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4 yrs ago
"STOP. QUOTING. ME." Jb, 2019, quoted in 2022." Roland, 2022, quoted in 2022.
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7 yrs ago
STOP. QUOTING. ME.
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7 yrs ago
Gone fishing for a week, will return soon.
7 yrs ago
Happy New Year!
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8 yrs ago
Merry Yuletide, one and all! Gods bless.
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Bio

Greetings,

I am Jb; Briton by birth, roleplayer by my own hand, and lover of literature. I am also an amateur historian, a receiver of a Bachelors degree in Ancient and Medieval History - quite a useless degree, actually - and would like to think that I'm a fair, honest and open guy.

As far as RP'ing goes, I'm pretty open to most things really, all you need to do is ask! :)

So, if you've ever any questions for me, wish to speak about RP's involving myself or run by myself, or simply feel like a chat, don't be afraid to get in touch.

Most Recent Posts

@The Lioness

I'll ask now, as I can imagine you're a good judge of it, but what would you consider a good amount of time to allow responses/between posts?

I'd like you to stay and think it would help to accomodate you, but I also believe that it would benefit the RP in general if everyone did have some 'breathing space' between posts.

The problem with many of my RTPs in the past have been that they were slower, but then they got too slow - people posting once a week more or less - so I imagine I was just happy to have an RP going somewhere for once.

For this I aologise to everyone; mistakes have been made, but hopefully we can rectify them now and carry on forward without having to fracture everything already done.
<Snipped quote by Jbcool>

[...] specially for those of us ESL.


Speaking of which, and I realise you're ESL, could we have less of the 'he would' this and 'he would' that?

Look at others posts and see how they write, in English third-person writing this isn't really a valid form of writing it; this isn't a massive thing, nor a big criticism, just trying to help and make your writing smoother.
@Bright_Ops@agentmanatee@Dannyrulx@NecroKnight@Andreyich@Lmpwrkr@Rultaos@mackielars@Hank@The Lioness

@Andreyich

Basic sentence = stop being an ass with John, else your char get BLAMMED.


That is pretty much it in a nutshell.

That being said, we do have a lot of people, but people do also need to be aware that there should be some form of posting order. This is why I asked that people 'mention' those involved in their scenes, as well as who they're interacting with - yet it appears that this may not be enough.

As GM, I post when and where it is needed to move things along, but I agree that we do probably need to slow things down as well...not too much, just enough for everyone to get at least a post or two in before wandering too far off course again.

In short...

1) Always ping/mention those involved in your post.

2) Leave some time before posting again, I have to agree that this rapid-firing posting can take a toll on the RP in general, as well as those pariticipating.

3) This is an Advanced RP - as has been mentioned - so quality over quantity is what I'm wanting here; make your posts actually meaningful, something that can develop character and the like.

If I've missed anything, then feel free to tell me/suggest something, otherwise it's pretty straightforward from here on out.
@Andreyich

You do have a habit, as a couple of people do, of simply going on after you should actually have paused to recieve a return post.

Then there is the simple fact that, no matter how you attempt to spin it with the Ecclesiarchy etc, most of the actions your character has taken would have seen him shot by one or more people. Firstly turning up at the staging point for a new Guard regiment in the first place unannounced, then starting a fight with Guard personnel (which is a reprimand at least), then insulting a member of the Guard while threatening them, then actually grabbing the arm of a Commissar (who can actually execute you without repurcussion if he saw fit), and seemingly ignoring being spoken to by both the Company Commander and a Commissar as if he can simply swagger about with repurcussion.

All of this by a man who is, with all due respect, nothing compared to the rest of them - were he to be shot, no one would actually care, not the priests, not the Imperial behemoth, no one.

Now, if you have any issue with this, and I am asking you to reel it back several notches, feel free to PM me. Otherwise, please cease getting your character into suicidal situations via foolish actions, or I will just have him dispatched with a bullet to the cranium.

@The Lioness I would ask that you don't leave, because I don't like losing good RPers, and I certainly don't want to lose the person who is supposed to be leading us; if you do wish to leave, then feel free and I'll be sad that you do, but if you could just hang on then I'd appreciate it.

I apologise for my character/myself, but there was really no reason why she would hang about after delivering orders.
I don't think I can keep up with this speed of posting. Sorry, y'all.


I didn't expect it either, but that's fair.

I have to say I almost agree.


Whatchoo talking about Willis?
*power field covers mace*
HERREEEESSSYYYYY!


KHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAN!!!
Unlikely...there's far worse with you lousy rabble.
@Andreyich

I think that, much like the French with the Magenot Line in WWII, you may have to give this one up.

You may have been getting mixed up between the Frateris Templars - the pre Apostasy fighting force - and the current Frateris Militia, who are the unsanctioned and unofficial religious mob of the current times.

As @NecroKnight correctly pointed out, the only force under arms now allowed to them are the Sisters of Battle, and they are only their because they count as a loophole in the law of the land.

In short, we can execute you as any other soldier, whether that happens or not is entirely up to you and your character. :)

I for one quite like him, he brings much needed zeal, but in the point of who has authority over whom I do believe you have been 'out lored'.

