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No problem. I hope we can finish soon, I've been fighting a headache all day for some reason. Possibly too much screen time.

Also, I love John's dreams. Women, money and motorcycles.

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Revans Exile said
"Quite stubborn this one. Why won't he give up? Does he need to breathe? Too bad if he does." She as she put up with his struggles to get free.The bolded section is all the indication needed.

I'm just saying, there would be zero question if the two were more easily discernible from each other. *Shrug* But it's your post. I'm not trying to write it for you, I'm trying to prevent having to continually have you clarify things.

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You may want to indicate that in the writing. You're making them look the same, and I had to reread several times to try and distinguish the two. Either losing the quotation marks for thoughts or italicizing, or even using dashes to visually separate thinking from speech would save a great deal of confusion and time.

Haha. I sound like one of my old professors... I guess I did learn something.

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Hey Revan! Is Cyber speaking aloud when talking about both the kid with the unconscious mom, and Girder needing to breathe? Because you wrote that she thought these things, but you indicated by the use of quotation marks that she's speaking out loud.

So... which is it?

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Kalinda and Gretchen need to have this fight.

Journey of a Thousand Miles

The girl blinked, unsure, as Tobias said that people were wrong. She really didn't know what to say to that. Everyone treated her that way. Everyone except the Professor from today- and Tobias. Were they just the ones that were weird? Or was it the city that was wrong?

Her dark, confused gaze picked back up to him. "My name? Oh." She stalled, as if having to pull it up from her memory. Honestly, the only one she had to talk to was Luna. Since Luna had never had occasion to say her name, it was something she had to think to remember. "...It's Jinayah." The name sounded strange coming out of her own mouth. "You can call me Jin, if you feel like."

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Does anyone else get this sociopath vibe from Gretchen?

I mean, even Anthony doesn't creep me out this much.

Drifting (A comedy Science Fiction)

Kijani raised her eyebrows as Warden started banging on keys. "Ah, Warden... please don't do that. We don't know what that will do, the ship could break." She kept a benevolent smile on her face as she gently lifted Warden up. "Looks like you need something to do." She frowned, patting down her suit pockets, before she palmed something and crouched. "...want to see a fun trick, Warden?" She held out her hand in a closed fist, the one that wasn't wrapped by vines.

Jason's words reached her ears, though, and her gaze flicked toward the consoles. "What do you mean, the AI went rogue?" She hated the concept of AI for that reason- she didn't like anything that was able to outsmart her. Didn't people understand that they could easily create something that would spiral out of control? Honestly... the book collection she had at home had just as much information, and couldn't threaten her life in the process.

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Endrance said
is everyone ignoring sirensongs post?

I'm not- Jin mentioned seeing her earlier and now seeing her again. It's just that Fenrir is stealing the attention right now. I mean, you can't not look at a werewolf.

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*dying of laughter* She's messing with his head! I really don't think he's her type... I mean, she thinks she wants someone elegant and sophisticated, but truthfully if she met someone like her they'd just fight all the time and be constantly one-upping each other.

Honestly, I think Kijani will eventually see Anthony more like an older brother she loves to hate.

Also-- I was afraid for a bit back there, Knight, that you'd made good on the 'Robot Sue' idea.