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5 mos ago
Current i'm not sure the appropriate use of an OLED TV is to play random scenic train videos but here we are
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7 mos ago
swish
8 mos ago
Being truly on my own is a bit of a weird feeling. It's never really happened.
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9 mos ago
Let it never be said that sometimes extreme brevity isn't the most appropriate post, though. Everything is a tool.
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11 mos ago
a loaf is a surprisingly hard thing to make
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<Snipped quote by Raineh Daze> Causality will ensure it gets back to Guts. Also, she's trying to return his trinket. That's a reason to interact.
... it's Hanako. Generic looking Japanese guy tries to talk to her, she bolts immediately. I cannot see her approaching Guts, seeing as he's large, muscled, a foreigner, and generally terrifying. :P
<Snipped quote by Raineh Daze> Casuality. A Behelit always returns to its user, by manipulating probability. Griffith's got lost in a sewer for a year, then he found it in a riverbed. If Guts loses his, he'll get it back some way or another. This is covered in the manga.
A) Causality B) Knew that, read it C) The point's more 'how it's going to get from Hanako to Guts'. Because there's no reason either of them would interact. O_o
Sitting here wondering how Guts is going to get it off of the person in school least likely to approach him, given how she is with people.
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"A-Ah, Teri Eriksdottir," the nem replied, shrinking back even more at all the strangers, retreating further to where her enormous hammer was resting against a tree and scooping the heavy implement up without so much as a hint of strain. There was no indication of any real intent to fight, however; from the way she was holding it, the weapon was simply being used for reassurance, "H-Help yourself..." Now that she wasn't hidden behind the boar, it was easy to see the irony in the dwarf's statement that they weren't barbarians: if there was one person here who could definitely claim to be one, it was the girl staring in wide-eyed terror at the sheer number of people. Wolf pelt, minimal clothing, and no shoes from where they'd fallen apart on the journey here. It was strange to see someone so intimidated when everything about them--from the way they so easily lifted their weapon to the obviously defeated boar roasting unattended--suggested that she was quite capable of handling herself.
Sumable, you need to edit your post. You advanced way ahead and basically decided everything that happens by yourself.
Lucas was separated by a group of people going out and then another group coming in, so Lucas shouldn't be influencing anything that's happening to the group because he's not a part of it. I think in your post, it says something about 'when we arrived', so I thought that we could continue.
Might be an issue with your basically writing yourself out of literally any interaction that happens in the rest of the group.
Advice on how to better describe a character like Nono other than 'the pale white woman with pink hair', or Saber as 'The pale white woman with purple hair'? I can't use their names since Lucas has never met any of them, and unless the characters keep only those clothes on at all times, which is unhygienic, I can't use said clothes to describe them.
Well, Saber's blonde, for a start.
"A-Ah," Teri mumbled, eyes going wide as she saw the group that had arrived, lead by a purple-haired girl in a dress. There were so many of them, and they were all so big and strangely dressed and dangerous-looking. So she did the completely rational thing and hid behind the food she'd been cooking, apparently trusting the smell of roasting meat to protect her from the strangers. "Dinner?"
Very edge of sapience, though. ... Samus showed up and then left without talking to anyone? That's a little awkward.
What's wrong with insanely big elevators? Where else do you get to listen to elevator music and consider what you're going to do on arrival at the appropriate floor?
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