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Forever-GM of forum roleplaying games. What can I say? I like making worlds for people to play in.

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In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
@BellBottomBlues
Need me to create a stronger hook for you to reply to? I was hoping we could transition to the Auctiom where the drama takes place.
In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
@BellBottomBlues
There's a potential plot problem coming up that I've been stewing over. If there is to be any romance between Eru and Lanik, his wife must be removed somehow. Erudessa is over 200 years old and has sufficient conviction and self control that she would totally refuse any romantic interest in a married man. If anything, she'd work to reconcile the couple. The tale works more smoothly if Lanik is a widower, unless pairing him with Eru was not your intention. She can function quite adequately without any romance. Your thoughts?
Woo! Management! :D
@imacamoprincess I believe it's your turn. ;)
In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
The king probably has dozens of children, now that I think about it. The slave traders definitely subverted Cassius and Darian's plans by getting to Erudessa first, so we'll see what drama ensues from that. :P
In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
Erudessa started at the sound of metal clanging against metal.
"You look sad, elf," said the offending human. He removed his helmet, revealing a beautiful man crowned with golden hair whose cruel face mocked her with every angle of his sharp features. "You really shouldn't be. The General treats his slaves oh-so-nicely, especially the pretty ones."
By "nicely" I hope he doesn't mean anything perverted. She shrank back in the cell and eyed the sword in his hand.
"You're quite talented, too. I watched you wreak havoc on our front-line slaves," he remarked.
They were slaves? Her stomach churned at the thought. Thankfully, the man didn't give her time to dwell on it, for he leaned closer and added, "I'm sure your blood tastes as sweet as your face." He laughed and smacked the bars again. Erudessa gave him the stink eye. What a disgusting creature. I can't believe I'm about to be a slave to one of them. The wagon started to move, jolting her on the hard steel. She gripped the bars and watched the man fade into the crowd, holding back the curses on her tongue until the wagon passed well away out of his earshot.

The wagon stopped for soldiers to shove in four more slaves. It took her a moment to recognize their faces. "Frandur, Henindal, Yanduin, Bethdul! You're all alive! Praise be to God, you're still alive!" She pulled all their heads together in a big group hug. After a moment, Frandur pulled away to look at her. "Why is milady brought so low? How did you come to be here?" he demanded, tears welling up in his eyes.
She lowered her gaze. "I came to the aid of a wounded human and fell into a trap. It was foolish of me, and I should have known better than to-"
Frandur put a finger to her lips. "Don't. I've lived enough years to know that fate hangs on but a thread. What you did, you were always meant to do. It is neither appropriate nor wise for me to judge your actions, but I have to believe there is a higher purpose in it. Be strong, and if you live long enough, learn from your choice."
Erudessa nodded. "If I live long enough," she murmured.
Henindal broke his usual silence. "You will."
She didn't have the heart to contradict him.

The wagon stopped again to receive another batch of elf slaves. They openly wept at the sight of their leader imprisoned with them, and it took all her strength to stifle the sob that grew in her throat. Like Frandur said, I have to be strong. Everyone looks up to me for guidance, so I can't afford to wallow in despair. Get up, Eru. Say something to them. After the wagon resumed moving, Erudessa got to her feet and opened her mouth to speak. The words died on her lips, and the lump in her throat didn't help. What could she say? Everything will be fine? She couldn't guarantee that. I will save you? What a presumptuous, conceited thing to claim. They needed hope, a reason within themselves to hold their heads high and wait for a better future.

Specifically, they needed a distraction.

She glanced at Frandur. "Tell me," she said, pausing to steady her voice, "what do we possess that humans do not?"
Frandur studied her a moment before answering. "Time."
Erudessa looked back at the elves before her. "Use it. Study them. Learn their language, their culture, their habits, their haunts, their movements. We will outlive them, and when we do, we will show them who truly belongs behind these bars."
There were some murmurs of approval. "What if they kill us before then?" one elf replied.
She lifted her chin and forced an almost-imperceptible smirk to her lips. "Kill them back."
The grim humor lightened the mood enough to dry their eyes. Erudessa glanced at Frandur, who nodded his approval. The elves shuffled into their respective clusters and did as instructed, watching the passing humans through veils of hair and masked emotions. Erudessa slumped to the floor and leaned her head on the bars. If we can make the humans believe that killing elves will curse them, we could ensure our own survival long enough to retaliate. But it all comes back to living long enough for the belief to spread. We have to make it through the first few years. We must. Frandur squeezed her hand, and she squeezed back.

They all spent the next few days in silent observation. Several escape plans sprouted and died in their minds. Magic was the first option they tried, which failed because their captors had the forethought to poison them before caging them. They considered escaping while the wagon doors opened for more slaves, but the wagon never stopped for more. Some toyed with breaking body parts to persuade their captors to open the doors and remove them, but watching them slaughter human slaves behind bars put that idea to rest. As they drew nearer to Midhaven, Erudessa realized that escaping would be impossible. When the wagon finally stopped at the back of the auction house, she took a moment to reassure them.

