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7 mos ago
I am having a Cloudflare issue but I can access the site just fine.
7 mos ago
Congratulations, man! It's hard work worth celebrating.
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7 mos ago
If that nerdness makes you smile, why stop? Embrace the nerdness XD
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8 mos ago
What is your timezone anyway? Certainly not in mine (GMT+7)
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8 mos ago
It should relies on its own system to find the bug and destroy it. Anomalies are important to test the system from time to time.

Bio

Just your average Joe.
Bagus Surya is the name.
From Indonesia.

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Ok, it feels like I need more than just that scant introductory.

To sum up my RP experience, I've been mostly a GM for a little more than 3 years---not because I set out to be a Game Master, but because no one else wanted the job in our little circle. I was already a writer and worldbuilder, so when I took that GM armband, I had no shortage of plot and stories to spin. Besides, I am always available, and there is always a demand for a new thing.

My GMing style kinda reflects that origin. I favor campaigns with clear direction and purpose. Stories that know where they’re going, but leave room for the players to decide how to get there. I believe in narrative first, mechanics second.

In terms of tone and pacing, I like things that are fast but thoughtful; casual enough to keep momentum, yet deep enough to give every post meaning.

Despite all of that, I acknowledge that writing a solo work and roleplaying are two different things. I'd prefer to consider myself a novice. Due to the nature of my approach, I may be prone to making mistakes, or something that perhaps disatisfies my fellow players. Please reach out if you feel so. I am always willing to listen to your thoughts and feedback.

My works (current and finished):
Duplicitous Ruins in the Land of Twilight
Foreword: Why was this world created, and what inspired it
Sovereign's Will: A Fantasy Roleplaying Game. [CONCLUDED]

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"That's as far as I know about it, which honestly works just about the same against anyone and anything? Your turn, stories! Share some!"

"Can't say I am a fan of storing the corpses of a criminal and using them for a seedbed," said Jazdia with a mirth that maintained the cordiality between them. The morbidity of the measures Verdant outlined did not escape her, however, and she quietly hoped that whoever was subjected to that cruel finality did something that was deserving.

"But generally, you can't go wrong with suffocation. All of those who use magic rely on breathing to make it work, and oxygen deprivation is... well, maybe not the fastest method, but you can neutralize them without outright killing them."

Jazdia had no story to demonstrate the effectiveness of the method, but she herself relies heavily on her enchantment spell and had been the receiving end of that measure at least more than once.

As they walked past the exhibition room, the curator was standing in front of the fountain, seemingly waiting for them. He donned a stern expression, and the gaze from his translucent eyes fell on Verdant.

"Esteemed visitor, I saw that you were performing an alchemy in the collection room. Please do not do that again, for any spillage may damage the collection or the vitrines."


Vesemir accepted the pocketwatch, seemingly satisfied with the first order of the day. A simple accessory, made of metal, and the size was right too. He placed Jazdia's compass on the enchantment table, and then the basalt stone was placed by its side.

With a nod, Eblana channeled her arcane energy onto the table and had it run through an arcane circuit that linked both items. Done with that, he rubbed the basalt on the lid for good luck.

The watch remained closed when he returned it to Jazdia, and the elf accepted with an appreciative smile. Appearance-wise, there was little changed in that pocket watch. Vesemir knew the item was important to her, and throughout their adventure, he knew that Jazdia was someone who appreciated functionality over appearance.
"Well, that was quick," commented the elven ranger. "It seems your expertise is really something else, or Theriadoere's work was really that modular."

"A little bit of both, actually," Vesemir answered with a moderated pride. Eblana shrugged behind him.

"Anyway, thanks," she pursed her lips before adding. "Since it looks like you two will be a bit busy, I am going to explore the place."

"Ahahah! Busy is an understatement," quipped Eblana before adding quickly. "I am sorry I can't accompany you, Miss Jazdia."

"No problem. You are needed here. I am just taking a stroll to get rid of boredom. See you later, everyone!"

The second order was coming, and it made Vesemir appreciate the simplicity of the previous even more. Akari came with a series of weapons so many that Vesemir evaluated his choice of words; he knew sometimes he sounded rather verbose, but he also expected that everyone he hired had some common sense.

"No, no! Don't just put it like that!" The old elf was clearly losing it when the big shuriken--almost as big as the table itself--- was added to the pile.

"Young miss, I admire your enthusiasm, but you are ruining this piece of art! I can imagine Theriadore rolling in his grave, and I think I am going to join him soon! ---This device is fragile!"
The rest were intelligible muttering when the scholar removed the sword and the shuriken from the table. The clearness in his voice was only recovering when he dealt with Akari's collection of knives; he promptly returned them to her.

