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"Move out of MY WAY!"
A loud voice called from inside the cramped chicken coop as the door was kicked open with a huge clank. A swam of feathers and loud squawking could be heard as the girl walked out with a big bag of chicken feed overflowing in her arms. Slamming it down in the corner with a big huff, she squatted down working at the ties that held the bag closed. The chickens flocked to her looking up to her with hungry intentions. Some of the smaller chicks peeped happily, wanting breakfast.
Despite the overload of cuteness, Vivienne had been having a rough day that morning. Her mother; Eva had been exceptionally bossy today and the short fuse between the mother and daughter had been lit several times since sunrise that day. It didn't help that her father had taken her mother's side with everything, at least that what it seemed like. The man didn't have many words to say, and if you got more than a "Ehyup" or a stern grunt from him, you were probably dreaming.
As the chickens calmed down the young girl came into better view. She was petite, short and fairly muscular; but with womanly curves she had gained from her mother's good home cooking. Her short overalls with some working boots seemed appropriate to work in, but she wanted to make sure that she didn't look too bad as she had other errands that day, like meeting and greeting the new farm boy that had came into the town. The back of her head was plastered with long maroon hair. It was long and disheveled under a over sized straw hat. The boy hadn't even been spotted yet in Vivienne's mind. She was just ready to get this bag open and feed her prized possession; the chickens.
Finally getting a handful of seeds in her possession she stood up and turned around threw them, spreading them out in the small yard. "Here you go! Eat up! " she cooed, finally spotting the boy who was standing in the road watching her. "Hey!" Vivienne yelled, her hand on her hip as she gazed with her big green eyes at the boy. "You happen to be that new farm boy everybody talking about?"
A loud voice called from inside the cramped chicken coop as the door was kicked open with a huge clank. A swam of feathers and loud squawking could be heard as the girl walked out with a big bag of chicken feed overflowing in her arms. Slamming it down in the corner with a big huff, she squatted down working at the ties that held the bag closed. The chickens flocked to her looking up to her with hungry intentions. Some of the smaller chicks peeped happily, wanting breakfast.
Despite the overload of cuteness, Vivienne had been having a rough day that morning. Her mother; Eva had been exceptionally bossy today and the short fuse between the mother and daughter had been lit several times since sunrise that day. It didn't help that her father had taken her mother's side with everything, at least that what it seemed like. The man didn't have many words to say, and if you got more than a "Ehyup" or a stern grunt from him, you were probably dreaming.
As the chickens calmed down the young girl came into better view. She was petite, short and fairly muscular; but with womanly curves she had gained from her mother's good home cooking. Her short overalls with some working boots seemed appropriate to work in, but she wanted to make sure that she didn't look too bad as she had other errands that day, like meeting and greeting the new farm boy that had came into the town. The back of her head was plastered with long maroon hair. It was long and disheveled under a over sized straw hat. The boy hadn't even been spotted yet in Vivienne's mind. She was just ready to get this bag open and feed her prized possession; the chickens.
Finally getting a handful of seeds in her possession she stood up and turned around threw them, spreading them out in the small yard. "Here you go! Eat up! " she cooed, finally spotting the boy who was standing in the road watching her. "Hey!" Vivienne yelled, her hand on her hip as she gazed with her big green eyes at the boy. "You happen to be that new farm boy everybody talking about?"
DemntedGrin said -snip-
I'm in love.
Accepted!
KiraTheRogue said
Cherry Inn sounds fine (it is her middle name)
Yep (: I thought it'd be cute- like your character's mother named if after her daughter when she got it.
KiraTheRogue said
Sweet, I kind of thought it was a little dark
Hehe- just a little bit :P
But it's okay! I like dark back stories sometime. Just a little too much this setting of RP.
I'm naming your Inn on the map as "Cherry Inn" unless you'd like it to be named anything else? (:
KiraTheRogue said
Did it get any better
Looks great now (: Thanks for that Kira. You're accepted!
KiraTheRogue said -snip-
Hey there! Nice character so far; but I have a few things that if you can change- would make it even better!
1) Are you familiar with the Harvest Moon type of life style? If not, I'd take a few minutes to kind of look over some things about it. Though your back story is good; it's a bit TOO dark- and doesn't fit the real feel that we are going with this role play. I'd recommend picking one thing out of your several if it really needs it in your history- if not; if you can lighten it up we'd appreciate it! (If you need help or more guide lines on what I mean, just ask)
2) I know we all make mistakes with spelling and grammar but you have several that are very noticeable.
Thanks! Fix those things and then we can go from there.
Name: Vivienne Peck
Gender: Female
Birthday: Summer 2
Age: 17
Role: Chicken Farmer
Likes: Chickens. Sweets. Adventures. Being Outside. Swimming. Napping.
Dislikes: Eggs. Bugs. Bossy People. Waking Up Early. Tomatoes. Winter.
