Lilith returned to bow, looking at the woman skeptically. She hadn't recalled introducing herself. She study the girl, staring at the woman who spoke her name. She felt Ultrice smacking her shoulder, hushed whispers to be more respectful coming from the little fairy. Only stopping after Veronica and Lucilla started speaking.
Hearing the tracking request her mind brought up the abilities Ultrice had spoken about earlier. As if on queue, the fairy piped up. "Oh! Lilith can see into the future a litt-UMPH." Only her muffled protests could be heard as Lilith quickly covered her mouth, it wasn't that she didnt want to help, but she would rather keep her abilities under wraps until she fully figured out what this was.
Lilith swept her gaze across the interior of the mansion, while it wasn't the same as her mansion, it was similar enough so she could relax a bit while waiting for this meeting to really start. Her bright pink gaze moved at the same rate of her body, circling to room to try and gain any kind of foothold with the knowledge she could gain from the room they were placed.
Truthfully, she wasn't fully set on this whole "Coven" thing. The whole thing was kinda iffy in her opinion. Like, she randomly gets approached for some magical girl thing that could very well be some sort of new scam. On the other hand, it would be amazing if this whole thing turned out to not be a scam. Magic? I mean who wouldn't be amazed by the fact? Well, the only downside was the fact that she would probably have to fight some sort of monster in exchange for the powers. Well, from what that annoying fairy thing was saying early she definitely would. A light sigh escaped her lips, maybe it would be good anger management.
Lilith was raised in a wealthy household, but her father constantly had new mistresses. She wasn't paid much attention too, as her older siblings gained most of the attention, because of this she grew up to be rather eccentric. She is happy-go-lucky for the most part, but has a strong sense of possessiveness and is rather greedy since she rarely got much herself. She was only complimented for her appearance, so she can be a little bit of a narcissist. She seems rather simple, but she has a swirling storm of emotions that she holds a tight grip over. Which leads to her main reason of fighting the Hydes, anger management.
Strengths Her Appearance Carefree attitude Fast Thinker Sturdy Mind Lack of Morals
Fears Being forgotten by all Becoming Useless Being Married Off
History:
Lilith was born into a high-class family, but was quickly forgotten by her parents a few years after she was born, they had to focus on the potential heirs of the family so she, as the youngest child, wasn't given much attention. She wasn't truly lacking much, as she lived in a wealthy household with many servants. She however always felt something was missing. She was always looking for something she probably wouldn't ever find. Her curiosity levels were spiraling out of control and finally, when she almost caused a meal the maidsnwere cooking to be ruined, one of the maids made sure to take up the job of teaching her the things her parents should have.
By the time she was almost 12, the successor had been decided. She thought that maybe she would get more attention now. While she did get a bit more, her parents only cared about superficial things. Her appearance was something they definitely focused on. They ordered the maids to be more careful and all of a sudden she was getting pampered. While theres a part of her that hopes it's because they love her, she knows they must just want to get a large dowry when the finally marry her off. She hates the idea of arranged marriages and has been trying to figure out how to get out of it since she was 13. Her plan now consists of running away and hiding at her maid mothers house, though with her face, hair color and eyes she is pretty sure she's be caught the moment she went out, which is why she hasn't tried yet.
The Diviner The Diviner ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Once Lilith transforms her hair becomes shorter and her frame and face seems to regress until the age of 13 or 14 which was around the time she started getting into Tarot cards. Her clothing is almost always the same, a dress with a white top and a black skirt styled perfectly.
Weapon The Tarot ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Lilith's weapon isn't exactly a weapon, as it varies by the tarot she drew, though she usually ends without one. This is her special deck, the one she draws from to transform, at the moment she has only collected 4 cards and can only use said cards abilities.
Pixie Ultrice ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Ultrice is quite different from Lilith, she is serious, has a strong drive and takes everything to heart. As this is so, Lilith's carefree 'sailing with the wind' attitude bugs her to an immense degree. Transformed State ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ When transformed Ultrice becomes a small Tarot card box earring, the box has the flowery design of her skirt covering it, with a small design of whatever Tarot she drew.
Magical Identity
Magic ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Tarots Choice Lilith's ability is related to her deck of Tarot Cards. She collects the Arcana, and the ones belonging to her specific deck allow her to borrow their abilities or weapons. She has come to believe that each of the cards seems to hold some sort of soul, as when she takes on the abilities of a card, her personality gets influenced as well. She can draw each card once per day, and it's affects last until it's canceled out by another card, her pixie runs out of mana or she leaves her magical girl form. At the moment she only has 4 Majors and 0 Minors, she has The Priest, The Hanged Man, The Fool,and Judgement.
