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Been on-and-off of the site for a long time. Male, late-twenties. My interests are varied, but steer towards western fantasy and sci-fi. I'm picky with my weeb media.

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@Lucian World War 2 Lightning Buddies ftw.

*high-five*

@Lucian Love the sheet, so accepted!


Thanks a bunch! Edited it a bit, modified his age and the timeline. Let me know if anything needs changing.
Extremely interested, but unsure about my ability to write with the quality you guys may be seeking. Nevertheless, I'll make a concept app and I guess we'll see where things go. Going with Captain Marvel, but to avoid any confusion in a one-universe rp, he'll just go by Shazam, while the wizard Shazam will probably just be referred to as "The Wizard." I doubt this will interfere with anyone else's characters, unless people delve pretty far into magic.

Shazam

"Say something, geezer. I dare ya."
"Suit yourself. SHAZAM!"
William Joseph "Billy" Batson 3.20.1929 (87) Male Lawful Good

C O N C E P T A B S T R A C T:

I want to explore the concept of a magical hero adapting to a new age. Shazam is a great fit for that role, because his powers allow him to halt aging while trasnformed, effectively adding that time to his overall lifespan. I really like the idea of the young naive, innocent Billy being given the powers of Shazam, and then being baptised in the horrors of World War 2 along with the members of the All-Star Squadron.

I really want to advance the character in such a way that he's tragically trying to hold on to his childhood innocence in a world that's growing progressively more detached and dark. Not to mention trying to fumble his way around technology.
N O T E S:

Of particular interest to me is World War II, and Billy's child-mind coping with the use of his powers in such a conflict, so most of my writing will likely be earlier stuff on the timeline. That said, I do really look forward to getting up to some modern day shenanigans as old man Shazam. I think the most potential for interaction would be with other older heroes, like Flash and Ghost Rider.

Also of note, if you haven't gathered yet, this incarnation of the Big Cheese is an older guy, though he looks pretty good for his age, thanks to not aging whilst transformed, he is still recognizably past his prime, and the transformation actually visually restores his youth now, as opposed to aging him. I'm considering exploring a sort of addiction to this effect, but I'm not sure if I wanna' take him down a road like that.




Responsibility Rocks!

Jailed for cold blooded murder of his cat, lux thing....and countless million people! You jerk!


"I've made myself feel every death... see every innocent face I've murdered to save humanity."
-Ozymandias

Jailed for teasing a majestic eagle
Jailed for questioning the Adeptus Arbites
Granted, but you have to join them.

I wish for less hostility up in this bitch
What even is this thread


Nothing short of perfection.
@Lucian - If you can reduce his strength, I'd accept him. That's really the only hang up I have at all, otherwise I love him. I was afraid of a vampire, but you did well. Though just make sure to keep his spells in check (no firestorms for example? :p).


Firstly, thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it! That said, I was wondering if you'd let me know specifically which areas to work on to reduce his strength, or did you mean his actual physical strength?

As for the spells, I was considering removing sorcery as a skill altogether, since it does seem rather vague and the potential for abuse is certainly there. Would that help?

EDIT:
@Oskar DiLondra

Also, while looking through the other characters, I noticed the overlap with Azazael's Haemomancy and Valter's Sanguimancy. I was unaware at the time of creating my character, as, admittedly, I hadn't looked over all of the others in-depth yet. If this is a problem for you, please, let's hash it out. I am willing to change Valter to be more of a physical beast if need be, or perhaps alter his magic in some way. Feel free to PM me or something.

EDIT: Finished. Will be expanding the world history of Mortaria as we play if that's alright, as there's much more I have in mind.

Apologies for the time it's taking me. The bae accidentally closed my tab last night when he jumped on steam and I've had to restart, luckily I'm particularly motivated today, so it should be done by tonight. Working on it at this very moment.
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