"Here, take this. And this. This too. I don't know why you would need all of them enchanted. The blessing would work as long as you have the rune on your person. Ok, prestige points! I get you. I will only have two of your weapons enchanted, but you will have to wait."

After Akari, came the masked knight.

“My sword,” he said, holding his spadone out to Vesemir to enchant. “Let the man that vanquished Scheel be vanquished by a weapon of Scheel.”

The words carried a significance that gave a much-needed pause to the archaeologist's consternation. With a nod, he accepted the long sword. It seemed he had missed a very important revelation, but he could not bring himself to be privy. The best he could do was to honor the knight's wishes.

"Very well. Mr. Rezello."

Before he could start processing the weapons, Verdant the youkai handed him a strange blade that thankfully came with its scabbard. Another simple addition to his list that thankfully would be easy to enchant. He was about to give his usual approval when he realized that Verdant had left with Jazdia.

***


Leaving behind the workshop, Jazdia walked through the exhibition room with slow and steady steps.

Despite earning many gasps and wows from Vesemir, Jazdia really could not call this place welcoming. It was cold, functional, and emotionless. Pale was its main color palette, and the lighting, while sufficient, only amplified the coldness of its design. It was almost giving off an impression of a crypt, a very ornate crypt at that, looking at the displays and items arranged. The lack of another person in this room further reinforced the feeling of cold, death, and loneliness.

"We're hunting the wizard, it seems!"

Verdant's energetic, slightly shrilly, voice somewhat dispelled the coldness, and it was hard to say she didn't enjoy the change.

"I think we are," she responded, brightened by the unexpected company.

"Anything you can tell about hunting wizards? I may be able to prepare a few helpful substances."

"A few, maybe. Had the pleasure of fighting a few of them. The most recent was in Kindeance, some ten years ago. A well-prepared wizard was the worst kind of enemy to fight against. There were eight of us back then, and it felt like subjugating a dragon."
"So basically the wizard stole a bunch of people with that artifact, eats them, then stole an entire town for... whatever he wants?" "And we're going after this guy? Like, not to be the leech under your scales, but with a relatively few people eaten he broke that wall and left a room that tasted like wet bones and screams. And now he got ten years to work off how many sacrifices again?"

"Can we even take him on? The lair is probably infested with walking corpses."


@A5G

"If the entire story of the wizard causing this massive destruction was true, then the correct course of action you should take is to return and contact the authority. Then they will contact the Westernant and then, after they have their bureaucratic hurdle sorted out, maybe in two or three years, an investigation team will then be dispatched."

Jazdia could sense the scholar's unhappy stare, as if the world 'returning' was a new kind of taboo. "It's reckless to decide things based on unconfirmed accounts and conjectures," Vesemir argued, his words slightly stammering, which concealed his apprehension. "Let us not forget that the news-bearer is not omniscient."

A pause ensued, and the silence grew into eeriness. Everyone knew who he was referring to, and very likely expected the curator to materialize himself in front of them to explain himself, but he did not appear, seemingly holding on to his principle of not giving a damn.

"Relax, as one of your advisors, I am not saying you should turn back now."

"I, too, as one of his advisors, think he should. Verdant has a point." Countered Mr. Elc, who stood facing her with arms crossing over his chest. "Well prepared as we may be, the threats are both physical and from the immaterial."

"That's fair. However, I would like to share my perspective on the concerns that have been raised. If the Lich is currently cooped up in Nuria, then I am not sure he has much to work with. Ancient spirits and occasionally the weaker ones, those are what populate the land of twilight for a good millennium. His means of kidnapping people have been broken, and he had no other means; otherwise, we would have heard about another Scheel accident. I do not doubt that Lich is strong, but he is nowhere unkillable. We can take him out even if we are one person fewer."

"We never heard about Scheel until recently. But I... you are right, another kind of accident would be impossible to cover up. But I still think the best course of action is, like you said earlier, to return." He sighed despairingly. "But needless to say, it seems I am the minority here."

Jazdia reached for her pocket and grasped a silver pocket watch by its chain. "Here," the ranger presented it to Vesemir to enchant, an affirmation of her resoluteness. "I suppose it doesn't have to be weapons, right?"

"Correct," the old elf nodded, hesitating a bit as he glanced at the pocketwatch and the bow slung on Jazdia's back "but Lista adh plume are more personal."

The ranger chuckled. "This one will do just fine."
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As a player, GMs ghosting is equally frustrating. Especially when they outright refuse to let another person step up and Co-GM. Had that happen once; GM hadn't been around. I asked about taking over in their stead, they denied, the RP ultimately died. Also once had a GM abandom her RP to take over another one and then, when asked for any notes/plot ideas she had had, her response was just "I don't care."


