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Star Wars - Jedi Exile

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Star Wars - Jedi Exile

1) Master at 30, I can kinda live with. Though nowhere near the council level.

Alright.

2) Remove this "Class" thing. Follow the format on the OP please.

Sure...

3) Far too many abilities, not to mention two of them are rare abilities.

Sure..

4) Samurai? What are they? Are they a type of food? Also too sentimental for a Jedi Master.

I inserted Samurai as a homage to George Lucas inspiration for the Jedi. It doesn't hurt anything.

Lolz Too Sentimental? What?

5) No Jedi Lovers in this time period. No-No Nope. Not son of two Jedi. Only Jedi allowed to produce offspring were off extinct races or races with peculiar reproductive systems.

Sure.

6) How doth one obtain such a deep connection to the Order? It wouldn't be a family link.

It isn't a family link. It's a notion that such masters have been loyal to the Order for years.

7) Jedi are required to find their own crystal for their lightsaber, it's part of the trials. Such has been canon for this era for a long time.

Fine. I don't see the problem so much with that as not every Jedi has or will get the exact same but fine.

8) Well no to Mace Windu taking an interest.

Okay

9) Initiate trials are simple, Jedi Code and understanding, crystal and lightsaber, basic combative test.

The second was not consistent throughout the Order's history. Originally, the test consisted of lightsaber construction using crystals provided by the master. As the Order came into a new era following the Ruusan Reformation, the trial was altered to test self-discipline. Demonstrating competency through meditation or staged lightsaber combat with a hood, this test was not so much a demonstration in skill so much as technique.

^ From the wiki itself. I know how the trials go. Instead of combat, I used meditation.

10) Dark Jedi who managed to beat Mace Windu and his Padawan wouldn't just be left alone.

Except...they can and would be because they are my npcs with their own motives.

11) Dark Jedi don't typically show mercy.1

I guess this wasn't typical.

12) Eyes can be healed/replaced by either transplant or cybernetics

That doesn't mean he has to have them.

13) There'd be another trial to go through however right now I can't remember the different parts of the Trials of Knighthood. However I know that one of them is very self reflective that few people ever discuss.

Trials of Knighthood tend to be different at times depending on the jedi.

14) So he's 32 at the end of his history but at the start of the sheet he's 30.
I missed changing the zero to a two. Oops.

15) I'm not opening this to discussion either, I've done that in the past and just got burned as a result.

I will argue for my character or at least certain points because I got things to back that up and/or just doesn't sit right with me either. Though I'll probably create a whole new character anyway.

Star Wars - Jedi Exile

Name:
Crim Drayson

Age:
30

Gender:
Male

Species:
Human

Level:
Master

Class:
Consular

Force Abilities:
Force Speed
Telekenesis
Force Sense
Mind Trick
Force Healing
Force Jump
Force Barrier
Pyrokinesis
Force Sight
Force Stasis
Battle Meditation

Non-Force Related Skills:
Since his inception into the Jedi Order, Crim has studied the history of the Jedi, Sith, and the Force. He holds an intrinsic knowledge over all that pertains to history and is known as a scholar of such. Dabbling in diplomacy and the political aspects of the galaxy sparked an interest in the Jedi standing within the Galaxy. Though Crim is not unlike his brethren, taking up an adequate knowledge in hand to hand.

Lightsaber Forms:
Form III: Soresu
Jar’Kai
Form VIII: Jun-Sai - Where Vapaad is direct and staccato, Jun-Sai is circular and flowing. The lightsaber, as well as the Jedi wielding it, is treated as a total weapon. An opponent of a Jun-Sai user can face not only the blade of a lightsaber, but strikes from its hilt, punches, kicks, elbows, knees, and head butts.

With the Force guiding the user's movements, the graceful precision of Makashi and the acrobatic movements of Ataru combine to create a dance-like whirlwind of death. The duelist moves his body just out of reach of his opponent's attacks while positioning his counter-attacks at the most unprotected targets of his enemy. By sinking deeply into the Force, the Jun-Sai duelist can anticipate his opponents movements, allowing him to block attacks before they happen.

