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Alright, i changed it back, although i kept the part with him working alongside Betty in finding a Cure. Also, i added my Sample-Post.

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Nightraider said
Just so you know, I'll concede my She-Hulk CS since I'm a newcomer. My main will be Deadpool and after the probation period (however long that is) I'll see about restarting her if no-one else has taken her up or I can fit it around the Hulks character.

I did say that i changed my Hulk CS to fit around your She-Hulk CS...

Warhammer 40K: Recovery in the Damocles Gulf.

((Alright, since most of you are gathered, i'm going to move on with this, just catch up if you need to.))

Walking out onto a long walkway above the hangar that they were gathered in, Viqtor looked around, Space Marines, Guardsmen, Sisters... The Assassin... This was going to be... interesting.

"Brothers, Sisters, Hammers of the Emperor, I have gathered you here for your mission briefing." he said. "As some of you may know, our former hive-world, Lorinos IV, located in the Damocles Gulf, was home to a giant Manufactorum. What you do not know is that during the construction of the manufactorum, drilling teams discovered a Warlord-class Titan, buried, we believe, during the Horus Heresy, dubbed Orphion. For a hundred years, our teams worked to get the Titan operational again. Then, during the Damocles Crusade, the filthy Xeno's destroyed the manufactorum, we believed that the Titan was lost with it... Until approximately 3 weeks ago, when we received a communication from a Tech-marine still alive inside of Orphion, claiming that repairs to the Titan are now complete..." he paused as thoughts of the Titan's magnificence flooded his mind "I... Doubt any of you have ever seen a Titan in action, but rest assured that it will go a long way to completing the Imperiums destiny." he then sighed.

"And now for the bad news... Unfortunately, after the Damocles Crusade, Ultimar-Command dictated that Lorinos IV was no longer of strategic value, and so, the colony was abandoned... By the Astartes, anyway. As such, the planet is under the control of the Tau Empire." there was a collective groan from some of the guardsmen. "What's even worse is that the Inquisition has deemed the aliens to be "Of strategic value" meaning that, we are not allowed to engage the Tau in open combat."

"What heresy is this? Suffer not, the alien to live. It is a most sacred rule." one of the Space Marines muttered, a little louder than he should have.

"Please, believe me when i say that, were my wishes fulfilled, we would have a fleet of ships and a battalion of the emperor's most holy servants to deal with this, unfortunately, it IS the orders of the Inquisition that we do not break our Non-Aggression Treaty with the Tau. As such, i have been instructed to inform you of this." he pulled a parchment of paper from his robes, and cleared his throat.

The High Inquisitor said "It is by the power vested in the Inquisition, that i grant permission to retrieve the Titan from Lorinos IV, but not at the cost of the Non-Aggression treaty with the Tau Empire, as, for the moment, they have been deemed a necessary evil to further the goals of the Imperium. Any member of the army that unlawfully fires upon, or otherwise engages a member of their Empire in combat, shall immediately be branded with the Excommunicate Traitoris stamp, for damaging and possibly delaying the destiny that the Immortal God Emperor has laid out for Humanity."

He finished and saw the angry faces bellow him. "I dislike this order as much as any of you, but it is our orders nonetheless, passed down from the High Inquisitor, who's words shall be honoured as though they were from the lips of the Omnissiah." he said. "Fortunately, for us, it appears as though one of the Hives of the world is under assault from the followers of Chaos and the false-gods, we shall crush them first, before retrieving the Titan, we cannot let their filthy heresy even so much as bask in the glory of the Titan. So they must be dealt with first. We are fortunate that those Heretics and Xeno's have no idea of the existence of the Titan. And i pray to the Omnissiah that it stays that way. Are there any questions?" he asked.

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DrewVonAwesome said
Rade's profile is making me feel like I shouldn't bother aiming for Spider-Man. His just makes it clear he knows exactly what to do with the character. Meanwhile I didn't have much planned, so I concede my Spider-Man profile, leaving my Iron Man profile there instead.

Look at the bright side, now you only have to focus on one character. It's better to do 1 character well, than a load of characters badly...

Warhammer 40K: Recovery in the Damocles Gulf.

Necrosis said
Name: Jenell CialellaAge: 102Chapter/Regiment: Officio Assassinorum (Callidus Assassin)Appearance: http://static1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111122164343/warhammer40k/images/7/71/Callidus_colour.jpgWargear: Synskin, Neural Shredder, C’tan phase sword, Frag grenades and PolymorphineHonour Guard/Squad: She is an assassin she works by herself.Bio: FORBIDDEN BY INQUISTORIAL DECREE...…INQUISTORIAL DECREE overridden by Inquisitor ViqtorSubject known as Jenell Cialella was born on the hive world Termanila III where she was part of a hive gang engage in a turf war. Subject attempted to give her hive gang an edge by stealing Adeptus Arbites weapons. Subject made used of several talents such as charming, bribing and pretending to get past Arbities and began to smuggle weapons. Actions would have gone unnoticed if not for the arrival of Inquisitor Vantius of the Ordo Hereticus. Inquisitor Vantius presence and gaze caught the subject by surprise and arrested her. Subject would have been executed by instead was tested to see if compatible with Poymorphine drug. Tests indicated that the subject was compatible and was transferred to Terra to begin Callidus Training by the Officio Assassinorum....…TRAINING CLASSIFIED: FORBIDDEN BY INQUISTORIAL DECREE...…INQUISITORIAL OVERRIDE PARTIAL SUCCESFULBefore the subject was mind wipe, subject was sent back to home world to eliminate subject previous hive gang and thus end all affiliations with it. Subject was given no equipment and thus acquired equipment by itself using skills taught. Subject acquired a long-las and elimanted Hive Gang leader. Subject then began to eliminate all other members one by one till nothing left of the gang remained. Subject was then mind wipe of her past life. Subject is now an active Calldius Assassin.Futher Information is FORBIDDEN BY INQUISTORIAL DECREE and required permissions from Ordo Sicarius.Extra: This character will be pretending to be someone. I will only tell the gm who I am and when I switch from one person to another person.