The Priest When she draws the priest card she can see snippets of the nearby future, and while it doesn't give her any extra strength or luck like others, being on step ahead will always be helpful. When under the influence of The Priest she mellows out much more, becoming calm and focused on one thing. She gets along with Ultrice much better when she's using The Priest.
The Hanged Man Her only fighting based card for now. The Hanged Man card is a bit darker, allowing her to escalate minor wounds into major ones so long as she is touching the individual and the wound already exists. A long with that, the wound can't be caused by her. When under the influence of The Hanged Man she becomes ruthless and scary, seeming to have no regrets.
The Fool This power is a true wildcard as she never really knows what will happen while using it, its ability is to make her luckier for the whole time she is under its influence. The personality she gets when she draws The Fool card is random, but it is usually just a friendly trickster.
Temperance Temperance is a card she can save, it works up to 5 hours after she draws it. It can be applied to anyone, but can only be applied to someone with mortal wounds, though it will heal them immediately. After such, she must return it to her deck. While this card is out she becomes a caring and giving lady, but her kindness seems to make fun of others.
Lilith was raised in a wealthy household, but her father constantly had new mistresses. She wasn't paid much attention too, as her older siblings gained most of the attention, because of this she grew up to be rather eccentric. She is happy-go-lucky for the most part, but has a strong sense of possessiveness and is rather greedy since she rarely got much herself. She was only complimented for her appearance, so she can be a little bit of a narcissist. She seems rather simple, but she has a swirling storm of emotions that she holds a tight grip over. Which leads to her main reason of fighting the Hydes, anger management.
Strengths Her Appearance Carefree attitude Fast Thinker Sturdy Mind Lack of Morals
Fears Being forgotten by all Becoming Useless Being Married Off
History:
Lilith was born into a high-class family, but was quickly forgotten by her parents a few years after she was born, they had to focus on the potential heirs of the family so she, as the youngest child, wasn't given much attention. She wasn't truly lacking much, as she lived in a wealthy household with many servants. She however always felt something was missing. She was always looking for something she probably wouldn't ever find. Her curiosity levels were spiraling out of control and finally, when she almost caused a meal the maidsnwere cooking to be ruined, one of the maids made sure to take up the job of teaching her the things her parents should have.
By the time she was almost 12, the successor had been decided. She thought that maybe she would get more attention now. While she did get a bit more, her parents only cared about superficial things. Her appearance was something they definitely focused on. They ordered the maids to be more careful and all of a sudden she was getting pampered. While theres a part of her that hopes it's because they love her, she knows they must just want to get a large dowry when the finally marry her off. She hates the idea of arranged marriages and has been trying to figure out how to get out of it since she was 13. Her plan now consists of running away and hiding at her maid mothers house, though with her face, hair color and eyes she is pretty sure she's be caught the moment she went out, which is why she hasn't tried yet.
The Diviner The Diviner ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Once Lilith transforms her hair becomes shorter and her frame and face seems to regress until the age of 13 or 14 which was around the time she started getting into Tarot cards. Her clothing is almost always the same, a dress with a white top and a black skirt styled perfectly.
Weapon The Tarot ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Lilith's weapon isn't exactly a weapon, as it varies by the tarot she drew, though she usually ends without one. This is her special deck, the one she draws from to transform, at the moment she has only collected 4 cards and can only use said cards abilities.
Pixie Ultrice ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Ultrice is quite different from Lilith, she is serious, has a strong drive and takes everything to heart. As this is so, Lilith's carefree 'sailing with the wind' attitude bugs her to an immense degree. Transformed State ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ When transformed Ultrice becomes a small Tarot card box earring, the box has the flowery design of her skirt covering it, with a small design of whatever Tarot she drew.
Magical Identity
Magic ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Tarots Choice Lilith's ability is related to her deck of Tarot Cards. She collects the Arcana, and the ones belonging to her specific deck allow her to borrow their abilities or weapons. She has come to believe that each of the cards seems to hold some sort of soul, as when she takes on the abilities of a card, her personality gets influenced as well. She can draw each card once per day, and it's affects last until it's canceled out by another card, her pixie runs out of mana or she leaves her magical girl form. At the moment she only has 4 Majors and 0 Minors, she has The Priest, The Hanged Man, The Fool,and Judgement.
The Priest When she draws the priest card she can see snippets of the nearby future, and while it doesn't give her any extra strength or luck like others, being on step ahead will always be helpful. When under the influence of The Priest she mellows out much more, becoming calm and focused on one thing. She gets along with Ultrice much better when she's using The Priest.
The Hanged Man Her only fighting based card for now. The Hanged Man card is a bit darker, allowing her to escalate minor wounds into major ones so long as she is touching the individual and the wound already exists. A long with that, the wound can't be caused by her. When under the influence of The Hanged Man she becomes ruthless and scary, seeming to have no regrets.