One similarity to Vapaad is the use of emotions to power the style. Unlike Vapaad, instead of tapping into the feelings of enjoyment combat brings, the Jun-Sai duelist focuses feelings of determination. Fear, anger, and doubt are compressed into a tight ball in the pit of the duelist's stomach, and forged into an absolute Will to defeat the enemy. When facing a Jun-Sai master, it is said that one's life is measured in only seconds after his Lightsaber is activated.

Lightsaber hilt and colour:
Orange Lightsaber

Weapons:
N/A

Other Equipment:
Crim carries quite a few items around that symbolizes his heart, family, and his love of the past. These items include vibroblades attached to his hip in the shape of wakizashi styled in the ancient samurai culture, a pouch that holds a trinket of his mother, and most sentimentally is the kabuki mask constructed specifically by a padawan that he once trained alongside. A commlink is on his person at all times to keep in contact with his allies.

History:
A product of two Jedi Knights, Crim was born in the very temple that his parents had grown up in and fallen in love. Crim was a by-product of an Echani Mother Seriana, and Korun Father Teilo Drayson which gave the newborn a skin tone brighter then that of a full blood Korun but darker than a full blood Echani. Both Knights were reprimanded by the Order for breaking Jedi Law and conceiving a child that could influence their emotions, thereby bringing them to the Dark Side if unlucky. Ban would not be the punishment doled out to the couple as they held a deep connection to the Order and were allowed to raise their force sensitive child like others before them. Force Sensitivity was found to exist in the young child around his early years near the first birthday. While not outstanding by any means, Crim was noted for having a slightly higher count then his own father.

By the time that the toddler could comprehend the ability to walk and learn, he was enrolled into the Jedi Academy.within the clan of the Falsi. Training and study was the name of the game whilst in the academy. Teachings of the Jedi spurned an interest in history and standing within Crim; this also helped a garner a friendship in a Nikto by the name Gau-Rin. Gau-Rin was a more eager child to learn the physical side of the Force and Jedi teachings. The boys did not agree on everything, subsequently starting a chain reaction that would lead all the way to their adulthood. Several years of Academy training could only prepare Crim for the inevitable

Initiate Trials came swift upon the younglings. Crim and Gau-Rin were ecstatic to finally engage in the trials that would mark them as padawans. The trials were not truly difficult as Crim has once thought they would be. Studying had led him to recite the Jedi Code like he was just taking a breath. Construction of the lightsaber came to him after he was gifted an orange crystal by his mother. Images flooded his mind while he crafted the lightsaber that would guide his hand for many years. A great master known as Mace Windu took a deep interest in the initiate and watched intently on how Crim would handle the final test; a test to survey the dark side. Crim was placed in-front of Gau-Rin. He could feel the dark side within Gau-Rin's aggression but, there was a glimmer of hope, a light that could be salvaged into a true Jedi. The test came to it's completion and both boys' graduated to Padawan.

Mace Windu took Crim under his wing. Training with Mace Windu was an astonishing process. A master Jedi of Mace’s caliber could almost instantly tell just how to work with Crim. He saw the weaknesses and strengths of his padawan, in turn helping the boy create a form parallel to that of Vaapad. Crim’s trained heavily alongside another human padawan. The padawan became close with Crim until several years later when he failed a test given to him and showed how close to the Dark Side he actually was. Before the Padawan left, he gifted Crim with the very mask that Crim would keep for many years.

Ten years passed within a blink of an eye. Mace Windu was confident that his final padawan was ready to undertake the Trials of Knighthood. His trials would be different to accomadate his skills and influence their decision. Lately his father and his Padawan Gau-Rin had went missing during an investigation. Crim left with Mace Windu and they took off to the back world planet. Two days passed before the duo was able to track down Seriana and Gau-Rin. Amongst the two was a steep dark energy of the force and the dismembered corpse of Crim’s father. What Mace believed would be Crim’s fall and explosion of emotion...was quite the opposite. Crim possessed a level of calm befitting a true knight. It was Gau-Rin that attacked first and began to battle between the Padawans.