Living Location: Peck Ranch.
Personality: Witty. Hard Working. Adventurous. Caring. Family Oriented. Spunky. Curious.
Story: The Peck family had been in this town for as long as anyone could remember. Antonio's late father had established a Ranch up near the base of the mountains for people to trade and buy livestock as they pleased. At his passing, Antonio took the business into his own hands with the help of his stern but generous wife; Eva. It was hard the first few years, but once Antonio got the hang of things business couldn't be better and the Peck family couldn't be happier. At least that is what everyone in town thought. Behind closed doors, the two desperately wanted a child, year after year they prayed to the Goddess to bring them a child. But their prayers were not answered.
Finally Antonio traveled to the Goddess with his finest chicken, his finest cow, and his finest horse. Offering the Goddess these gifts, he asked once more for her to bless them with a child. One year later, the wish had came true, and into the world came Vivienne. Vivienne Peck. Granted, they really wanted a boy, but a little girl would have to do.
Years went by as the girl grew, learning everything there was to know about the farm, being a lady (though she sometimes doesn't always enjoy those things), and just appreciating the land. Vivi's father and mother had raised her well, and she began her own little business running a chicken farm down the road from her parents. There she collected and sold eggs to the people in town, raking in quite the profit for herself here and there. Mostly she just enjoyed the idea of having something to do, mostly. For now Vivienne just lives day to day, hoping someone will come along and bring some adventure into her life.
Gender: Female
Birthday: Summer 2
Age: 17
Role: Chicken Farmer
Likes: Chickens. Sweets. Adventures. Being Outside. Swimming. Napping.
Dislikes: Eggs. Bugs. Bossy People. Waking Up Early. Tomatoes. Winter.
Living Location: Peck Ranch.
Personality: Witty. Hard Working. Adventurous. Caring. Family Oriented. Spunky. Curious.
Story: The Peck family had been in this town for as long as anyone could remember. Antonio's late father had established a Ranch up near the base of the mountains for people to trade and buy livestock as they pleased. At his passing, Antonio took the business into his own hands with the help of his stern but generous wife; Eva. It was hard the first few years, but once Antonio got the hang of things business couldn't be better and the Peck family couldn't be happier. At least that is what everyone in town thought. Behind closed doors, the two desperately wanted a child, year after year they prayed to the Goddess to bring them a child. But their prayers were not answered.
Finally Antonio traveled to the Goddess with his finest chicken, his finest cow, and his finest horse. Offering the Goddess these gifts, he asked once more for her to bless them with a child. One year later, the wish had came true, and into the world came Vivienne. Vivienne Peck. Granted, they really wanted a boy, but a little girl would have to do.
Years went by as the girl grew, learning everything there was to know about the farm, being a lady (though she sometimes doesn't always enjoy those things), and just appreciating the land. Vivi's father and mother had raised her well, and she began her own little business running a chicken farm down the road from her parents. There she collected and sold eggs to the people in town, raking in quite the profit for herself here and there. Mostly she just enjoyed the idea of having something to do, mostly. For now Vivienne just lives day to day, hoping someone will come along and bring some adventure into her life.
Name: Vivienne Peck
Gender: Female
Birthday: Summer 2
Age: 17
Role: Chicken Farmer
Likes: Chickens. Sweets. Adventures. Being Outside. Swimming. Napping.
Dislikes: Eggs. Bugs. Bossy People. Waking Up Early. Tomatoes. Winter.
Living Location: Peck Ranch.
Personality: Witty. Hard Working. Adventurous. Caring. Family Oriented. Spunky. Curious.
Story: The Peck family had been in this town for as long as anyone could remember. Antonio's late father had established a Ranch up near the base of the mountains for people to trade and buy livestock as they pleased. At his passing, Antonio took the business into his own hands with the help of his stern but generous wife; Eva. It was hard the first few years, but once Antonio got the hang of things business couldn't be better and the Peck family couldn't be happier. At least that is what everyone in town thought. Behind closed doors, the two desperately wanted a child, year after year they prayed to the Goddess to bring them a child. But their prayers were not answered.
Finally Antonio traveled to the Goddess with his finest chicken, his finest cow, and his finest horse. Offering the Goddess these gifts, he asked once more for her to bless them with a child. One year later, the wish had came true, and into the world came Vivienne. Vivienne Peck. Granted, they really wanted a boy, but a little girl would have to do.
Years went by as the girl grew, learning everything there was to know about the farm, being a lady (though she sometimes doesn't always enjoy those things), and just appreciating the land. Vivi's father and mother had raised her well, and she began her own little business running a chicken farm down the road from her parents. There she collected and sold eggs to the people in town, raking in quite the profit for herself here and there. Mostly she just enjoyed the idea of having something to do, mostly. For now Vivienne just lives day to day, hoping someone will come along and bring some adventure into her life.
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