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KillamriX88 said
Well, I don't run this RP, but here's my opinion...No. Just no. It's been a long time since a character sheet has screamed "Mary-Sue" at me badly. I mean seriously, every time you come close to describing some sort of weakness or personality flaw, you immediately go back and describe how he isn't that bad. He's arrogant, but not above praising opponents, he's cold and careless but gains respect through his actions, he has no martial arts training but he's amazing at hand-to-hand anyway... while also having crazy powerful magic.

Oh, and he's super smart and stuff.And are you "Despite not knowing other magic styles he does have enough knowledge to tutor others in their magic style. He can also identify magic from seeing it's effects making investigations a relative breeze."And all at the young age of 23... .I may have overstepped my bounds here, and if so I apologize... but I really think this character needs a looooot of work. Starting over might even be better.

Edit: OK, went back and saw the post you made where you explained what you wanted to do with your character. Makes SOME of what you put make sense, but for the most part my opinion still stands...


1. Personality = Vegeta from Dragonball Z. I don't really care how you feel about his personality. Actions speak louder then words. Gaining respect through actions does not subtract from being cold and careless to others through words. They are incredibly far apart to be honest. I could be the most asshole boxer in the world but in the ring i'm like Mike Tyson in his prime. Therefore my actions in ring garner respect for what I can do but you can hate my personality. Same thing can be attuned for arrogance. If you impress him then yes he will praise that you were stronger then thought but, that doesn't neglect that he can still feel as though he's better then you.

2. You do know that like..most mages in Fairy Tail are amazing at hand to hand despite having great power? You do know that you don't have to be a martial artist to be a great fighter?

3. He doesn't train in other styles but he does know of them I.E. in connection with magical knowledge thanks to Pollux's training. That is like a boxing coach or anyone highly knowledgeable within certain arts. Just because they don't train in it themselves, doesn't mean they can't help train others. Plus it does not say he's the perfect teacher and can teach people any style he wanted

4. 23...do you know how powerful most of the Fairy Tail Wizards are by just the age of 20? 23 is reasonable within the world of Fairy Tail. Plus he's not an average mage. No one in this rp is just an average mage or else it wouldn't focus on us if you understand what I'm saying.

datadogie said
I agree. Plus, we've already got the three lost magic users, so the magic type would have to be changed to just Caster. Plus, that's like, what, three different types of magics you have? Repair, Magic and Heavenly. I also can't help but notice that Heavenly Body magic appears to have lots of different types of magic hidden in, such as fire magic, not to mention that Supernova produces almost the same amount of power as a Fire Dragon Slayer, a bit OP. You've also got a bit of Gravity magic in there, and a lot of other things.Sorry if I'm acting a little bossy. It's just that that character seems a little overpowered.


That arm isn't changing. It's something me and Marc have worked out pretty damn hard especially for the plot of the rp itself.

You do know that like..most mages in Fairy Tail have like a gajillion magics. Also Repair isn't much but to repair clothing and the arm is innate and not fully controllable. Its not something he learned. Its something that was forced on to him.

You do know what Heavenly Body Magic is...right? it uses attributes from the cosmos I.E. Stars, Planets, ETC. Gravity is part of planets and stars. Not to mention Altairis spell is the same spell Jellal uses and it has gravity within it. That's canon. Stars produce heat. Drake is able to replicate that heat. It burns hot like fire. Dragon Slayer Flames are...guess what....fire except that I don't have the versatility of a Flame Dragon Slayer or well the real force behind it. It's just...heat. Nothing concussive added to it. How many people, even the weaker people, take Natsu's flames to the face without being burned heavily or feel just fine afterwards? Most and Natsu has a concussive force behind his flames. Flames produce heat. He uses heat, not actual flames.

Its like people scream OP without even putting real thought into the claim.
Tatsua Aiisen said
Yoshi too? I synned my pantsu ;-;

*stares* I'll just stand back here. Like a Hawk. A Uchiha Hawk by the name of Taka.

I'm being subtle.
Atom and Kara there to the help Big Blue Boy Scout. Let's see what I can come up with.
Not finished as you can see with the backstory and other section but, so much what I have.



Name
Drake Vermillion

Nickname/Alias
Ares

Age
23

DOB
29th of June

Gender
Male

Sexuality
Heterosexual

Appearance


Other Details
Left arm - Since he was 10, Drake has been infected with an unknown magic-based ailment that dominates his left arm from elbow down to his hand. Besides the magic it awards him, it is inhumanly durable. The arm is able to survive a multitude of damage due to the magic being solidified throughout his entire arm.

