembered the long-winded saying, and she remembered an old Gorgon phrase as the arrow crawled through the air: ‘Remove all doubt, as to succeed you first must release the arrow from thine bow.’

THUNK!


The arrow collided through the mass of fog into the first bandit—travelling through the man’s forehead as he dropped. The other bandits around him stopped for a moment as Edessa began to nock another arrow to release at another of their ilk. It was understandable that they were dumbfounded that this girl had pierced their fog and killed one of their best archers in their troupe and rightly so as of course, Edessa was no ordinary ranger—she was from a bloodline that produced some of the best archers in the world.

“What?! Impossible!” She could hear them shout through the fog. “How did that whore kill Ilias, how did she even—?!”

Edessa couldn’t help but smirk at their flabbergasted remarks. To succeed you first must release the arrow, indeed.

“Even though I walk in the shadow of death’s gaze, I will fear no soul as I embrace the raven’s burden.” She muttered as she released the second and dropped another bandit as arrows from the others rained down at her direction to which were sloppy given the immediacy they felt they needed to do.

“Gods damn us, Jhavek too?! You idiots go get her before she shoots again!”

Through the fog a group of bandits armed with axes and iron blades barreled down on the ranger, the girl had done much damage already to their flanking forces of archers—some of which were the best marksmen they had—though given their sloppiness and lack of battle intelligence they were likely not as skilled as they perceived themselves as. But they were still dangerous and an idiot could still murder a genius.

Edessa’s cold sapphire eyes kept firm and narrowed as she kicked off her mare as a crude sword swung inches above where her head was seconds prior—taking some hair along with it as the ranger’s feet planted in the ground as she slammed one of her hands against the horse’s body—sending it bucking forward into the forest. Edessa preferred being on her own two feet to on a horse, as odd as it was. Like many Gorgonites she felt in tune with the physical world and nature itself when she wasn’t hoisted above ground—but horses were faster than walking.

The group of bandits then began to surround the ranger as she put down her bow.

“You sure know how to make a lady feel welcome.”

Edessa gave them no fear even though she was actually quite taken back that she might die in the middle of this fog-entrenched wood.

Moving her hand to her sword’s sheath she pulled out a steel long sword which she held in her left hand. In all honesty it had been awhile since she had been in melee combat, but that was the thing about Gorgonite swordplay—it was designed for multiple enemies and relied more on dexterity than sheer physical prowess, or at least the variant she was taught anyway which her guardian had told her was named ‘The Raven’.

“Gods guide me.”
Not a GM, but I personally wouldn't mind bits of the CS being elaborated on when you have the time such as this section:

For nearly two decades Hark and his tutors have wandered this world, doing their best to keep a low profile. With valeal in full civil war they could not return to his mother's family. Hark had no choice but to move from town to town, performing small jobs for coin when they could. Thulian and Ser Owen would make sure that Hale's last orders were carried out, "Make Hark strong."


Might be me speaking from perspective/experience, but that could be fluffed out to a length paragraph or two.

EDIT: Posted. Lol, and Brand said it takes too long! :F
I sense there will be a lot of collabs in the future...
I can't believe you actually made it on time (with like seven minutes to spare in my time zone, too...)
I'd prefer someone take the time to check the cogs on the wheel than push the cart with loose wheels. =)
vietmyke said
RPGmaker is an interesting piece of software, me and some pals have developed a few projects with it, mostly for personal use though. Question Gowi, Lucien and Ilyana/Edessa are siblings right? Is she aware of Lucien's rebellion?


Yeah, Lucien is her eldest brother if memory serves correctly. As for my character's knowledge on the current events, I'm not sure how much word has traveled far outside of Gorgon; but being a ranger she might have come across some rumor mills and word of mouth. If she is aware, she hasn't joined up or made contact. Hell, she might think it's a trap devised by Thomas Briar.
The more he is distant, the less likely that a union would produce genetic anomalies. Just a thought. I can work with whatever you make; again another option is to completely nix the romantic implications and just develop their childhood as close familial friends but that does limit and trim down awkward moments when they reunite. Though again, Ilyana was eight when her mother was killed before her eyes and her uncle stole the throne. So that’s what two years where they were familiar with each other—and really young at that?

All that said, I am very interested in interacting in the future or even mulling over flashbacks/past references.
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