You know its been edited a good while ago.
Post or something. o.o
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Right, you didn't turn. However, you set your feet as if preemptively expecting to turn. You only stated sword in left hand, bringing it up, and then down into an upward cut from left to right. What you meant cannot really be applied to what is written, specially in this case, where your position is weak and vulnerable. My attack with the earth, was mid-swing, or at the earliest stages of your swing. Enough that he could determine your swing and react to have the earth cut low. Otherwise, it wouldn't have been written that way in the first place. You were already 5 feet from me, when you began your swing. My earth strike was written at 64 inches, which equals just a bit longer than 5 feet. With the time to took my earth to reach you, and you to actually detect the attack coming, you would have been at least another foot or so closer by the time you made your defense. And then your footwork from your original stance to the defensive one is just about absurd, which translate in to somehow jumping back, which I'd love to take advantage of, cause it's downright ridiculous, but alas, I can't even do that right now, because all the stuff beforehand doesn't even make sense.
I think I'm going to have to call up the judge on this one. @skallagrim I'll go with whatever he decides, but fyi.. your footwork is horrendous.
Skall, last 3 post.
So in that case the story arc was named Gorilla and the Skulltor or w/e, you don't have to have your opponent name in the title? As you might fight many opponents in one arc.
@GreivousKhan If your foot is positioned to turn the opposite way, [His left foot leading and right foot braced, ready to shift position; not forward but in the exact opposite direction.] Braced, but not in a way that would really position you to stop on a dime like that. Cause even if you were to do a complete turn, your foot positioning wouldn't allow you to both stop instantly, and turn simultaneously.
Plus, bringing your sword in like that? While going for a lower left to upper right strike? I call shenanigans.
Then there was one other thing, but that's a mistake I planned on you making.
So what am I missing?
I know @Melonhead asked for an example of what @GreivousKhan wanted, did we get it or did I miss it scrolling through the thread?
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I hate this damn iPhone.. First it won't let me type kick Khan's ass, now it won't let me finish anything. *grumbles*
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It happens all the time, even in the arena setting, to me. Though for some damn reason it turns out better than I expect in some cases and I usually, in a story, aim to work past that character flaw. I personally think it might be fun to develop a sort of mentor/teacher type connection between characters as the combat aspect both tests and helps develop IC explanation for how to work past said issues without mysteriously eliminating them. ^-^ They still exist, but be manageable. Though likely new problems would arise to take the old's place naturally as you will never get a perfect PC.
I feel like I'm spamming OoCs left and right so if my yammering gets on your nerves, feel free to kick my ass out and I'll get back to doing what I do best: Lurking.
I originally intended on a character who would always do what I thought was best, but funnily enough Ruchette is turning out to be one with the biggest personality flaw of overconfidence. Leeroy's character is also letting personality cloud his judgement. Anyone else having characters doing this?
My characters all have weaknesses Khan, you just need to learn how to fight.
Come to think of it, I don't think I've ever fought Skallagrim.
So- what's the plan, folks? :)