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4 yrs ago
Current Today I reached the conclusion that, if presented with an exact duplicate of herself, one of my characters would DEFINITELY hit that.
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4 yrs ago
They're not LONG chapters; but the fact I've managed to right 2 meh and 4 half decent ones in 4 days makes me very happy with myself.
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4 yrs ago
Wow, I just realized it's been a full year since the Avadon incident.
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4 yrs ago
Decided to half-ass nanowrimo by doing a RWBY OC fanfic I've been thniking about for ages. The fight scene I'm working on rn just feels.... right.
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5 yrs ago
According to the scale i just weighed in on I'm down to 313 from a starting point of 330 when i started going to the gym a little ovver a month ago
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I've got a minor case of dyslexia so when i try to read walls the letters start dancing and my head starts spinning. I did manage to program an auto-correct into my brain using a weird trick my mom picked up somewhere, but it can only course correct so much before shorting out.
@Burger@Lotrix Molick

Forgive me if I'm stepping out of line, but would it be rude of me to request that some more line breaks be added to that character sheet?

I'm struggling to read it due to the wall-ish-ness of the formatting.
A particularly dour man in scavenger’s rags sat on the couch, a dismantled magnetic rifle laid out in the table in front of him as he cleaned and repaired the weapon. Asche looked up from his rifle, watching with an expression of morbid curiosity as Magpie returned to the safe house. At that moment, he decided staying in to repair his rifle rather than going on patrol was the right call. "Trouble, smells like"

The former EDENPOL officer began to re-assemble the magnetic rifle as he listened in on the conversation between Cider and Mags, “Going to be a mission, looks like. Finally.” the black-eyed contractor observed; rising from his seat and slinging the rifle across his broad shoulders as soon as he finished restoring it. Asche took a moment to adjust the bandages on his arms, tightening them and making sure they were secured properly. While not a debilitating weakness, exposing the corruption to the light ached horribly and he couldn’t afford distractions while in the field.

As soon as Magpie and Cider parted ways Asche approached his liaison, his heavy boots thudding against the safehouse floor,“What do we know about this thing, other than it being really bad at dying?” he asked plainly, glancing towards the bathroom, “Though I suppose I should ask Magpie about that.” out of the corner of his eye, he spotted another of the contractors doing just that, "Or I can ask him on the ride over."

Of course even knowing exactly what sort of being they were being sent out to eliminate wouldn’t do Asche much good; his power was ill-suited for direct combat, and if bullets didn’t hurt it his main weapon was dead weight. “Could stab, might not work. Arms ripped off, didn’t kill it.” The large man shook his head; now wasn’t the time for doubts. It was the time for action. “Anyways, ready to depart as soon as the group is suited up. Don’t know the area so I’ll be tagging along the old fashioned way.”
Yeesh, long posts are long. Now I'm staring at my partial post trying to figure out how to make it longer.

Meh, I don't have any long conversations or flashbacks to get out of the way at the moment so should be fine.
@Burger

...who is Worm? You didn't post a sheet for a character named Worm. I mean I assume it's the person you described drinking alone, but as far as I can tell that's all we've got to go on.
I'll try to get my post out by monday, it's getting late over here and i've got a busy day tomorrow.
@KatherinWinter Rost put the scenario together, not Argus. Argus isn't that great with technology so he asked the professional nerd to do it.

Also the map is displayed on a screen, it's not a physical paper one.
I ended up ditching a rather substantial backstory draft and rewriting a much shorter version. Less detail in backstory means more roleplaying opportunity.

Or something.
@Concept@Tojin
That's basically creating your story outline/roadmap; establishing a sequence of events. After that, you pretty it up a bit and fill in the gaps.
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