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@Pupperr That's alright! Thank you for letting me know!

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@Romero looks good! Go ahead and put Luca -- or is it Valeriano? -- into the character tab!

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@kalanggam Dunno if you had this before and I just missed it, but in Gal's equipment, "revolvers" aren't quite invented yet. If you could just change this to a spark pistol, I'd say Gal is good to go, and you can put him in the Character tab whenever you're ready!

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@webboysurf:

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Overview: I appreciate Garkan's brutish design, but I also believe that retaining this general depiction of strength and brawniness ends up taking away from his ability to represent himself, outside of the general 'muscle-man' image.
In General, he's a massive, imposing figure, which I want to state now and will be elaborating on later when we get to the bio. While I'm sure your idea of his appearance is different from the picture presented, be sure to note that fair skin is a rarity in Glimhollow, though I'm not gonna hold it against anyone who can't find a decent 'olive-skinned' portrait, given the internet's tendency to only illustrate caucasians -- regardless, be sure to explicitly state this distinction between the picture and what your concept of him is. When you say his hair is "well-trimmed" and the "most normal" aspect of his appearance, what exactly do you mean by this -- what hairstyle is it that looks "normal"?
In Personal, I dig his prime motive, but his accessory motives feel a bit contradictory. Family implies tying oneself down to a group, whereas independence infers the releasing of any responsibilities, including those inherent of a familial unit. Perhaps clarify these points more precisely to keep from there being any confliction here. The internal conflict is nearly perfect, in my estimation, so no qualms there.
In Vocational, "Nimble Fingers" threw me through a loop. Where in his bio does it state that he attained the skills for pickpocketing? While the trait is constructed to support itself, I just don't see where or when he could've gotten the capability to be very good with picking pockets. "Street Brawler" works fine, though it doesn't state anything about his time in a combat arena, which I think is a key element of his back story. "Stubborn as a Mule" is also cool, but when it says "an advantage to years of abuse", where was this trait when he was being abused? Be sure to state this more clearly as an adaptation after the fact. I think his flaws look fine, for the most part, though his "Lack of Agility" just further proves my point against the "Nimble Fingers" trait -- someone who has minimal agility wouldn't have the deft hand movements required to pull off pickpocketing, particularly with the large hands that he presumably has.
The Supplemental secret is a bit blunt in stating that he's murdered more than just his father. If this is the case, this would be an important aspect to iterate within the bio. The quirk about him "avoiding meat" is confusing when you also say he's fond of poultry and fish -- I'm assuming you mean red meat? But also, how does he possibly maintain his enormous stature with such a lean diet?
Discrepancies for the bio are in the following hider.

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While the bullet points here are mostly assorted in a general sense, I try to align them in some chronological fashion so you can see what I'm specifically pointing out as you read this alongside the biography. Also, a vast majority of these points will be questions that aren't so much for you to answer to me directly, but try and employ back into the writing.

- What is his father the foreman of? A mining operation? The only truly active mines in the city are in the Pits, which is entirely overseen by the Juggernauts, so having an outside affiliate overseeing the mining is very unlikely.
- Where was it that Garkan spent his childhood? What part of the city?
- How did Garkan survive on the streets for ten years without being kidnapped or killed? Note that there aren't much in terms of small animals around Glimhollow except for rats, though they usually only preside in the Gray District -- presumably this is where he lived?
- You say that Garkan wasn't allowed to come home at night, but then state that his father "granted the boy entrance" when he was ten. What prompted this 'change of heart' for his father? Why didn't his father simply beat Garkan for the first ten years of his life? How did Garkan have the nerve to "demand entry" then, at 10, and not anytime before? If he was so badly malnourished, how did he even have the strength or confidence?
- I find it hard to believe that his mother was so absent from the home that she couldn't have brought Garkan in before he turned 10. Was his father that immensely abusive? If so, why didn't his mother simply leave and take Garkan with, who was also clearly unwanted?
- If his mother was the way she was, why did she even put in the effort to tend to her son when he was beaten so severely? A "bloody pulp" is a very intense image -- how on earth did Garkan survive this without any physical malformation, beyond scars and bruises?
- A pickaxe to the face is a sure way to lose an eye, if not your life -- I'm supposing these were swipes that nearly missed? Twice?
- Be sure to avoid redundancies -- "left the home that night and fled into the night"
- He lived on the streets "for quite a few years" -- how many years, exactly? Again, where was he?
- The underground fighting ring is something that should be elaborated on in significantly more detail. Give it a name of some kind, or state whether he lived on site or in a different hostel, or still on the streets.
***- Given his immense malnourishment for the first half of his life, how could Garkan have possibly gained the stature and weight that he sustains now? I'm supposing most of this was from his time spent training for when he fought -- detail this in full, otherwise his size doesn't seem fathomable.***
- What happened to the fighting ring? This is far too vague and grandeur an end for it to make any sense without some elaborate detailing. There must have been something going on to have caused it, and I'm sure there are plenty of options to choose from to detail the events that led up to its demise.
- He "simply wasn't there that night" -- why? Particularly if he had "never missed a fight" up until that point? This makes it feel like you skipped over this section simply so you could move on to the next part of the story. It needs to be more elaborate than this.
- How did Garkan notice the Dusthawks' growing reputation? Why did he decide that was where he wanted to go, and not somewhere else?
- What makes Garkan think of Valrel as a "proper man", particularly given the enterprise that they're in?

