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I have gathered feedback. - I will remove the Background. - I will remove the Known Abilities. - I will edit the Semblance so that it does not pass through Auras. - Add in a Weaknesses section, as Yukihisa does have very glaring flaws such as mocking those who praise him and ignoring the advice of those other than his teammates (he considers getting along with his teammates as a mission rather than a social bond), which is something that can be explored later. He also has glaring weaknesses such as having little resistance against weapons that do not utilize Dust and flying Grimm monsters. - I will clarify how Arbiter's semblance works. Masamune actually doesn't physically cut anything when Arbiter is activated. When it strikes anything with the single attack, it will detect whether the target is organic or not first. If the target is not organic, whether or not the sword passes through the object is up to the object's durability. If the target is organic, it will deliver a huge shock into their nerves sent to their brain no matter where he hits them. My English is limited, so I didn't notice that I put in some misleading description for Arbiter. - Yukihisa is supposed to be an absolute -sshole to those who do not live up to his expectations or those who cannot protect themselves, as seen in his Background (which will soon be deleted). No matter how much he protects a certain person, he will insult them in some form. I will clarify how huge this influences his thoughts and emotions, as he's not supposed to understand everyone- let alone, anyone. Also, I am sorry if I have made a bad impression on anybody here. I did expect for me to have trouble in fitting into this environment after looking past the first Volume of the roleplay (as well as the second one). If it makes you feel comfortable, I can step out and cancel my Waiting List position. Until then, I will continue to fix the CS.

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. . .EDIT 2: Pardon me for asking, but what on Earth is a digimon?

@NarayanK

[SCREAMS INTERNALLY]

@harinezumikouken

oops

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NK-Pop

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NK rifle

@chukklehed

NK-47

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NK, forgive her

@chukklehed

@liferusher I will now eternally hate you for replying to me in 4 minutes.

@NarayanK

-eyes slowly begin to tear up- -squats down covering head with both hands- -cries in corner-

@liferusher

fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine i wont hate you because you prevented me from expanding dong replied to me within 4 minutes

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@liferusher I will now eternally hate you for replying to me in 4 minutes.

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If no one replies to me in ten minutes, I will expand dong in a way no one has seen before.

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Arbiter is extremely predictable, both visually and technically (Visual Predictability: the sword begins to alternate between colors instead of remaining red). The only unpredictable thing about its activated form is when Yukihisa decides to use it; other than that, anyone can see it coming. That's also why Yukihisa doesn't use it that much, despite its high potential.

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Speaking of cities, I downloaded Sim City 4 -spams money cheats over and over again-

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Autohit semblance. Wonderfull...... And what is he with the named attacks, a digimon? XD

@Forsythe

Not really an autohit semblence. The description of "strike through anything" basically means that he could attack anything as long as his sword could reach it, and as long as he could move quickly enough to reach it. He still needs to aim since if he messes up, it could end a battle with his loss. The named attacks are Japanese translations of existing words, but if you'd like, I could remove them. I placed Abilities so that others would feel clarified on how he would fight. EDIT: To clarify, his "heightened nervous system" basically means that he could react a little faster than some people, but that does not mean he could move as quickly as his nerves sense things. That, too, does not resemble an "auto-target" semblence, as that is precisely what I avoided while making Yukihisa's CS. EDIT 2: Pardon me for asking, but what on Earth is a digimon? EDIT 3: Edited the Background portion of the character because I felt there were some pointless tidbits on it.