Gau-Rin was truly a force to be reckoned with in dueling whilst Crim was the better with the force. The fight pushed deeper into the psyche of both men. An end came upon Crim’s eyes and face was badly burned by a near miss of the Nikto’s light saber. Seriana proved to be a match for Mace, able to knock him unconsciousness but not kill him. She knew it would bring the the Jedi upon them heavier than those that would seek them for Telio’s death. Serian and Gau-Rin left the scene, leaving Mace and Crim alive. Crim never understood why she left him alive but, he would find out one day if he could. The return to the Jedi Temple brought Crim back up against the council with bandages around his eyes. Despite the failure, the council explained that it did not matter that he had not captured his mother nor old friend but that his skills, calm demeanor, ability to overcome losing his eyes, and his ability to help his master instead of continuing to fight against such overwhelming odds. The rank of Knight was bestowed upon Crim and he would learn that force could allow to do more things then he ever thought possible.

The following years saw the usage of the force to accomadate Crim’s blindness, his assignments, and raise as a Jedi Knight. Nine years passed almost suddenly for Crim. His first padawan was acquired after the first year of being a Knight. Training was just as arduous for the Padawan and Crim. Nine years it took for the Padawan to ascend to Jedi Knight and Crim proving himself during the start of the Clone Wars when he turned 31. At age 32, Crim attained the ranking of Master. A master of the force and his emotions led to becoming a rank that not many attained at such an age. Only the time would tell now if Crim would become a legend or a faded memory.

Star Wars - Rise of Crusade

Anyone know of a good site to find some nice pictures for a jedi? I like pictures. lolz

EDIT: Found a picture but links are still welcome. Sheet coming soon.

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus

Venom sheet coming soon.

Solace In Night: A Kingdom Hearts RP

"Ah Agrabah. What a beauty that you have become over the years. Least no more dark magics to hinder your progress." Coriander touched the wall of the closest building, feeling the rough texture of the white stone used to build the structure. One of the few places that could afford the rare white stone that littered the desert, Cori admired it quite dearly. He loved the beauty that worlds brought with their unique designs and differences in structures. "Agrabah. You make even deserts appear grandiose." Cori's mind sat on the situation at hand in actuality. They had been teleported to a different world by the young woman who powered the factory plus he had already revealed his former affiliation with the Empire. Things would become far more complicated especially with Alexander alive and well. Cori's calm demeanor was endlessly rattled by the thoughts of the past.

Cori watched as Ace left with Rika whilst Shizuka left with the others. It hurt his heart a little that Shizuka and Lin were both burned by the realization of Cori's past yet he gave no care for Rika's ravings which was to be expected. The truth would come out sooner or later to which he did not feel the need to speak up on such information. It was his past, one that always weighed on his heart, and a part of his life that nearly destroyed him as a person. He shook the very thoughts of hatred from his mind and melded the plan together to help his "friends", a term they'd probably avoid with him. Several minutes after Coriander split from everyone without notice, a run down building came into his view.

"Oh what wonders I shall reveal."

Star Wars - Rise of Crusade

Is there room for a....Gray Jedi? I have purpose but I understand. Or someone similar to Kyle Katarn in nature? Need a good Star Wars rp and I suspect this one is highly active. :D

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus

1.) Hyperion

2.) Agent Venom (No relation to spider-man unless you want to make one)

3.) Iron Fist

4.) Bruce Wayne

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Though the heads of the villages should know of each other enough to decide who has history with who so that can be added to the clan things/bingo book. Something that goes through Yosh himself.

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Shadolord said
No this is a meeting of the clans all of them like the five kage summit, With less blood (Hopefully)

And that stops me from discussing clan things and any history/connections between each other how? It doesn't.