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@gcold



I noticed you accidentally said your glass scimitar was an ebony one in the combat style section. In addition to that, you aren't disintegrating anyone with an adept skill in Destruction. I'm also all for the brooding badass character type, but lighten your character up a bit. This is a group RP, so make him more receptive to people, at least a little bit. His time as a soldier would've probably made him understand the importance of trust and relationships when you're fighting alongside others. As well as all of these, hop on the titanpad and hash out something with the other players so that your character knows some people in the camp.
That means I was the 200th post. BOW TO ME!
Alright, here goes.



Anything at all as regards advice, recommendations, or criticisms would be welcome. I'd like to take advantage of the more stringent standards here to hone my character creation skills.


Well, I like the idea of an Argonian Navy SEAL commando. I will bring up one thing though- Silverborn needs to be corrected to Silver-Bloods. Lets wait around for Gcold now.

Okay, here we go! I'm sorry for the long wait, I just couldn't get down more than a few paragraphs at a time. Not really writers block, but I don't know what else to call it.

Anyway, here he is!



I don't exactly have any gripes with this character. We'll see what Gcold has to say about it. I will say that Jorwen will probably like him for trying to avoid bloodshed.

Well, this is interesting.

If I were to join, I'd probably have a CS by Wednesday. I have no planned character archtype for now.

Do we need a Breton Dwemeri Scholar?


As long as you can find a reason for him being with the company, I don't have any quarrels with the idea.
Nah, we can start right now. But I'd like to wait until the weekend.


Fair enough.
So, are we waiting for a full roster to start?
Squeezed a couple inches in on Jorwen and changed some things about his family life. Wife and daughter are now in Markarth.
Am I able to add a few spells to my character?


Your character has enough ways of magically killing someone or altering themselves or the environment, I assure you. Also, I was reading over your CS earlier as I am wont to do in anticipation of this starting. I happened upon this passage:

"Jonimir stands at roughly 6’1, or around the average Redguard male height. His body is well defined, with tattoo’s on it of a tribal nature, probably to indicate his roots to his homeland of Hammerfell. His body is fit, though lacks the Redguardian Muscular structure that most people known Redguards for, mainly due to the fact that he Most likely due to his redguard gene’s. He keeps his goatee on his face well kept and well maintained. His hair is a buzz cut, that is well kept."

Please fix grammatical errors and typos in your CSs, folks. Also, mead addict. Alcoholism, maybe? "I'm addicted to beer." Just doesn't sound right.
@Leidenschaft@GCold

I basically remade my CS. Can you check it again?

I miiiggghhhtttt have over done it >///<



Other than a few typos and grammatical issues I have no quarrels with it.
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''In ten minutes, the Mages will come and bomb the hell out of this place. If you can beat me in less than ten minutes, you'll be able to escape in time.''

I did make my character one-armed, scarred, with one working eye and a nail in his head for a reason.


Holy shit, I didn't catch that until you said it.
@gcold@Leidenschaft

I'm reworking my character based on the things said in the pad and just wanted to make sure that half-elves can exist, is it true?


Not in the traditional DnD sense, no. The child is always the race of the mother with very residual traits from the father. It took generation upon generation for the Bretons to come about from the Nedic peoples there.

@gcold @Leidenschaft

Thanks for the help! I'll rework her character sheet and post an updated one once I'm done. I'm pretty obviously out of my league here when it comes to lore stuff, so I'm glad you two know enough to keep me in check with regard to the things you mentioned.


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