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@Lovejoy I like it. A note: commandeer means to order someone to give something to you, or thereabouts. I think you just want "command" under High Inquisitor

And we do need some sort of first Inquisitor, the one in charge of the entire order. Maybe Grandmaster? Bishops is skill, but there needs to be someone in charge of day-to-day stuff.

skill rankings was just a way to keep track of ...well, skill. I imagine there's Inquisitors that never become Masters, simply because they lack the ability for leadership. They are probably left as veteran Inquisitors and assigned to some Master Inquisitor or other, probably one from their original warband.

And the warbands probably handle their day-to-day affairs differently from warband to warband. I'll say again that Ziotea should not be the warleader, under any circumstances. My friend I talked to while trying to come up with terms actually is the one that suggested it, and I liked it and passed it on. ^.^

In terms of who Ziotea'd support...I don't think Rodion has the skill for leadership. RAgnar is sweet, but naive. Actually, she probably would pick Galahad, mostly because Stina is not the brains of this outfit.

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Grandmaster is better than just Grand or Master on their own, I like it.

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@Draken you've a good point. I was thinking of an army sized group. And I do like Grand Inquisitor.

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@The Angry Goat They are? Ooh, neat~ Yeah, they often sound similar, even identical, depending on the word and the person. Choir means I pay a lot more attention to Ts, at least some of the time. ^.^;;

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A friend suggests that maybe we should consider who's in charge of the warband. Since...y'know. In a fight there's not time to discuss it. and there'd need to be a second, at the least.

I can see why, but I also figure we've trained long enough that we work as a group more or less automatically. So...I guess I could go either way on this? Or at least I'm undecided.

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posting again instead of editing because...hehe. ^.^;; I hate when folks edit stuff and I don't know so I don't read the new stuff.

Initiates or Trainees are probably pregrad Inquisitors. Initiate if Acolyte is a training position, otherwise it should be used for the church and trainee should be used for the Inquisition.

Bishop is a skill position. perhaps a middle skill rank could be ...iunno, deacon? I like that. ^.^;;

Inquisitorial Command/Officer ranks:

-top guy. Just one.
Lord High Inquisitor? Supreme General? Commander in Chief? probably something along the lines of the latter two, since technically they have command of the secular army too, if they want it.

-second rank, only a few
High Inquisitor

might be a couple other ranks in here, depends on what Love wants.

lowest officer ranks:
Master Inquisitor
Knight Master Inquisitor
Knight Inquisitor

(functions like lieutenant, lieutenant commander, and commander)

Teachers are probably taken from these three ranks. Maybe just the knights and knight masters. Might be exceptions.

Knight cadets are under all these.
Then the Knight candidates -- the ones being watched for promotion. Might eliminate one of these two, but it's up to Love.

Then the INquisitors. Most of them are...just plain Inquisitors. It looks like a warband might be assigned a member of one of the command ranks to go with them on missions, but they don't necessarily need one.

There are divisions among the inquisitors, mostly by fighting skill.
Primary Grade is the best
Secondary Grade is ...well, second
Tertiary Grade is the lowest.

Junior (untried) Inquisitors, like our characters, are the lowest graduated rank. They may fall into primary-tertiary grades, but they are somewhat lower than full inquisitors.

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@CollectorOfMyst I've heard differently, since the wife of a knight is a lady. And some fantasy novels use Lady as the title of a female knight, instead of Dame (and I actually like that better, even though the wife of a lord is also a lady. But whatever)

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Initiates or Trainees are probably pregrad Inquisitors. Initiate if Acolyte is a training position, otherwise it should be used for the church and trainee should be used for the Inquisition.

Bishop is a skill position. perhaps a middle skill rank could be ...iunno, deacon? I like that. ^.^;;

Inquisitorial Command/Officer ranks:

-top guy. Just one.
Lord High Inquisitor? Supreme General? Commander in Chief? probably something along the lines of the latter two, since technically they have command of the secular army too, if they want it.

-second rank, only a few
High Inquisitor

other ranks:
Master Inquisitor
Knight Master Inquisitor
Knight Inquisitor\

(functions like lieutenant, lieutenant commander, and commander)

Teachers are probably taken from these three ranks. Maybe just the knights and knight masters.

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@CollectorOfMyst haa, I was thinking about saying something similar.

It's **latter (though the way some people say it...)

@Lovejoy the ranks seem pretty good. And I imagine the inquisition has its own ranks. Creid I thknk would not be /just/ an Inquisitor, even if there are multiple ranks by that name and differentiated by class.

I figure that it's a combination of seniority, command skill, tactical/strategic skill, and fighting prowess (both physical and etheric) that determine one's rank in the Inquisition. The default rank of graduates is Inquisitor. Maybe there's a slightly lower rank that is made of the recently graduated Inquisitors, and they move to the basic rank after x time has passed or a successful mission or whatever. Within the "inquisitor" ranks, they might be further divided by fighting strength, since their warbands would generally indicate seniority. This is your private first class, private second class, etc -- though I really suggest using something other than "class", since the groups are literally made of classes of students. It seems confusing.

Command and tactics/strategy is the key skill for higher ranks beyond a simple Inquisitor. So in theory a guy that's not so good at fighting (compared to the other Inquisitors, obviously) might still achieve a decent rank if he's sufficiently clever or charismatic. Those being considered for ranking up beyond inquisitor could be officer candidates. The ranks beyond Inquisitor are collectively called officers. Officer cadets (maybe Knight Cadets?) are newly appointed, and move out of the cadet rank in a similar fashion to junior Inquisitors becoming full inquisitors.

Our teachers would be officers of some sort. I lean towards the knight rank just because. I think the very top rank would be something like "Lord/Lady High Inquisitor" or something, leaving High Inquisitor the next rank down. might be lord/lady inquisitors in there. and then Knight Inquisitor is the most basic command rank. Master Inquisitor would work too.

Forms of address would be ...not sure what to do abuot the top fellow, but High Mother/Father [name], Lord Father/Lady Mother [name], and then...also not sure what to do about knights. oh, right, Dame. Sir/Dame [name] (I guess the father/mother part gets dropped? eh).

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@Draken This is true, actually. I did think of contacts, but...

I think perhaps if it was necessary to change eye colors to go undercover, methods might be developed. Necessity is the mother of invention, and all that. This is actually part of why I disliked every group having a different eye color, but if you get enough interracial couples eventually it should stop mattering so much. 'Cept Omestrians because Omestrians are weird.

As an aside, I love this group. <3 We discuss the best stuff.