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knight125 said
I'm just trying to make Anthony more believable as a character, and also give him a bit more personality. I feel like I tend to ignore the fact that he's human, and treat him more like a machine.


He was pretty stereotypical at the start, but having him fall in love with Sue helped bunches to pad out his personality. His 'mentorship' of Kijani (while I have yet to discover the depth of it) also helps, because in his mind, he really is trying to help her.
Avanhelsing said
It makes you forget he most likely has plans to kill everyone he deems a threat! Anthony scares me even more than Devika. I'm sorry Dizzy but it's true.


THe thing is-- I don't know if it's that simple. Anthony would likely kill if he really, really had to. But he's smart enough to know that killing requires planning, you have to worry about people wondering where the person went, where to hide the body, avoiding investigations and suspicion...

So yes, he could kill someone. But only as a last resort. And even so, he'd hire someone and never have his name involved.

....I realize I just made myself sound like a budding murderer. I'll be over here, thanks.

*sits in the corner*
Kijani dialed up Ben's number, calmly folding up a paper star while it rang. Once he picked up, she spoke. "Evening. Mr. Luthor requests that you give me a ride to the event tonight." She touched the tip of the star with her finger, making sure it was sharp. "Where can I meet you?"
*laughs* Tough, cool headed guy comes home to play with his cats.

It sounds so innocent when you say it that way.
My aunt got to name me... I'm lucky the whole 'JR' thing isn't a female tradition.

Anyway-- How is Kijani going to know Ben's number or how to reach him?

Can we retcon and say they exchanged cell phone numbers?
Avanhelsing said
You know you are right. IGNORE DESCRIPTION Sadly I am a carbon copy of my dad... Fun Fun Fun.Edit. I changed his hair color and height. According to the Marvel database Captain America is only 6'2". Sort of odd...


*pats back* I've been called a 'clone' of my mother. No one realizes how demeaning that is.
Why not make him look different than his dad, Avan? Not all kids are magical carbon copies of one parent or another.
I posted.
After classes, Kijani headed straight home. She took a quick shower to clear her mind, and started preparing her weapons. Her sword was shined and ready to go. She'd spent free time in the past testing various types and weights of paper, and unpacked the different strengths that she may need. These were tucked neatly into a tidy looking portfolio, full of what looked like reports and research. Once she was done with all of that, she called Anthony.
I don't blame you.
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