OK, first of all, jebas f*ck formatting pls. It's a wall of text and hurts my eyes.
Please make his picture an actual picture, not a link, and then just put it under a hider. It's more pleasant for all involved.
Put in some spacing so we get rid of the great wall of text.
And then as for my opinion (I is still not GM, but slyboy there seems to be off at the moment), I don't wanna accuse you of what I think I'm seeing exactly, but it feels like you built him specifically to counter our characters. We have shadow girl, and your guy can touch the incorporeal, my guy has a shield, and he can cut through those, etc. It could just be argued that since everyone basically uses magic, that's just how it is... but then I can see why some might call him OP. Which could be fine as long as the execution in RP is good.
I'll grant he doesn't seem to otherwise have a directly offensive power, just personal buffs and crowd control from his gravity, but he does seem a little all over the place. Gravity definitely comes out of nowhere. I'd say one, please fix the formatting, two, give us a bit more lore as to why he has that specific set of powers. Give us some common thread that ties them together and make it more palatable and then we'll let the GM decide if his power set is OK.
Edit: Lol, got ninja'd by le potato man.
Edit2: playing devil's advocate, strength DOES make sense in my mind. He negates magic, and then fights back with the physical. But then we argue that telepathy and gravity are major outliers.
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