The Fool This power is a true wildcard as she never really knows what will happen while using it, its ability is to make her luckier for the whole time she is under its influence. The personality she gets when she draws The Fool card is random, but it is usually just a friendly trickster.
Temperance Temperance is a card she can save, it works up to 5 hours after she draws it. It can be applied to anyone, but can only be applied to someone with mortal wounds, though it will heal them immediately. After such, she must return it to her deck. While this card is out she becomes a caring and giving lady, but her kindness seems to make fun of others.
Last magical girl anime I watched was Yuki Yuna is a Hero~
I totally understand if this needs re-balancing, this is the repost with updated abilities.
@Sinsystems Seems Alright by me. The only thing that has me confused is this:
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Are you speaking of cutting as healing because of surgery, or do they have magical properties that allow you to heal with them? Just have to be sure here. Wait for @LuckyBlackCat 's approval to post in CS Tab!
@Suneli I feel like you focus a bit too much on being ''fair'' and ''not overpowered''. Those are definetely rules, but they're also much more a guideline. I wouldn't necessarily mind if your Power was a one shot kill anything as long as it's properly used and difficult to perform - high risk/high reward kind of thing. The thing though is people that go that route has to prove they can write compelling characters and fight scenes without abusing their powers. It's very do-able.
I'm saying this mostly because when I read the description for the Hanged Man's, that's what I was feeling with all the restrictions that seems to be a bit random and too complicated for the Magic. I absolutely love the idea of the random powers for the Tarot Cards draw. I do not even deem it necessary to be one power per day.
I would have gone with something more akin to being able to draw cards as much as she wants, but can only draw the same card once per day, let's say. With that route, you could even start with a bigger cards decks and make the pwoers a bit simpler, but have more.
Or you could go with a different limitation - such as your Pixie's magical reserve.
In the end, it's your decision. Your character can be accepted as it is, just keep me updated on what you decide to do, okay? OS: I just love that face claim.
@Mistress Dizzy Hey ! That can happen. Personally, I tend to go fish for pictures or musics that strikes or inspire me, and I flesh out a character from there. I hope that can help. EDIT:
@Killy Sorry! I missed it ! No personality? Is it still a WIP? Just gotta be sure.
The constructs are a bit liek Green Lantern's constructs? Also, there's one thing bothering me a bit. The Pixie's transformed state is supposed to be something mundane to hide as. Marilyn can totally rock a Crown if you so wish it, I just need to specify.
Did I miss anyone? It would very much be like me. Sorry if I did, just poke me anywhere !
Also, again, I strongly encourage everyone to join the Discord if you are able to. :P Even if you are not too active, I try to build of a small community of nice people and it's easier to everyday discussions as well as RP updates. @Sinsystems THank you for the update, I will see to it to post a non-outdating one.
Ok, sorry for the delay everyone ^^; Anyway...
@Sinsystems I like it, although yeah the "healing cutting" thing needs clearing up. Am I right in thinking you're referring to magically enhanced surgery? Once that detail is clarified, consider the CS accepted.
@Suneli Ah, sorry if I intimidated you yesterday! For the most part it looks good, it's just that yeah, you seem to be a little worried about making your character overpowered, and underpowering her instead. I'd personally relax some of the restrictions on The Hanged Man, especially as she isn't guaranteed to get it at any one time. Very creative though, and I like the personality changes as a side effect of her powers.
@Mistress Dizzy Yep, that suggestion seems like a good one to go with. Considering things weren't at all easy for black people in the 1800s, a servant background would be likely. As for the magic, got to say you need to elaborate on it. The versatility looks good though, and I'm interested in seeing more details.
@Killy Once you write the personality section, your character seems fun, especially with the bug magic! That's pretty unique.
@Vega7285 Hehe, classic light and dark, lawful good and chaotic good duo. I'd recommend having them both as foils, although it's understandable if you only want to go with one. You'd always be able to bring the other in later.
@Majoras End Yup, vampire concept looks good so far! Let us know when the CS is complete.
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Whew! That's way more characters than we expected. It's probably time to close applications, and start the RP soon.
Ahh, yeah I get that often. It kinda became a habit to heavily restrict abilities I think could be considered OP, thanks a bunch for the suggestions btw! I love the suggestion of drawing however many, but only once a day! I'll upload the sheet after implementing a few of those suggestions, tysm!
Lilith was raised in a wealthy household, but her father constantly had new mistresses. She wasn't paid much attention too, as her older siblings gained most of the attention, because of this she grew up to be rather eccentric. She is happy-go-lucky for the most part, but has a strong sense of possessiveness and is rather greedy since she rarely got much herself. She was only complimented for her appearance, so she can be a little bit of a narcissist. She seems rather simple, but she has a swirling storm of emotions that she holds a tight grip over. Which leads to her main reason of fighting the Hydes, anger management.
