Skallagrim

NoW: LeeRoy vs. Melonhead Rnd 2.

THE SHORE

Start: 9/22/2015
End: 10/09/2015
Combatants: @LeeRoy vs.@Melonhead.
First Post: LeeRoy

This is a mystical place, a fragmented memory of the Dreamers Home World as it was long before they ascended. The opponents start on opposites sides of the lake; the entire area is 2,500 square feet of combat area. The water is special to the Dreamers, from it rises fumes that will affect the senses of the combatants if they linger in the water. The longer one stays in the water the more heightened the sense become for a total of three posts for each of the combatants their senses are similar to the Dreamers. Able to see the entire length and breadth of the electromagnetic spectrum, as well as allowing them to see and understand the influences gravity has on an object. The air is heavy, and the gravity is twice what the combatants are used too, effectively doubling their weight. The water does offset this.

The light from the setting sun is in the ultraviolet spectrum creating haunting purples and blues on white or light clothing.

Nexus of Worlds- Darkness Rising- A Guild Tournament

@Greivouskhan and @yoshua171 You will face each other next round.
@LeeRoy you will face @Melonhead.

Your fields will be posted in the morning. I expect this round to be very brutal and very good. Good Luck.

@LeeRoy I will post a response when I do the battlegrounds.

Melonhead vs. DjAtomika NoW Rnd 1

Melonhead vs. DjAtomika-

1-Characters:

Melonhead. You have a way of making the angst of your characters, the oppressive grittiness of their world come to life. There is a mortality with your characters that makes draws the reader into the characters world. Score: 3.9

DJ. Your characters are truly action characters. When I read one of your fights I can translate the character on to the big screen. There is a larger than life, pulp hero quality to them that I enjoy. Even the grittiness of your characters remind me of movies. 3.8

2-Introduction.

Melonhead. It was short but you did a lot to bring the character and the setting to life. 3.75

DJ. Nice. Short but like your opponent, you do pack a good bit in the intro post. I would like to see a little more, because I know both of you are capable of writing that way. 3.75

3-Action

Melonhead. You have come a long way from when you angrily entered the arena and spiuted your first rant. In all seriousness your writing has become a pleasure to watch evolve. You have a keen eye and you blend your actions/reactions with your opponents in a skillful way that slowly separates you from the average text fighter. 3.90

DJ. You have learned well. You can write good action and are getting better at seeing how your character can respond and react in a logical and meaningful way that allows you to write and compliment your opponent masterfully. 3.9

4-Attack/Conflict

Melonhead. You are a masterful tactician and while I see openings for you to attack your opponent, you don’t always take those moves, allowing the fight to become a wonderfully engaging read that allows strategies and tension to develop. 3.80

DJ. You have come a long ways from the first time I fought you. You still make a few mistakes but you are fundamentally sound and are a very good fighter. You are a tough out for anyone. 3.75

5-Defense/Resolution

Both of you are good defensively, both of you do make mistakes but not enough to separate you drastically. I think that if there is a weakness it probably is here, not enough to mark anyone better than the other. Both 3.75.

6. Creativity

WOW. This is probably the best part of both of your writing. You are both exceptionally imaginative writers. Both. 4.0

@Melonhead: 23.1/24.0
@DJAtomika: 22.95/24.0

Winner: Melonhead.

@Rilla Melon is the winner post the results please.

Melonhead vs. DjAtomika NoW Rnd 1

This fight is over. Scoring it. Will post the results.

** You guys have made it tough on me. I am going to do a final review in the morning before I post the results.

Arena Chat Thread

Too many numbers. But if that suits your needs ok.

Nexus of Worlds- Darkness Rising- A Guild Tournament

I suppose I have a way to, in character, have Shin out in the hall. Though it might require a post from Skallagrim in response, otherwise he's gonna seem like even more of a maniac.

@LeeRoy

I will post a reply tomorrow.

Arena Chat Thread

That doesn't work so well in real life, but since you are working a multiversal aspect for your universe. It shouldn't matter because it is your universe. You can make the numbers mean what ever you want, you're God.

Nexus of Worlds- Darkness Rising- A Guild Tournament

You are more than welcome to size one another up in the lobby.

Nexus of Worlds- Darkness Rising- A Guild Tournament

@Greivouskhan and @yoshua171 You will face each other next round.
@LeeRoy you will face either @Melonhead or @DJAtomika and will know by Sunday night.

Monday morning I will establish battlegrounds for the duels. You can begin Monday evening but the match officially starts Tuesday morning.

Melonhead vs. DjAtomika NoW Rnd 1

I am going to let you guys go until Sunday 1:00 PM EST. Then if there is no clear winner I will grade this out. Good luck to both of you, do what you can or at least make what you do memorible.