Eh, that was literally the entire process of why I stepped up to be the GM. Yeah GM abandoning the game is a real menace and just a waste of time.
As a DM, it's ghosting for me. I often deal with repeat customers (players) who eagerly jump in when I start a new thing, only to see them barely participating after one or two months playing. It is honestly annoying because I have allocated significant time and attention working with them to make their characters fit into the story, even tailoring some elements in the plot to cater to their characters' backgrounds.

And in the long run, it makes me restless; Maybe some new changes are needed? Maybe there was something in the narrative that they didn't like? And the worst part, it is hard to mend things when you have people completely gone from the radar, and you don't know why they are gone, and you can't ask them why.

It's understandable if things in real life prevent them from participating, but it becomes another if I see them online in my Discord server or returning once every two weeks to post memes without context. AT least keep us updated, a simple "sorry still busy this month" every once in a while would do just fine and take no more than 2 minutes of your time, or just withdraw from the RP altogether so I can focus on what is left, thought it's still annoying because I still have to deal with the marks that retiring character left, but at least it is better than having a character just idling in the middle of the road for the rest of the arc.


When Miwa arrived at the workshop, Vesemir was hovering above a round enchantment table, almost at an unsafe distance, looking closely at the glowing scroll reacting to a round basalt stone placed on a socket near it. Light flashed multiple times as the process was nearly finished, and runic words started to appear on the basalt's surface.

"Excuse-me, Mr. Vesemir. I am sorry to interrupt you but Arcan gave us some important information regarding the cursed rooms, the victims in the tunnels and the necromancer who seems to be responsible for both..." Miwa said, stopping at the entrance of the workshop and announcing her arrival before approaching Vesemir and telling him about what Arcan told them about the necromancer.

"Go on..." the archaeologist said, eyes still glued on the enchantment table.

"The necromancer seems to have made a lair for itself far from here, so it is not an immediate threat... Although I would like to express my desire to deal with it, either sooner or later. Allowing it to roam freely would not only be turning a blind eye to the suffering of the countless victims he made and the countless more in the future." Miwa said with a serious tone.

Vesemir waved his hand, eyes still monitoring the finalization occuring in that enchantment table. "Yes yes. I'll allow it. Please do---"

That until Jazdia grabbed him by his shoulders and yank him off the table to face Miwa. "Listen to her and Do it properly, will you!"

"Ow! Slow down, young lady! I heard her too you know. Ahem So, you managed to get something out of that Curator's eh? Well, a lich roaming around killing people do sounds bad," he paused, eyes briefly stole a glance on the finished item behind him. He looked at Wiwa again, this time with wide, accomplished smile across his face. "so any plan?"

"For now though, I would like to ask the permission to purify the cursed room left behind by the necromancer together with Fia. Besides being my duty as a Miko, I am sure we should be able to gain some important insight on how to deal with the necromancer's curses and powers, should we decide to face him later on."

"Simple, orderly. I like it! And I just have the right tool to aid you."

The smile on his face was almost obscene when he turned around to pick a newly-finished runestone and announced proudly: "Gather around, everyone, and show me your blades! We will make weapons that can kill a Lich King!"

Hoisted by Vesemir, the basalt runstone looked about the size of a palm. Appearance-wise, it's a bit unassuming, except for the runic words on its surface that emit a bluish glow.
@Raineh Daze I accept the wrongs and will see what I can do to mend it. Thank you very much for your evaluation. I will withdraw my character sheet for now.
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I'm happy to start brainstorming with what we have and if there needs to be any adjustments we can sort it out later.

Got any ideas so far?

Possibly YC knew MC's mother. They just went down different paths at some point.
YC could be the reason MC joins the guild. Gone for fresh copper rank.


Hmm, I just realized that your character has no name yet.

Looking at his backstory, I presume he is a runway, trying to escape from a resourceful father who wants to train him to be a sort of domon summoner against his will.

Jazdia could be a person his mother advised him to look for when things get seriously awry. We can work on the idea that your character's mom and Jazdia were old comrades. Maybe one of them owed the other a favor.

Another question would be on how elves and mankind's view on half-elf. Jazdia might be someone who doesn't give a damn, but such discrimination against the impure was not at all uncommon, looking at the other IPs.
Anyone interested in mingling backstories?


I am interested, but first I need to know some more details regarding the world.

Or we can just work with whatever we have now. How does that sound to you? Seems like we have enough things to work with simply because our characters' shared heritage
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