RoseNightfall

A Little Shade Of Gray

I like how tender Devin is with her, even when he is mad. I think it is safe to say that I like any moments when Devin and Avina are talking just the two of them. I am thinking of creating a reason behind why they connected so easily and quickly. Not sure where I want to take though, other then just give a reason that somehow contributes to the plot.

I think I am just going to drop my other two wolves. I will use them like true side characters, come when they need to and mentioned only once in a while. What do you think?

Of Life, Love, and Death

The garlic stung her nose and kept most of her other senses from working as well. Perhaps a smell can truly block out all senses. Avina watched Devin’s back as he was unlocking the door, she wanted to reach out and run her fingers over his muscle, and her arm lifted as if on its own accord. For a moment her fingertips hovered half an inch from his body before her hand dropped back to her side. After all she had not gained his trust back yet. “My elder, the Marrok, is the leader of the leaders. He is my alpha. In the way that I can control the pack, and in the way I can make them do anything I say, in the same way he can do to me. If he finds us, he could order me to kill you and I would or I would die trying.” She took a deep breath and ran it through her hair. “He is on his way now. He should arrive sometime around dawn, but he will stop by my pack first, and then sniff me out.” Though she tried to stop it, the fear crept into her voice. She took a steadying breath and ran her hand over her face. If the Marrok found them, she had no doubt he would make her kill Devin. Just the thought of it made her chest ache in a way it had not in centuries.

With a sigh, Avina got ready to fight him out in the field. This fight would be a good way to blow off some steam. As the fight started, he pinned her to the ground but she quickly threw him off her back even though the touch of his cool fingers sent shivers down her spine. Back on her feet, with her back to the house, she tried to anticipate his moves but he changed his direction three times before he reached her. Her back slammed into the tree and she slid to the ground with a whimper, she could feel a few bones knitting back into place already. However, his taunting turned her whimper into a growl. She was an alpha, and it was time to let her Wolf take control completely. Avina knew that her Wolf would not hurt Devin, she could completely let go and would not have to worry about his safety. It was a wonderful feeling of being able to let go completely.

Quickly, Avina stood up and gave into her formation completely. It is your turn, sister. Let us show him our strength. Avina gave her control completely over to her wolf that she usually kept so tied down. She Wolf shook her body, shaking of the change and let out a growl that was expressed joy more than it warning. It felt good to be released. Wolf looked at her opponent with black, calculating eyes. He was faster, but she was stronger. Her eye sight would do her no good, she was going to have to rely on her instincts and intuition. With a wolfish smile, she hunch low to the ground and her tail wagged. Muscles coiled then sprung as She Wolf launched towards the vampire, her jaw aimed for his neck.

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You and me both! I really wanted to go edit them a few times. I found that more then spelling mistake, I made errors that did not make sense. Such as repeating words, and unclear sentences. xD Oh-well, we don't rp to be perfectionist, we do it to have fun!

I love the fight in the woods! I love how it ended too. ^.^

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Nope! Lol. I'm thinking of moving all the characters over and leaving my first post blank. What do you think? Or maybe put her background there...

Yay! ^.^

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I didn't make it. I found it. :) it is the same one as before I just went through my posts until I found it.

Are you enjoying the read?

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It isn't a bad read. ^.^ I skimmed over the parts I remembered, read the parts I didn't and the parts I really enjoyed. Lol

Of Life, Love, and Death

MAIN CHARACTER


Name: Avina
Age: 467
Species: Werewolf
Status: Alpha

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SIDE CHARACTERS




Name: Unknown
Title: Marrok
Age: Unknown
Species: Werewolf




Name: Kiel
Age: 469
Spices: Werewolf




Name: Brice
Age: 381
Species: Werewolf




Name: Jessie
Age:18
Species: Werewolf

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Not at all! I look farther then just the next post too, like where I want the story to go and how I can steer it in that direction.

Hehe! Guilty as charged! It overwhelmed me back then because I did not have near the free time. With college, student teaching, roommates, and a boyfriend. It seemed like I had no time to give. Not to mention we had two characters in one story, and three in the other. There was a lot going on in the stories too. Now I am substituting and my husband is gone usually one day on the weekend and two or three nights during the week. I have more free time then I really want. xD

I would really enjoy picking it back up. I actually have a few ideas for plot twists ^.^

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No, not weird at all. My mind lives in my stories 90% of the time. I am constantly thinking about what my character would do in my situation, or putting them into what I foresee happening in their story. It keeps me from being bored at work sometimes!

I was missing them after I reread the story. I was secretly hoping that if you read the reply, you would want to respond. If we wanted, we could restart the story. Pick-up from where we left off. Though I still want to keep this story going too!

I have never been in a successful group role-play. Truly, I think 1x1 is where I belong!

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I am still unsure how Adam is going to soften towards her, but I think if anyone was going to pull his soft side out it would be Ciara. Part of the reason I do not like writing out personality on a character sheet, especially a detailed personality description, is because my characters always take their own personality, and it tends to move away from the original description.

I can most certainly PM it to you! I might tweak it a bit, but I will send it here shortly.

Yeah, that is a pain in the butt. Or you are interacting with one character and they don't reply for a while and everyone else is moving on. You just become stuck as the story line moves along.