Personality
Drake possesses an incredible self-control of his emotions. He only showed surprise when opponents proved more powerful or skilled than he had expected, and even then he doesn't lose his composure. He possesses arrogance, and fully justifies any statements he may make about his power, even complimenting his opponents at times on their abilities. However, he still has a habit of joking around and dis-respecting those around him. There are only a handful of exceptions that he admires, the most prominent being his grandfather. Despite his arrogance, he isn't above praising his enemies.

In conflict, or arising conflict, this particular warrior will diligently fight and with a concentrated, intense mind set he will strike those before him with patient, tactical attacks that steadily cripple his opponent. He can be straightforward in order to lead the opponent into a trap, and like what he stands for, he will do a variety of things to disengage the foe and give them a false sense of security and power. His true style of combat is elusive, and because of his peculiar magic he can strike in both a standard and very unorthodox manner that can take the edge off of battle in order break down his opponent. From time to time, he can be seen as plainly cruel, and dark, however his calm attitude during normally tense situations calls a sense of ease in those on his side and gives them a feeling of immediate empowerment, as if they have a wall of security defending them at all times. Although he may be cold and careless at times, his desire to act and do rather than talk strikes respect into his comrades.

Drake does not have any apprehensions to killing enemies. If someone is a threat to his well being, he can take their lives without a second thought. Some call this a case of being desensitized to killing, however, Drake takes it for what it is, doing what's necessary to survive in an efficient manner. As a result, Drake has killed scores of men, more specifically, Dark Mages, in self defense over the course of his career as a mage, starting from his late teens. He believes that a person who is too scared to kill their enemy is a fool as you never know what could happen.

Arsenal
Magic Headphones: Drake also has a set of magic headphones which play his favorite type of music. He normally has them around his neck. By pressed and dragging the two tiny skulls on the arms of the headphones Drake can turn them into a set of magical speakers.

Magic Type
Caster/Lost

Mage Rank
B-Class

Magic
Crash Magic- Crash magic is a highly advanced caster-type magic which gives the user the ability to crush/destroy things through physical contact. If done on an object, the object is reduced to small rubble by transferring magic power from the user's body into every particle until it has enough force and pressure to cause it to explode. The larger the object, the more magic power needed to destroy it. It is so destructive that even the slightest touch can lead to huge results. That's why this is considered a highly advanced magic because it requires proper concentration to be effective and control in order to avoid accidentally destroying objects, something even the strongest users of this magic somewhat fails at.

If this magic is used on living things, it is impossible to crush them. Instead, this magic creates enough force to cause damage and push the opponent away. This is done by firing concentrated magic after physical contact. At its weakest, a technique like this will cause some light bruises, but at its strongest, it can break bones or even crush them through magical pressure. Crash magic also works on spells. It can be used as a deflective barrier with enough power to reduce the power or even negate a spell.

As this magic is such a great offensive power there are limits on the level of defense capabilities it has besides the straight forward approach. This magic also has very little, if any, potential for personal buffs and attribute enhancement because its nature is so externally oriented, there is barely any room for self-effect. Lastly it is quite a dangerous magic; if the person is unfocused, he/she could destroy objects such as houses unintentionally.



Madness - A magic lost to the world and what is binded within Drake’s left arm, it is able to apply itself through touch through said arm. Madness delves deep into a person’s psyche to turn them insane, completely destroy them mentally or even turn friend into foe. It is like a poison as it attacks the neural synapses, creating a never-ending pain but whats truly worse is the way it subjects the person into sanity. Sometimes it can even subject itself upon him. What Drake holds is only a taste of the what Madness can do.

Repair Magic - If his clothes are damaged, instead of having to buy new ones or pay to get them repaired, Drake has learned Repair Magic to fix any rips, tears and other forms of damages to his clothes and armor.

Other Specialties

Brawler: Even though Drake has never done any professional training in his younger days, his unorthodox style of combat can often surprise any type of opponent that comes up against him. Even with his arsenal of attacks, his techniques are often based on strong offense and powerful defense moves due to the fact that at times opponents, who might have more specialized training under their belts, might have more precise attacks than Drake. So far, it has been shown that Drake's fighting type is that of quick strikes and heavy hits, often being able to deal strong attacks and leave opponents in a daze, which gives him the chance for a possible finishing blow. In terms of defensive techniques, Drake uses his strong muscle density and arms to block attacks coming from most directions, allowing him to absorb it more effectively.