"Hold yourselves together. We must not betray any weakness for them to exploit, and please, behave yourselves. Don't give these monsters any more reasons to kill us. When we each meet our new masters, those of us who remain must remember where everyone else went so we can come for you when we are free." She espied several guards approaching the wagon from the corner of her eye. Calm down. Deep breaths. "Most importantly, keep your heads high. You are not defeated until you admit it."

Erudessa pushed her way through the group to ensure she would be taken first when the guards arrived to open the doors. She lifted her chin as the guards shackled and dragged her away.

Her tears evaporated before they ever left her cheeks.
In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
I had something written the day after you replied, but it focused too much on the basic activities and not nearly enough on chatacter or thought, so I'm rewriting it. I'd originally envisioned Erudessa kind of shrinking away from everything in fright, but I realized that's not who she is. Frandur is going to be with her up to a certain point, and being old as dirt, he's her de-facto advisor. He would be able to walk her through this time.

So expect some character development. ;-)
In Condemned 9 yrs ago Forum: 1x1 Roleplay
"Thank you," the man had said.

Erudessa blinked. Thankyou? I don't know that word. Or is it two, as in 'thank you?' I think my language instructor mentioned it in passing, but I don't recall her emphasizing it. The men of the Imperium must not use it often. Was it...was it an expression of gratitude? Yes, I think that's what it is. What's the appropriate response to that? In Elvish, one uses the same word for 'thanks' that is used for the acknowledgement of thanks, but Common may be different. Some small expression of humility should work. After a brief moment of consideration, she bowed her head.

I'm still missing something. She looked at Finnigan, at the chair, and at his splints. The healing spell. I've forgotten the healing spell! Erudessa motioned for Lanik to 'wait a moment' and knelt to put her hands on the wooden splints. A lingering spell is needed here. Assuming the average regeneration rate, three days worth of mana should more than cover everything. She poured her magic into the wood and chanted a few words. With the operation completed, she stood up and brushed off her cloak.

The other soldier still looked weary, like he needed her healing magic too. What ailed him, though, didn't need magic to cure. A smile heals more than a tear, she'd always tell her acolytes. But this was a human. Humans were brutal. Humans would eat you alive. There was never a reason to smile at a human. Nonetheless, he needed healing, and bearing a bright attitude came part and parcel with the healer's work.

So Erudessa smiled.

"Fear not, he will be able to walk again. Just give him a few days, and he will be up and running with the rest of you. Speaking of running, your friends should be here any minute now, so...what I mean to say is..." She wrung her hands as she searched for the right words. "...I have to run."

"Run where, elf?" said a voice behind her. Erudessa spun around to find hundreds of Imperial soldiers staring back at her. I've been made. She pointed in the direction of the Gap and replied, "Um, that way?" The soldiers laughed and charged at her. She turned to run, but several soldiers came up behind her and grabbed her by the arms. "N-No!" she cried as she kicked and pulled against them. They wrestled her to the ground and pinned her arms behind her. Then, an unusually large, burly soldier pushed his way through the company and slowly clapped his hands. His name was Gurgle Moor, captain of several hundred Imperial soldiers and owner of the largest slave trading organization in the world. "Congratulations, Sir Lanik Wintergate! I must thank you for catching the Engineer for us. That was a pretty clever ploy you made there, luring it out to heal your friend. I would never have thought of that myself."

It was a trap? Erudessa shot an accusing glare at Lanik. You set me up, you little rat! Her look didn't escape the big soldier, and just for cruelty's sake, he decided to play it up. He patted Lanik on the shoulder and lazily waved for his men to take Erudessa away. As they hauled her away to the wagon cage, Gurgle crowed, "The battle's over, son. An elvish turncoat broke open the wall and let us in, so we got us a goldmine of slaves to bring home. We couldn't have done it without you keeping their Engineer away. Hit me up if you want a discount on any of my merchandise."

He turned to Finnigan and pointed at him. "Hey, look at that! You guys even got the elf to work for you! Genius, man, genius. I could use fellas like you in my company."
@imacamoprincess
@DeadlyPhoenix
Sorry for the delay. I'd written up the post in my head, but never got around to writing it down. xD
Kimoto could feel the urge to grind his teeth. "He is not a gift but I do have gifts being sent later this evening." He said as he handed his horse to the castle stable worker. "Though I would like to say that money is not the way to happiness." He said with a fake smile towards Arandur. He kept walking forward until they reached the inner castle gates. Should I try to find the princess first or should I try to meet with the new king? He thought to himself. Maybe Arandur would head straight to the princess since that is the only thing he seems to care about. It would be best to make sure he does not get too much alone time with her.


Kimoto handed his horse to a stable worker. "He is not a gift, but I do have gifts being sent later this evening," he said.
Arandur leaned back and folded his arms. "Unless you're going to wrap yourself up and put a little bow on your head, you're better off going home and saving your money."
Kimoto forced a smile and added, "Though, I would like to say that money is not the way to happiness."
Arandur snorted. "Yes, money is not the way to happiness. It's more like the signposts. You know you're on the right track if you see any of it. Though, I must admit, you'd make an excellent case to the contrary."

He made for the throne room and paused at the open doors to salute Kimoto.

Arandur stepped inside and bowed before the king and regent. "Your Majesty, Arandur Nostarion at your service."
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