Also, hello everyone, I am back. Well, kinda, gotta go to work here soon but I will likely be on sometime tonight, unless my friend who is currently having emotional breakdowns needs me.
@SimplyJohn As I've said before, I did not write a profile for all of the towns and cities, purpose being to leave them open for player interpretation. Nobody else has had a problem with their back stories, from simple to complex, all I ask is that you be correct on existing lore, and if you're not then I will notify you. As for feeling outgunned, that's a personal issue I cannot help you with. Not every character has to be a powerhouse, in fact we have two that are more on the diplomatic side of things. I thought she was a fine fit, the only real person that would outgun her with significant extremity is Alex, and that's only because of the electricity versus water mechanic.
However, I do respect your decision. Good luck in your ventures and may your roleplays be prosperous.
That's kind of like leaving job experience thin on a resume and saying "I wanna get a feel for the job before I tell you what I've done." A backstory is there to tell us about what the character has gone through, key events, defining moments, etc. It's also our first glimpse in to your style of writing, your effort, and creativity. It's there for a reason, so you need to provide something more substantial, please. I'm not asking for a wall of text.
I did this for fun, you're welcome to use them if you want but it was more for me as practise, but it's only fair to show you the results haha. Also, don't get your hopes up I'm an amatuer.
Also, am I correct to assume the backstory is a work in process? (Just a tip, "abilities triggered" makes it sound as if they are innate, whereas abilities are only gained by joining with a Spark.)
@SimplyJohn I believe Nomad is ready to join us, yes, thank you for accepting my (harsh-esque) criticism well.
Also since all Immortals are to be covered in a blackish chitin like armor, I'm gunna manipulate that picture and see if I can't make it look more.. hollow-ee. Though the "turn into water for short periods" sounds like a fine power. Also this graphic manipulation I'm about to do is purely for fun on my end, and you don't have to use it. It's just a way of helping me practise.
@SirBeowulf The two big players right now seem to be me at Isolone and @Darcs at Russel doing well mafia stuff. Currently Hatter and I are collabing, with bobert joining. There was another player schedule to join us at Iso, but I haven't heard from him in a bit, not sure if he's rejoining the relaunch.