@Cio Arrogant is fine, look at Erode's app. If I find a similar looking image, I'll let you know. Anyway, ACCEPTED.
By the way, I might be limiting the slots to 12 for now.
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@Cio I understand that, but when applying to a school, would she answer her would be mentors like that?
Not drawn/sketched.
Not drawn/sketched.
@geminironin Maybe you can give me more details on what you're planning. It's kinda vague so imagining how it would look like in action is kinda difficult.
@Stern Algorithm...six feet, huh?
@Stern Algorithm...six feet, huh?
@ERode Just read the quirk, will do the rest later-ish. Mecha-ish gauntlets with rocket boosters, cool. Full armor, nah. Gonna give that the hammer.
@Cio Everything seems okay. Only issues, the length of your answers. If Sanyu answered it that way, then she might not want to get accepted to Kokoro that much. The image is nice, but if you have an alternative you could go with, that would be cool. I'll get back to you.
@Cio Everything seems okay. Only issues, the length of your answers. If Sanyu answered it that way, then she might not want to get accepted to Kokoro that much. The image is nice, but if you have an alternative you could go with, that would be cool. I'll get back to you.
@Scribe of Thoth Things that would need to be discussed down the road would be, as you mentioned, how Shun's quirk is gonna interact with larger objects and actual living beings. Otherwise, ACCEPTED.
@Duoya I'm assuming Gomi's father is the sludge villain from the first episode/chapter? Or at least inspired by him? Anyway, the quirk's fundamentals are okay, but they seem a bit exaggerated? Maybe lean away from purely amorphous to amorphous yet humanoid in a way. I mean, at least something similar to Grimer or Muk?
@Delta44 The quirk is interesting, but kinda curious on how Munch functions. I get that it has a mouth, so aside from biting and chewing, can it speak, lick, spit, etc? Is it able to swallow? If so, where would it go? You mentioned that it can sense for itself, so dDoes it have eyes or capable of smelling and tasting? The rest of its capabilities seem nerfable, but I'm leaning towards letting them slide. Being able to move Munch to her limbs sounds like a good upgrade; just find a way to make sense of how she'd actually learn to do it.
@vFear Background is good, but the quirk seems too similar to Shihai Kuroiro's quirk, Black. It just has more prerequisites, so potentially more weaknesses, but the advantages it gives, once a certain degree of mastery is achieved can make Ieva incredibly OP. It would also be hard to moderate as well since dictating what turns black and white is really subjective unless the scenes your character's get thrown into are described in great detail. As it currently is, I'd prefer you just use the canon quirk. Feel free to convince me, since I might have missed something you were trying to go for. Or if you can offer ways on how to regulate it, I'm all ears.
@FoxSoxs I'm leaning towards a thumbs down, buddy. Not really a fan of quirks for this sort of setting that have a certain degree of micro managing. It's one thing when its just a fodder snake that can follow simple instructions, but seeing as they'll be sentient with a relative degree of independency, probs not a quirk I'll agree to.
@Stern Algorithm At first I was like, nah. But while reading it, I decided that it could work. Only issue now, are the units of measure on your character, make the appropriate corrections. Otherwise ACCEPTED. Other issues I'll bring up later on.
@Duoya I'm assuming Gomi's father is the sludge villain from the first episode/chapter? Or at least inspired by him? Anyway, the quirk's fundamentals are okay, but they seem a bit exaggerated? Maybe lean away from purely amorphous to amorphous yet humanoid in a way. I mean, at least something similar to Grimer or Muk?
@Delta44 The quirk is interesting, but kinda curious on how Munch functions. I get that it has a mouth, so aside from biting and chewing, can it speak, lick, spit, etc? Is it able to swallow? If so, where would it go? You mentioned that it can sense for itself, so dDoes it have eyes or capable of smelling and tasting? The rest of its capabilities seem nerfable, but I'm leaning towards letting them slide. Being able to move Munch to her limbs sounds like a good upgrade; just find a way to make sense of how she'd actually learn to do it.
@vFear Background is good, but the quirk seems too similar to Shihai Kuroiro's quirk, Black. It just has more prerequisites, so potentially more weaknesses, but the advantages it gives, once a certain degree of mastery is achieved can make Ieva incredibly OP. It would also be hard to moderate as well since dictating what turns black and white is really subjective unless the scenes your character's get thrown into are described in great detail. As it currently is, I'd prefer you just use the canon quirk. Feel free to convince me, since I might have missed something you were trying to go for. Or if you can offer ways on how to regulate it, I'm all ears.
@FoxSoxs I'm leaning towards a thumbs down, buddy. Not really a fan of quirks for this sort of setting that have a certain degree of micro managing. It's one thing when its just a fodder snake that can follow simple instructions, but seeing as they'll be sentient with a relative degree of independency, probs not a quirk I'll agree to.
@Stern Algorithm At first I was like, nah. But while reading it, I decided that it could work. Only issue now, are the units of measure on your character, make the appropriate corrections. Otherwise ACCEPTED. Other issues I'll bring up later on.
Didn't expect this many apps this early. Anyway, currently at work. Hopefully, will have a response for those who posted.
Also, no rush guys.
Also, no rush guys.
@Duoya@Scribe of Thoth I'll get back to you guys.
@geminironin Wouldn't that entail slowing/stopping others too? I think it'll be hard to moderate since it kinda has the potential to be overpowered.
@ERode I actually like all three.
@geminironin Wouldn't that entail slowing/stopping others too? I think it'll be hard to moderate since it kinda has the potential to be overpowered.
@ERode I actually like all three.
@geminironin After transferring the energy, what happens? Is it like Gambit's ability or am I missing something?
@Animal Similar to Sugar Rush but a bit vague with the conditions.
@Animal Similar to Sugar Rush but a bit vague with the conditions.
@Scribe of Thoth Aside from being familiar with that OC, everything seems fine so far. I'll hold off the critiquing later on. I mean, it'll be more of clarifications rather than nerfs.
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