All-in-all, Garkan appears to be a good concept for further exploration, but currently lacks the depth that can truly flesh out his character as being distinct from the typical "brute" archetype. The biography is in desperate need of deliberation, as there's simply far too much being presented that doesn't delve into the important details. I would love to see a significant amount more being written about his backstory and character, but I simply can't expect any depth for development in its current state.

@Romero:

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Overview: Valeriano -- or is it Luca? -- is so perfectly heroic that I can't help but to fall in love with his character, as he's what I would imagine a gallant, guffawing, gentlemanly swordsman to be. His General section is well put together, though the portrait truly does make him appear to be in his early 40s, if not older. In fact, upon reading his bio, do you suppose 27 is truly an accurate age for his character, as he has done so much across Peylor before coming to Glimhollow? If so, I won't make any fuss over it. Make sure to place the proper punctuation where it is needed (looking at semicolons), and that you give it a once over to ensure sentences are adequately structured and that the description falls in line with what is stated in the biography.
In Personal, I am curious as to his accessory motives -- you've already stated that he is quite famous, and that he's technically inherited a significant amount of wealth from his "father". What could possibly drive him to attain more of either of these? His internal conflict sounds like it has already been resolved thanks to the Resistance -- perhaps take the drive for fame and fortune and attribute them to how he thinks of his apparent hypocrisy.
Vocationally, his talents look good, but the descriptor for "vanity" once again seems to contradict his age -- for how long has he assumed this alternate character? Though this isn't a critique, I love that he talks to his rapier!!
With Supplemental, I'm supposing that due to his entire persona being fabricated, most people will know him as Valeriano, and thus refer to him as such? I find it humorous he has a fascination with redheads, as the possibility of there being a redhead in Glimhollow is obscenely scarce. My discrepancies for the bio will be in the next hider.

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- Found a few spots that could use punctuation, so if you want to make sure to go over it again and hunt for them, that'd be ideal; also, hunt for any redundencies in the writing to make sure things are clear and concise
- Approximately how old was Luca when he slew the original Valeriano? Getting a date on this could better define how long its been since it happened
- It seems your noting Valeriano's impending departure to Glimhollow was added on as a potential escape for Luca to act on, but it isn't ever employed -- as such, it's a detail that doesn't seem necessary to iterate
- What about Glimhollow drew Luca's attention? Why did he decide to go there, and not somewhere else?
- You state that Luca "did not hesitate" in his long journey. What prompted him, then, to take the time away from his journey to train himself with old sellswords?
- How long did it take for him to travel from his old home in Hulstead to Glimhollow? I only ask this as he must have spent a considerable amount of time building up his prestige as he traveled, or else such news of his fame wouldn't have had enough weight/time to travel to the desert city ahead of him. Depending on how long it took, this would alter how the reader perceives Luca's eagerness and haste to arrive in Glimhollow
- I'm supposing not all of the "years away from the family" were Luca's alone, and that some of them belonged to the original Valeriano?
- If Valeriano (or, now Luca) inherited a "vast fortune", does this mean that he potentially has immediate access to it? If so, I'm going to have to ask an approximation of his wealth, to ensure you don't have too much, for the sake of balance/control; though I won't be requiring this, I would prefer that such a "vast fortune" wouldn't actually be in place, and that Valeriano/Luca would have to be a tad bit more frugal with his spendings
- I'm supposing he was confronted by the thugs in Lower Shenul, as Upper Shenul doesn't have so much "gangs" as it has a perverse night-life
- "The Luca that had arrived at Glimhollow was far from the boy who had gone pale at the sight of blood" -- were there other occurrences of Luca having to fight as he made his journey toward Glimhollow? Perhaps make note of this earlier on
- Castigates, uniquely enough, aren't as prominent in the Gray District as they are in the upper districts, as they would be hard-pressed to maintain any sense of order in the area. As such, state that he bought the attention of simply the Juggernaut Officers, which would be far more likely
***- Why would a man who seeks out justice work for a criminal organization, and not simply join the Resistance? This is an important distinction -- the Resistance would be all-too-eager to accept someone of such nobility into their ranks, whereas the Dusthawks are far more particular to seek out one's capabilities to perform heinous acts without moral dilemma. Why was he drawn to the Dusthawks more than the Resistance?***

The last point I made is perhaps the biggest qualm I have with your character -- I genuinely think he would be an absolutely fantastic addition to the RP,and he is wonderfully crafted together, but there's far too much about his personality that suggests he would instead be a member of the Resistance and never associate himself with the Dusthawks. This is a key detail that I would need to see fleshed out before I can give this the 'a-okay'.

