IceHeart

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@rush99999 Alright so Golem only it is. Time to close up the roleplay to other people and get cracking.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@rush99999 I like the golem he's accepted; however, the leprechaun I'm not so sure about. Having a wish granter character seems a bit abusable. Hmmm, what do the rest of you think about the little green man?

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@Lord Orgasmo

Thank you. Just fix that second sentence in the last paragraph, the grammar nazi in me is raging, so after that is fixed the character will be accepted.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

The Girl

Name: Veronica Asmothe

Appearance: Veronica

Age: 11

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Skills: Being cursed, getting into trouble, being cute, and daddy's money.

History:
Veronica has been cursed with a cruel fate. As if exposed to Murphy's law, potentially life threatening events keep happening to her. After being told that she was cursed, her Father very quickly started to hire the best protectors he could hire: Food testers, guards, tutors, apothecaries, even mechanics in order to find better ways to protect his daughter from the dangers that always follow her.

She has managed to survive so far though she does tend to get hurt a lot from so many close calls. She has stayed mostly at home for now while her family tries to figure out the best way to protect her. She does leave home occasionally and the older she gets, the more she will have to go out into the world despite her curse.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@Apollosarcher@KRAZY J@Aquanthe

Characters are accepted.

@Lord Orgasmo

So like I had said earlier, would like you to add the reason why he took up this job, or why he is heading over here in the first place if you go that route. Once that is done I'll give it another looksie.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@Aquanthe

Quite the pretty character sheet. Everything looks in order and she seems to fit in well with the world. I can see no problems with it, good job.

I'll be starting to accept characters now, I'll be mentioning which ones are ready in a bit and which need some work.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

@Lord Orgasmo

I would at least include in your history the reason why he decided to take the job of helping with the security for the daughter of a somewhat low noble family. He's been traveling for a while but has now decided to take a somewhat permanent job protecting Veronica. I suppose you could make it that he hasn't joined the household yet and then explain why he decided to stick around.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

I'll be updating Veronica's bio after every time skip, to show how she develops as time goes on.

I'm not going to accept any characters quite yet but I'll at least voice my thoughts on them.

@Apollosarcher A few spelling and grammar mistakes, mostly missing words, made reading it a bit awkward at points, could use a look over. Also that time manipulation could be a little overpowered, need to some some limitations on it before I can consider accepting it; being able to manipulate an object's time in order to stop or speed it up especially needs some clarification. Does the object need to be touched? Is it only inorganic objects? Is there a size or weight limit?

@KRAZY J Someone really likes a certain character, ha ha.

The poetic form was quite a fun read though I do think you might want to separate it after every few lines to make it easier to follow. Hmm considering your characters past, he'll probably not be the most welcomed guardian in the household. Might take a few time skips for him to be fully trusted. You can be sure anyone the baron decides to take in to protect his daughter will have some kind of background check done on them.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

The Girl

Name: Veronica Asmothe

Appearance: Veronica

Age: 10

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Skills: Being cursed, getting into trouble, being cute, and daddy's money.

History:
Veronica has been cursed with a cruel fate. As if exposed to Murphy's law, potentially life threatening events keep happening to her. After being told that she was cursed, her Father very quickly started to hire the best protectors he could hire: Food testers, guards, tutors, apothecaries, even mechanics in order to find better ways to protect his daughter from the dangers that always follow her.

She has managed to survive so far though she does tend to get hurt a lot from so many close calls. She has stayed mostly at home for now while her family tries to figure out the best way to protect her. She does leave home occasionally and the older she gets, the more she will have to go out into the world despite her curse.

@IceHeart

Actually that has already been taken care of along with a very simple bio.

The Cosmic Jest - A Fantasy with Steampunk Elements Roleplay

The role play will employ a time skip system as well. Every so often about a year or so will pass, making the cursed girl grow up and change. As she grows older the dynamic of the role play will change as a result.