accepted.

WitchChild said
I thought you said non-xenos o.0?

This... Sorry...

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ErsatzEmperor said
The problem isn't the content - if none of us borrowed from the continuity then we'd have far different characters rolling around. It's the fact that you took a user of that wiki's work as your own.You've fixed it now as you've said but I'm not sure if I should accept you when it's finally accepting time. I don't feel that you have the right attitude for an advanced-level game.

I will admit, it has been a while since i was in an Advanced RP... The only long running Advanced RP i was in was on an old Star Trek forum that died back in 2009. All the rest of the Advanced RP's i was in died pretty quickly. But i am positive i can deliver in the IC.

Also, i editted my CS to fit with Raiders.

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Nightraider said Personally, I'm not going to try and change my characters story to fit yours if you've mostly copied yours from a wikia, regardless if it's what you wanted anyway. I'm not trying to sound like an asshole, but I put some effort into this, and while it may not be 100% unique, it is mostly all my own idea, with only references to in-universe characters from the wikia. Sorry Matt, but I'll leave mine as it is and let EE decide. If you win, power to you.

I didn't 100% copy my CS from the Wiki. I copied a paragraph about his early life, i said that he had a very similar upbringing to his comic counterpart. They shared a similar life, up until a certain point, after which, my Hulk went one way, and Stan's Hulk went another. That's it, what happens after that is completely my own idea's. And again, nobody at any point stated that, as a rule, we're not allowed to take liberties from the comics. That's like complaining about how Drew's Spider-Man lost his parents and was taken in by Uncle Ben and Aunt May. Of course we are going to take liberties from the stories, because those stories are good. We want to make characters that stay true to the mythos, whilst being completely our own, which, in my opinion, is exactly what a re-imagining should be.

Also, if you read my proposal, you would note that it doesn't involve changing your character to fit mine, it's changing my character to fit yours. I was just wondering if you were ok with this idea.

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Necrosis said
Question, did Arthus ever see or meet the God Emperor since he is 10,000 years old.

Chronologically, he is 10,000 years old, actually, it's closer to about 400, being that most of those 10,000 years were spent inside the Warp, where time and space have no meaning, much like the Infinite Improbability drive, you're never quite sure where, when, or even what species you will be, when you come out. I imagine he probably once set eyes upon the Emperor.

The Silent Type said
Quick question. Are we splitting up? I mean, are some of us going to be helping the Tau, and the rest of us helping recover the titan? Or are we all going together?

I already stated, we are headed down to the surface together, being that the rubble of the Manufactorum has been taken and used as a base for a local Ork WAAAGH!!! And the Tau have, thus far, failed to remove them completely. It's another reason why a shooting-match isn't going to break out with the Tau and Imperium, the Imperium are going to deal with their Ork problem.

We fly down together, have a little fun killing some Chaos, then we split into two groups, one protects their staging area and purge some heretics in the name of the Emperor, whilst the other recover the Titan, I'm also going to throw up a quick reference CS for the Chaos Lord, as well as the Ork Warboss.

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Alright, well, i read your profile, and i think i've come up with a way that we can both get what we want.

We say that Bruce and Betty were email-pals, talking and consulting on their idea's over the internet, but never meeting. After Thaddeus heard about what happened to Betty, about how much raw power could be put into one human, he commissioned Bruce to try and recreate that in someone else (Only, you know, not telling him about the uncontrolable rage monster part, saying that the process can create a super-soldier, like Captain America.) Of course, recreating those exact same circumstances was impossible, which is why his Hulk form is grey. Later on, after a few story arcs (No suspense if they meet straight away) when they meet, he takes a sample of her DNA and uses it to stabilize his uncontrollable Grey Hulk, into the ever so slightly more reasonable Green Hulk.

And, like in the movie, they stay in contact with each other via internet, Mrs Green and Mr Grey.

Gowi said
Should we really be talking about second characters for new players to the game, anyway? Shouldn't there be a probationary status immediately like Andy instilled formerly? On that note: if a wiki is "note for note" of the character you are doing and you can't write it in your own words then that's a warning sign from the beginning and shows a lack of creativity which is the opposite of what this game is about.

Not a lack of creativity, laziness... I'm not helping my situation am I?

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Maxxorlord said
Woots.Oh, and I'd like my Termies to go with the Techpriest to retrieve the Titan. They probably couldn't handle working with Tau, and would 'accidentally' shoot some of them in the back..Or all of them..

They wouldn't... Or at least, they wouldn't after the speech Viqtor's gonna give.