Now, let's get on with the good stuff, ey?
<Snipped quote by Andreyich>

Actually, they're not. Commissars are formally a part of the Militarum Tempestus as part of the Departmento Munitorum's Commissariat and are empowered to execute anyone that gets in the way of proper Imperial discipline, with the only exceptions I can think of being the Adeptus Astartes and the Holy Inquisition... for obvious reasons.


Thought you'd get away with it, eh?

Hank is correct though; feel free to act as you will, just don't get in the way of that discipline...otherwise 'blam'!
@Bright_Ops@agentmanatee@Dannyrulx@NecroKnight@Andreyich@Lmpwrkr@Rultaos@mackielars@Hank@The Lioness

"Is it prepared yet?"

The scribbling sound of quill on parchment momentarily ceased, a sharp intake of breath coming from the hunchbacked scribe, his mechanical eyes whirring for a moment as he turned to focus on the black-clad woman standing by the window overlooking the hab-units from the central chamber of the Ministorum Headquarters. She had been stood there for hours now, the sharp angles of her face expressionless and her lips unchanged from the pout that had been there all this time, as Terebravisse had scratched out the final touches to the official document before him; upon completion, which had actually happened an hour earlier, he had had to make at least a dozen copies for other branches of the Guard, Ministorum and others, and each time she had asked him if he was finished...now he was getting annoyed.

"My dear Commissar," he wheezed through his teeth, "things of this importance take time, and it is a laborious process as you can see, but with a few more touches..." the fingertip quills worked swiftly and completed a final flourish, "...it is done."

With barely a sound Kata, Junior-Commissar and aide to Commissar Ismael Castor (for the moment), moved across and scooped up the delicate document in one gloved hand. As her glacial eyes focused on the writing, running back and forth over the High Gothic text, only now did the ghost of close-mouthed a smile begin to form on her lips; if anything it was more chilling to see her smile, giving her a half-crazed look that could not be good.

The document was concerned with the forming of a company within a larger regiment - a company under the command of a certain Captain J. Weiss, formerly of the Cadian 407th - one small part of a regiment that had been entitled for the time being simply as '87th Combined Regiment Expeditio Vernum'; this regiment would be under the overall command of a Colonel, however Captain Weiss would not only have near three-hundred souls under her command, but also the added pleasure of both Castor and his second-in-command as company Commissars. Every other NCO and commission was up to the Captain's discretion, with ample supervision of course.

What the parchment stipulated was that members of her company should be taken from some of the most whittled down regiments currently enjoying themselves some storeys below, those such as the Cadian 132nd and 407th - these veterans more than likely to make up the solid core of the new company, if not the regiment at large - as well as drifting survivors from the relatively unknown Cyrothaxian 'Flashflooders', Foruzian Light Infantry, and Hirisit 482nd among others.

One decision that might not be widely well received was that Abhumans from at least two damaged regiments were to be included, the First Helhiem Warband and Felinid 'Nightstalkers' being a part of that, along with the usual smattering of thick-skulled Ogryns and swift-fingered Ratlings; it was something that did not overly concern the Junior-Commissar, but something she would have to nevertheless monitor.

"Excellent work, scribe. I hope we meet again some day."

Once he was certain that she was out of hearing range, he turned back to his desk - the wooden behemoth almost as large as he was - and gritted his teeth, "and I sincerely hope that we do not."




Kata arrived just as order was being restored to a drunken ruckus, some sort of altercation having obviously taken place between the Beastmen and a more fanatical servant of the near lunatic Frateris, a pell-mell organsiation that the Commissar saw the use of but had her doubts about; all she could think as she approached was that it was a good thing someone else had stepped in, her eyes sweeping over Commissar Castor as she passed by the huge bonfire, the 'music' having thankfully fallen silent in the presence of a superior officer, because had she been the one to break up the fight then there would be significantly more corpses strewn about the place.

Once standing next to Captain Weiss, ignoring all looks directed her way, she snapped her heels together and snapped off a textbook perfect salute.

"Captain Weiss, I presume?" She asked cooly, the rank insignia clearly showing that she was indeed the Captain, "these are your orders for the formation of a new company - you will be required to select three hundred suitable candidates to join the 87th Combined Regiment under Colonel Hamid Nizar, the inspection parade taking place at o-five-hundred hours this morning."

She had been keeping her voice low for the moment, but after snapping off another salute she pivoted about on her heels and looked to the crowd gathered about the now diffused brawl, her voice carrying to those about the edges of the hab-units with the volume and levity of a parade ground Drill-Sergeant.

"At zero-five-hundred hours this morning, not too far away, those here present will be prepared for inspection and standing by rank-and-file in the open ground beyond the power-station. It is not hard to miss, so you are expected to be there whatever your current or future condition, everything cleaned and in order. Punishments will be given for insubordination and reprimands for errors in armament and uniform. That is all, carry on."

Looking back once more to the Captain, her sharp features shadowed by the peak of her cap in the light of the moon and fire, she made sure that the parchment was given over to Johanna, saluted, and began to walk back to the headquarter building where she was billeted.

One speech a night was enough for anyone.
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