Isaac

Clouded Moon

Also, you should probably come up with less Warrior-sy names for ranks.

Perchance! A Persistently Preposterous Perfidy of Petulant Pugilism : Moldovan Masked and Mustachioed Muscle Man from Mount Magora MEETS MOLE-MAN!!!!!

General Shenanigans was just a mix of Sgt Slaughter and Doink the Clown that I made up, but I like the dolphin head

I will eventually make a new post.
Dolphin moves
Speaking dolphin
Argument about if they're fish or mammals

@BangoSkank

Don't got gills. Need Oxygen. Mammal.

Word association Game!

Salty

@Lord Orgasmo

Teamers

The Wild Beyond Witchlight

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Once I introduce you, you can write IC

@Guardian Angel Haruki

You misunderstand me and that's my fault. Worded it wrong. Once accepted, do I put my character in the CHAR tab, or does that happen when you introduce me?

The Wild Beyond Witchlight

@Squashedquatch
Very interesting!

I'll PM you so we can discuss Halandar's backstory in a little more detail and figure out what your lost item is. ;)

@Guardian Angel Haruki

Once I'm accepted, do I put in character or does that happen when I enter the story?

One Piece: The Sea Reaver Pirates Reborn

Aight, review time.

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@Duthguy I like this guy. He's cool.

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That's all the review you get. Go ahead and add Zerry into the Character tab.

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@Squashedquatch Sorry I didn't get back to you as fast as I said I would. I've only just now had the chance to take a proper look at everyone's apps.

I appreciate that you fixed what I told you to, truly. That's exactly why I'm mad at myself for not seeing this earlier.

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I... honestly don't know what I can tell you about this statement in particular, except that it's cursed. For the future, you really should just throw in bits and pieces of detail into your apps anyway, even if you don't believe it to be relevant to what a GM asks of you, or whatever else. For the moment though, I don't care whether or not you replace the quoted statement with anything; I'd rather just not have to see that it's still there, for my sanity's sake.

I feel as though there's a continuity issue here too, within the bio itself. The Honorstar Garrison Raid was an extremely chaotic battle; realistically speaking, everyone would be too busy fighting for their own lives to pay much attention to one lone guy's mad sniping. What you could do is have your guy had sniped off who he could in the fight, bailed upon spotting the reinforcements and later chanced upon the other survivors as he entered the tavern, using that opportunity to offer his help instead. That should fix the continuity issue I'm getting here, hopefully without interfering with what you wanted.

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@ColouredCyan You certainly have the interesting character in the making. If not for the few things here and there, I'd be more than happy to accept it.

Re-Appropriator is not a crew role that I had thought of; I'd just assumed that the cat burglar aspect was something Nami did on the side, prior to officially joining the Straw Hats. Unfortunately, Re-Appropriator is also not a crew role that's on the list. I'll need a moment to consider how such a role would actually help the Sea Reaver Pirates overall, niche applications aside.

Judging from what you've written for the field itself, I'd class Poppy's combat role as a Corsair. They're more focused on quick-draws and rapid shooting than lining up their shots. You can always transfer what you've written in the Combat Role field to the Fighting Style field on the off-chance you wanna save it, but I'll leave that up to you.

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That's all for now. I'll establish a due date for apps to be completed when I've finished setting things up.

@AdmrlStalfos19

When did I say he had participated?

One Piece: The Sea Reaver Pirates Reborn

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Yeah... I get that this is a WIP, but there are already glaring problems with it.

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I'll address the fact that you put Sniper in both roles first. If you want your guy to strictly be there as a sniper (which I'm guessing you do), then your crew role would be Enforcer. Just so you know, the Enforcers are the primary combatants of a crew, and they're there to engage the enemy, protect the rest of the crew etc.; in other words, they're pretty much the muscle.

I won't harp too much on the fact that you also just put Sniping in the Fighting Style segment cause that does scream placeholder, although I will say that if you don't expect your guy to fight all that differently from the usual sniper, you might be better off removing the field in its entirety.

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The second issue is your mention of Portgas D. Ace. I'm not sure how I feel about canon characters even being referenced in a cursory manner, and I'm certainly against the idea of them being personally interacted with. I'd suggest removing all mention of Ace just to be safe :/

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That's all for now. If you need any help, just ask

@AdmrlStalfos19

Ok. No problem. Second issue is easy to fix, I'll just replace Ace with another pirate not canon to the series and be kind of vague about it. Hmm, perhaps his mother could have been part of the Reavers herself once and the marines wanted the name erased from history. What do you really want in a fighting style. I mean, I thought sniping is how a sniper fights, but maybe I have a couple of ideas.

Ok I edited my final draft!

Pokémon Galar

Minor problem with the latest fight...Shelgon using moves does not deplete it's energy stores. Its energy stores are depleted by the chemical changes happening inside the shell. Protect would have worked without anything else happening.

Pokémon Galar

(Ignore this sorry meant to post in OOC)

One Piece: The Sea Reaver Pirates Reborn

@AdmrlStalfos19

Done!

Icaros Moriah Jones

"Only those faster than time can escape my lightning fast shots!"