Strengths Her Appearance Carefree attitude Fast Thinker Sturdy Mind Lack of Morals
Fears Being forgotten by all Becoming Useless Being Married Off
History:
Lilith was born into a high-class family, but was quickly forgotten by her parents a few years after she was born, they had to focus on the potential heirs of the family so she, as the youngest child, wasn't given much attention. She wasn't truly lacking much, as she lived in a wealthy household with many servants. She however always felt something was missing. She was always looking for something she probably wouldn't ever find. Her curiosity levels were spiraling out of control and finally, when she almost caused a meal the maidsnwere cooking to be ruined, one of the maids made sure to take up the job of teaching her the things her parents should have.
By the time she was almost 12, the successor had been decided. She thought that maybe she would get more attention now. While she did get a bit more, her parents only cared about superficial things. Her appearance was something they definitely focused on. They ordered the maids to be more careful and all of a sudden she was getting pampered. While theres a part of her that hopes it's because they love her, she knows they must just want to get a large dowry when the finally marry her off. She hates the idea of arranged marriages and has been trying to figure out how to get out of it since she was 13. Her plan now consists of running away and hiding at her maid mothers house, though with her face, hair color and eyes she is pretty sure she's be caught the moment she went out, which is why she hasn't tried yet.
The Diviner The Diviner ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Once Lilith transforms her hair becomes shorter and her frame and face seems to regress until the age of 13 or 14 which was around the time she started getting into Tarot cards. Her clothing is almost always the same, a dress with a white top and a black skirt styled perfectly.
Weapon The Tarot ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Lilith's weapon isn't exactly a weapon, as it varies by the tarot she drew, though she usually ends without one. This is her special deck, the one she draws from to transform, at the moment she has only collected 5 cards and can only use said cards abilities.
Pixie Ultrice ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Ultrice is quite different from Lilith, she is serious, has a strong drive and takes everything to heart. As this is so, Lilith's carefree 'drifting with the wind' attitude bugs her to an immense degree. Transformed State ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ When transformed Ultrice becomes a small Tarot card box earring, the box has the flowery design of her skirt covering it, with a small design of whatever Tarot she drew.
Magical Identity
Magic ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ Tarots Choice Lilith's ability is related to her deck of Tarot Cards. She collects the Major Arcana, and the ones belonging to the specific deck allow her to borrow their abilities or transform. She can only draw one per day, and whenever she transforms into a Magical Girl after she has drawn a card she will be stuck with it until the day is over. (12am wherever they are) She has come to believe that each of the cards seems to hold some sort of soul. When she takes on the abilities of a card, her personality gets influenced as well. At the moment she only has 3, The Priest, The Hanged Man, and The Fool.
The Priest When she draws the priest card she can see snippets of the nearby future, and while it doesn't give her any extra strength or luck like others, being on step ahead will always be helpful. When under the influence of The Priest she mellows out much more, becoming calm and focused on one thing. She gets along with Ultrice much better when she's using The Priest.
The Hanged Man Her only fighting based card for now. The Hanged Man card is a bit darker, allowing her to escalate minor wounds into major ones so long as she is touching the individual and the wound already exists. A long with that, the wound can't be caused by her, and she cant turn it into anything that would kill from anything other than bloodloss. This card is also the only with a major repercussion, when she escalates the wound she can feel the exact same pain until it heals or the being dies, depending on how much the wound is escalated it also absorbs her own blood. When under the influence of The Hanged Man she becomes ruthless and scary, seeming to have no regrets. She really hates when this card is drawn, as she feels sick right when she leaves her magical girl form, even if she didn't do anything.
The Fool This power is a true wildcard as she never really knows what will happen while using it, its ability is to make her luckier for the whole time she is under its influence. The personality she gets when she draws The Fool card is random, but it is usually just a friendly trickster.
Last magical girl anime I watched was Yuki Yuna is a Hero~
I totally understand if this needs re-balancing, even I'm hesitating to post it a little...
Okay so my concept might be a bit iffy, and if it is I totally understand
I was thinking something along the lines of tarot cards? She draws one and that's her power for the day? She would only start out with like 4-5 of them and none would be particularly powerful except like one or two (neither would be ones she has yet) and her trying to get them all could be a bit of a dub-plot/motivation for her to continue fighting... the card of the day would be chosen by gm or we would roll for it or smth,if? I'm just throwing it out there so I totally get if it's too much.
this was written at 4am on a schoolnight please forgive spelling and grammar
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