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In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I'm really not sure what advice I can give... When I play my males I try to think of how a guy would act. And when I do my bad boys I have to figure out why they are the way they are before I can get their personality. I use personality traits of guys that I know, males for tv and males from books to influence my writing. I don't think that really helps. I don't know how I do my guys really. :(

While I like Ariel, I cannot say I am in love with her. I do not much care for the way she has turned out to be while, quiet and almost needy... It was not what I had pictured for her but it's the way she turned out some how. I want to changed her personality but I'm not sure how.

I'd say let's let things be until we figure out how we want to direct hook and Ariel. I have an idea but it's kind of silly and troublesome. We could just start Hook and Ariel over, maybe even swap character...

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

We do have a lot going for Ariel and Hook in the future. Probably more than we have for Belle and Rumpel at this point. However, it is the present moment that I am more concerned with. They are on the fast track to going out to eat. if I am remembering currently. I am not saying that I do not want them to get to know each other, or that going out to eat it bad, I am saying it is kind of boring.

Let's also put it this way; I am really, really excited to write Rumpel's story. I think about what I want to say, and the possible directions it can go in this next post and I can't wait to reply. However, I feel kind of... eh? when I think of replying with Ariel.

Does that make sense or am I just rattling on? I am sharing my honest thoughts, not trying to be annoying or anything. I just think that Hook and Ariel need a little present moment spicing up.

Not sure if it would help or hinder, but I did make it really obvious that Ariel is a mermaid as well. If you want Hook to realize it now, you can. I do not want to have to force you to make Hook look dump just to add drama in later. ^.^

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I want them to get to know each other too, but I just don't want them to become boring. If you know what I mean.

I think we would enjoy their story and interaction more if it was a bit more strained, action field and dark.

It's here that I get more into liking the darker side of story telling. I get bored when things are going smoothly and happy and lovey dovey. I'm much more a fan of strained, dangerous, forbidden, ect.

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

They are very strong! But I think that is what will make them a good couple. ^.^

Possibly. Do we need to start thinking of something to throw at hook and Ariel?

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I'm in the centeral time zone. :)

I don't know. But my boyfriend is gonna look at it this weekend.

I think seeing them warm up to each other will be fun! I can't wait. ^.^. Have you notice we always talk about Rumpel and belle and not really about hook and Ariel? Lol

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I was wondering how far apart our time zones were! Lol

My computer isn't doing so good. :-/ I guess I over used it yesterday playing a game and now it hardly functions. :( it's struggling just to connect to the internet and pulling up web pages.

I don't, she might have more to bargin with later once he starts growing soft towards her. ;)

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

It was about midnight here when I passed out, I think. It's almost one in the afternoon. ^.^

Oh no! What's wrong with your computer??

I could see him making a deal! He is always making deals. Lol

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

Yay!!!

I so fell asleep on you last night, I'm sorry. :-/

It's not cheesy! There has to be one thing she wants. ^.^ and after a while Rumpel might go get it for her. Maybe just to shut her up about it. Lol

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

She will be trapped in the main section of the castle. Like the kitchen, her room, the dinning hall, the parlor. She will have access to several places, she just won't be able to leave that large area. And Rumpel will probably spend his time in the castle with in the barrier she she can try anything g she wants. :)

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

Objects would be able to cross the boundaries, sure. Not sure how helpful that would be... However, if she finds a way to use getting objects across the barrier to her advantage he will certainly tighten the reigns. ^.^