Enhanced Strength: Drake has constantly shown remarkable strength which is capable of sending grown men flying a considerable distance and able to break down a wall with a couple punches. As he follows his family's philosophy of destroying his opponent, his attacks are shown to be powerful and lethal. With a single hand, he could demolish a tree trunk and crush the door of Guild Hall. In terms of upper body strength, he can easily pick up and throw a man twice his size across a room.

Historian: Drake is also a great historian tutored in the history of the world by Pollux. His skill is so great he can state events in great detail from the top of his head.

Biology: Mainly a self taught skill but Drake has great knowledge on the biology of various creatures and monsters that populate the regions in and around his home.

Biography
Other Anything you want to include that doesn't fit into the other sections.
This looks rather amazing.
I have an interest in joining though I was thinking a high rank Class A or B that plays more like Gildartz with a slight mindset of Laxus. He bares the notion that, while Fairy Tail is a great guild, he does not rightfully need friendship or comrades to become stronger and succeed within magic. He'd have that loner mentality, for reasons I won't disclose just yet, and would be humbled by the wizards of Fairy Tail during a mission. He'd show up and talk to others but would bombard certain missions, though i'd speak with the person beforehand to ensure not bad blood and won't mess up their ranking up.
May I join in on the "fun"? If you don't remember me, I was Taka Uchiha on the old forums and now that I see that RP is back, I don't check too often outside my rps, I'd love to join in. If it is open. I hope I did not miss it.
Well then it is always nice to have a lovely alliance between Konoha and The Land of Iron. Two great military powers becoming one. Small raid attacks at the villages. I'm just sayin'. Ideas to help spice things up and get the posts moving.
In Titans! 12 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
S.H.I.E.L.D HELICARRIER
Somewhere in the sky


The sound of bullets bouncing off metal echoed through the long corridor of S.H.I.E.L.D's incredibly huge flying base. A base that was now under the attack from the forces of HYDRA. HYDRA was well known for many terrorist attacks against America and their grudge against S.H.I.E.L.D. An overwhelming force pressed the attack against the agency and in return S.H.I.E.L.D was unable to contact the Avengers for help. Luckily for them the second greatest heroes next to the Avengers had been mobilized after their brief monthly report to Nick Fury.

"Captain America. Control Room is being overrun." Nick Fury's voice came over the small earpiece within Bucky's ear.

"Don't worry, Sir. Me and Scott are on our way." Bucky placed his finger on the ear piece, pressing a button to that synched up with the other Young Avengers' earpiece, "Hulkling, and Wiccan, help Maria on the deck. A clean sweep. Ben and Dani, handle the engines. If those fail, we all die." The communication ended as soon as the issues were ordered and Bucky took a step back placing his back against the young Mister Scott Pilgrim's back. HYDRA forces had ambushed the two teens, surrounding them with their blades and guns at the ready.

"To the control room, Scott. Let's be hasty. Don't need Fury to be.....furious." A small chuckle escaped Captain America's breath before using his shield to reflect incoming machine gun fire away from himself. The pun was utterly terrible but knowing Scott's humor, he'd probably laugh at the puns of a teen with humor from the 40s. Mind refocusing on the task at hand, Bucky threw a powerful right hook that knocked one of the HYDRA soldiers flat on their back whilst proceeding to administer a quick tumble backwards into a flip that ended with the soles of Bucky's feet colliding with the chest of two different soldiers. A bullet whizzed by Captain's face, his eyes easily perceiving the distance and timing of the next few bullets. His body twist and turned with reflexive ease, dodging the bullets that could presumably bring him harm.

One quick arm movement sent the shield that had once belong to Captain America, bouncing from wall to wall. It looked as though there was no true direction to it before it crushed the nose of a soldier, destroyed the knee cap of another, and then smashing the elbow of another. The shield returned to Bucky's arm like a boomerang.

"I figured this would be more...fun."
In Titans! 12 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Roman said
More so if my sheet gets through. Less of a sausage fest though. Hey, I guess you know what my tweaks are now.


I'm assuming you are making Alexandra or whatever he name is that is the current Ghost Rider in the comics?
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