Mistress Dizzy

Academy of Heroes and Villains

Eviledd1984 said
Sorry it would be the first one shit sorry...

Don't worry about it. Writing takes practice. Don't feel like you have to rush through the post. Take your time and think about what you want to say, and how you want it said. It helps to say certain lines out loud (even though other people may look at you weird).You'll get a sense of where punctuation should go by listening to where you naturally pause. Those pauses are usually commas.

Academy of Heroes and Villains

(Reposting this from a few days back for Evil Edd)

"I am Nicholas Crane...." He said with a blank look on her face his eyes now on his textbook causally flipping though pages."So...what is your power a dangerous one if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.

*can't remember Nick's player for the life of her* You, the guy with the creepy-ass clown picture..

I'm having trouble understanding your post. Punctuation is key. I can take his sentence many ways, all with difference cadences.

"So...what? Is your power a dangerous one, if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.

"So...what is your power? A dangerous one if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.

"So...what is your power? A dangerous one- if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.

Do you see what I mean? Just by switching around the punctuation, I'm getting three different versions of the same string of words. Is he curious, is he cautious, is he wary?

Help me out, please, because I have got literally nothing to go on here.

Academy of Heroes and Villains

I'm scattered too. Health problems. I'm gonna go to bed, though. >< G'night all and sundry.

Academy of Heroes and Villains

So I was thinking that us 4 Co-GM people should call ourselves the Mod Squad...

It was like 4am when I was thinking this..

The Lost Lands of Ialdia: A paired high fantasy RP

Mm... I've been sick so I apologize for the delay. I'm still sick, but trying to push through. I'm trying to post something to the titanpad right now. But it's not cooperating, we will see how it goes.

Edit: I put up some stuff... Emmeric and Dev are in the same place.

Dev is about 5'8, solidly built, olive skin that goes more toward green than brown, a lot of messy black curls, and... well, she's part orc, take that as you will.

*passes out* >_<

Academy of Heroes and Villains

Hiya!

Two things: You didn't list any powers for Hannah. This is a superhero school, but even if she doesn't have any powers, maybe give her an inherited skill or two?

Also, we have a player who RPs as the son of Deadpool. You'd either have to clear it with him for his character to have a half sister, or choose another character.

Academy of Heroes and Villains

What Kylix said. It's been like... what, 2 days in game? So he'd probably be worried, but not freaking out entirely... then again, maybe he would? *shrug*

The Orphan's Wedding

*grins* Well spoken, all of it. There is no love without respect and understanding.

EDIT: Rest well! Also check your Skype.. It says you're on, but you're not responding. Unless that's deliberate, in which case, nevermind.

The Orphan's Wedding

Not sure if what Kijani's doing is 'too much'...

But Victor really has already treated her with more genuine kindness than anyone else she's ever met. That's already made a huge impression on her. I don't think she's attracted to him physically (yet) but she does like his... I dunno, his honesty.

The Orphan's Wedding

Not sure if what Kijani's doing is 'too much'...

But Victor really has already treated her with more genuine kindness than anyone else she's ever met. That's already made a huge impression on her. I don't think she's attracted to him physically (yet) but she does like his... I dunno, his honesty.