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Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

I'm kinda depressed that I killed off Shaqmar and Layla and am kinda torn. A part of me wants to backtrack and make that epilogue (or at least the last paragraph) a dream...

To those who have gotten round to reading it, what do you think? Should I do it? Or should I just leave it?

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

@Double Capybara No Capy, your writing HAS improved. I can proudly declare that before you used to spell 'through' as 'trough' ALL THE TIME. Now you only do it sometimes :D

Jokes aside, The Grand Parade DEFINITELY got better with each new part. I know this because I waited until you were finished with it before reading it all in one go - and I could feel the improvement as I read :) I think you're just comparing how you felt when you wrote those posts to how you feel now (I think), because you've been in planning mode and something of writer's block for a while now

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

Don't you use piratepad for collabs?

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

*Reads intro post*

Well damn, Amul'Sharar is a poet.

Thinking out loud

I think all my Vowzra posts were generally cringeworthy ^^' in every iteration of Divinus. We're damn lucky he's dead I'd say. I'll probably pick one of my Eskandar or Shaqmar posts. Or maybe Yara...I think Yara has developed most now that I think on it. But I have doubts on how interesting her story is. Maybe Eskandar's story is more interesting. It's literally the story of his quest to get fifty-something children. Maybe Shaqmar is more interesting. A love-crazed madman in power is always fun. Especially when all he does is wander around searching for his wife - killing people and rapping on the way!

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Maybe that one TOBIA post is more interesting, now that I think on it.

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

@Double Capybara For the more specific questions (i.e. relating to the favourite character in a chapter, which character/s one liked/didn't like etc. and for what reason) a post or two would be better since each player has a host of characters that may be in completely unrelated plots. For more general questions, an overall analysis of each player's style across the length of the RP thus far is a rather daunting task.

I think one post, or a series of posts by a player related to one plot (e.g. The Grand Parade) would be more reasonable. If it works out the first time, maybe we can do it a few more times so that each of us gets a better understanding of our overall strengths and weaknesses.

Edit: And yeah, I'm so behind T-T

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

Maybe when exams are over we should each choose one of our posts and have the others re-read it and answer a selection of those questions for it. Would be an interesting exercise.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@Fallenreaper Yeah the 25th - but of May, not April xP
And as Dyril (I believe?) has already written to Alicja letting her know that she'll be arriving, I'm sure Alicja can meet her even if Aulus hasn't yet arrived, so don't worry about that ;) maybe my next post shouldn't be an Auus post at all - but one detailing what's happened with Alicja & co. since Duncan's last post and just before Dyril's arrival.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@Fallenreaper As Aulus and Alicja have yet to meet, that can certainly be the case. I really want to write a post progressing Aulus' storyline to the point where he arrives at the capital and meets Alicja and the others - but as I say, it's exam season and I'm either trying to study or too busy beating myself up over not being able to study to write a post ^^'

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

<Snipped quote by BBeast>

The blindfolds give them a Heads Up Display.

@poog the pig

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I should've done that for the Victors instead of makin' them blind

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@Fallenreaper Just finished reading the two sheets - very much look forward to interacting with these two! Very well thought-out damn :) I can imagine that Aulus' first reaction on seeing them would be, 'ohmagad a monstah!'