Personal Information

Name:
Icaros Moriah Jones

Epithet:
Storm Surgeon

Race:
Skypiean

Gender:
Male

Blood Type:
X

Age:
27

Height:
6'3

Weight:
170 pounds

Role In Crew:
Enforcer

Bounty:
67,000,000

Dream:
To live with the least fear possible

Personality:
Icarus is a bit up in your face, to say the least. I mean, when you're defeated, that is. Any other time he's most likely up on the mast, taking electric potshots at his and the crew's enemies, while trying not to hit anyone else that is on his side. It's no big deal if he does though, or so he thinks, being very carefree about his fighting style and always finding new ways to fight using his very unique powers. He is however, a very good talker and can usually discern the motives of those he speaks to using his acute Observation Haki.

People who try to seem smart often end up making him kind of pissed off, and anyone that would come to pirates for help expecting them to just drop whatever they are doing to assist will get a piece of his mind. He has a special hate for marines, as he was born about two weeks before the time Portgaz D Ace was and got to see his mother brutally killed by a Marine overly excited to do a good job and kill any woman that had given birth to someone so near the time given as to the birth of the son of the King of Pirates. He doesn't understand the stigma pirates face, instead seeing himself, his friends, and what he does as just another activity. A way to live life that would let him have the fun he always wanted. To have a real family even if they really aren't related.

His favorite activities are break-dancing, singing, and shocking other people using static generated by his power.

Biography:
Ok so he was born. (I would have loved to gone into deeper detail about why but it doesn't matter because that part doesn't add anything to his personality or do anything related to the story, so I'm skipping the filler) From a young age, he witnessed what the marines like to call Absolute Justice, as they killed his mother for being part of the infamous Sea Reaver pirates long ago because they were under order to erase the name from history. He hates the Marines for orphaning him, so much so that he decided to become a part of the New Revolutionary Army and directly oppose them. He gained his bounty for being rumored to have become the chief of staff and having the ability to unleash deadly bolts of lightning from his fingers after eating a strange fruit found under a tree. One day, while at a port on a mission, he heard that a big battle had gone down at a place called the Honorstar Garrison where pirates directly faced the marines. Loving the idea of the rebellious pirates, he resolved to follow rumors until he found and joined them. One day, as he was traveling the world in search of the pirates who had set him off on his trip, he came to a small port that seemed to be filled almost exclusively with pirates! He shot them all down, and impressed the new Reavers enough that once he asked, he was allowed to join.

Combat Information

Combat Role:
Sniper

Devil Fruit Name:
Shock-Shock Fruit/Shokku-Shokku no mi

Devil Fruit Type:
Paramythia

Devil Fruit Breakdown:
He can summon lightning from his fingertips, and control the length as well as the height. Using more than one finger powers up the attack by how many fingers he uses. (for example, one attack that needs two fingers would have 2x the power) There is a lot he can do with this, and various hand movements are vital to the usage of them. This has a cooldown, as once he uses a finger too much, it will become blackened and unusable without medical attention.

Haki Prowess:

Buso: C (Can use Haki to extend the use of his fingerguns, and is also vital in the use of Coated Thunder)
Ken: B
COC: None

Physical Capabilities:
Can breakdance and flip, which leads to some of his most powerful moves. Is abnormally fast for his age. Has goggles that enhance his sight.

Fighting Style:
Icarus is very quick, and loves to use the ship's various vantage points to create new strategies and find new places to launch his attacks from various heights and distances. Sneak attacks are some of his favorite to pull off, simply because it is fun to do so, and is not above using dirty tricks to win. He is a pirate, after all, and that doesn't mean he has to be an angel about it!

Equipment:
Has a couple of unactivated sonic bombs which can release an ear-piercing sound that on beings with elevated hearing can break Observation. Activated by electricity, but you are able to move them and they become unusable in water

Special Techniques:
Coated Thunder/Kōtingu sa reta sandā: Coats his hands in Haki and shoots through a hole he makes with his fingers (think of the O.K. symbol), coating his bolts in Haki and adding to their power and piercing.

X-Wave/Kurosuu~ēb: A move in which he charges his lightning to maximum length and releases them, resulting in two sideways waves of electricity

Static Boom/Seiteki būmu: A move where he charges electricity in both hands, makes a fist shape with them, and slams them together. That releases a electric wave that paralyzes anyone with a lower Haki level than him, but the recoil is so strong that it breaks at least one of his hands as of now.

Turntable Shock/Tāntēburushokku: A move where Icaros does a spin while rapidly shooting, does an X-shaped handstand, then pushes himself up from it while releasing a powered up X-Wave.

Radiance/Kagayaki: Charges his hands all the way up, coats them in Buso, and then jumps, only to bring down his hands upon the head of his opponent. To give you an idea of what this means, imagine he did this to an elephant. The elephant would fall over and be unable to move for a good 5-10 minutes. This is a last resort, as while it doesn't fry his hands, it makes his power unusable for a long time. Since it is a physical attack and he is not physically strong, it can be blocked by Buso Haki higher than C Tier

Unseen Electricity/Mienai Denki: He unleashes a bullet with the weakest charge possible, and in doing so it becomes almost unseeable. When it hits, however, since it is weak it only causes momentary paralysis and can be completely negated by Busoshoku Haki no matter what level.

Miscellaneous Information
Theme Song: RUN - CG5
VA: Whoever did Paulie in the English dub of One Piece