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@kalanggam:

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Overview: Startin' off by saying - the angst is palpable. Not that this is entirely a bad thing! Just figured I'd point that out before anyone else does
ANYWAY, before I get carried away, let's delve into this:
In General, there are a couple tweaks that can be made in terms of punctuation, but other than those I have no grievances. Well done!
In Personal, motives are good, internal conflict is... fancifully worded, but exquisitely stated. Only question I have is, why work with the Dusthawks, whose primary goals are the acquisition of money, and not just the Resistance, which falls more in-line with Gal's motives?
In Vocational, consider shortening the occupation to just "messenger" or "underling" -- not that I think he isn't capable, but we've already amassed a good number of potential spies for the crew and I don't want to oversaturate the market. In his list of talents, where does the "smooth talking" trait stem from? From what I can tell in his bio, he appears to be too beside himself to be exceptionally well-spoken, and his "looks" will often warrant aggression from those with a distaste for half-breeds. This isn't so much a critique as just an observation, but the "gunslinger" trait feels like it could very well be split into two different traits, one based on his combat abilities and another on his handiness thanks to his father bringing him those complex toys when he was younger. The flaws are, *cough* flawless, as far as I'm concerned, though if you feel like you need to make any edits there, do so; same for equipment.
Supplemental quirks are nice, so no grievances there. The next hider contains all of my discrepancies for the bio.

bio review

While the bullet points here are mostly assorted in a general sense, I try to align them in some chronological fashion so you can see what I'm specifically pointing out as you read this alongside the biography. Also, a vast majority of these points will be questions that aren't so much for you to answer directly, but try and employ back into the writing.

- Perhaps detail what "Agoras" and "Cerad" mean - the elfen language is mostly extinct, for sure, and as such carry little meaning in modern life, but I'm not opposed to you coming up with definitions if you would be so eager
- How would you define Gal being "smarter than the average resident of Gray District"? Street-smarts go a long way down here, more-so than book-smarts -- be more explicit on this point
- Whaever became of his father's proposed "valuable asset" in Gal, by bringing him those curios? This seems to be a point that isn't much discussed outside of the bio save for his knack for collecting "random knick-knacks"
- Though not overly prominent, I found a couple incomplete sentences/phrases in his adolescent section -- wouldn't hurt just to go through everything and make sure to tidy up these spots
- The disownment was swift and sudden -- not bad, though it certainly felt a bit odd from a man who had worked so tirelessly to provide for this child before
- "Galinai became a drifter, caught between Shenuls" -- not a major issue, tho consider revising into the literal "Upper and Lower Shenul"; having a plural-esque form of the section's name just didn't jive with me for whatever reason :P
- Again, why join the Dusthawks, and not the Lexian Resistance? This feels like a critical distinction, particularly with his motivation against the establishment. The Resistance would be all-too-eager to have another join their ranks, whereas the Dusthawks are more particular to see if Gal would have the Gall :D

I'm sure you'll be able to take all that and work with it swimmingly. Let me know if any assistance is needed, and I'll be happy to oblige!

@Zverda:

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Overview: As you know, this will be an assessment of the entirety of her CS, outside of the bio. As such, I may be obligated to draw from the bio to better assess her talents, flaws, etc, but beyond that this should be pretty short.
In General, the "prefering to wear her wear down" sentence is incomplete, and there are a couple punctuation errors here. Make sure to have her appearance be more about her appearance, and less about her personality, but otherwise this section looks good.
The Personal section reads as "Bersonal"? A bit odd there. Prime motive is a bit lengthy, see if you can shorten this down a bit. Also, it's difficult to accurately assess the accessory motive unless changes won't be made as drastically there. Internal conflict sounds good, just got some typo issues going on.
Vocational reads 'Bocational' - are you joshin' me? Meanwhile, barring the comments made on her sister, "disguise" has some punctuation/hyphenization issues goin' on that could be looked at. "Acumen" and "social engineering" feel a bit wordy, so making them more concise would be good. Similarly, her flaws have some punctuation issues, as well as redundencies that could be cleared up. I don't think you iterate she hates politics enough (sarcasm), so you honestly don't need to harp on this point after it has been stated in numerous other spots. Also, be sure to maintain some formality in the writing here, as calling out to the reader and making exclamations really breaks the reading. Also, the "a bit too good" trait feels tacked on, and a bit unrealistic for someone so well-skilled at disguise.
Having a personal automaton is iffy. You'd have to clearly state what it looks like, how it functions, etc, and only then would I be able to tell you whether its a yay or nay. So for now, nay on that. Again with the formality, try and veer away from expletives in the equipment section.
Supplemental looks like "Gupplemental" -- don't worry, I know exactly where that issue stems from since I've used this font before. Quirks are... Quirky? What's up with the human anatomy tidbit?

Overall, that's what I took away without delving into the Bio at all. I'm sure there'll be another assessment once you get the bio re-did, and I look forward to it!

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Adnos Valrel

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Race: Human
Age: 34
Appearance: A swarthy man of Bervian ancestry, Valrel is hardly a distinguished figure. A thinly-built frame of typical stature helps the miscreant blend in with the average crowd, though he walks with a calculated gait that suggests he's never too sure of where he can place his feet. Distant, cold eyes rest in his rounded face, gazing out with a vexing stare above a disheveled beard that is often forgotten to be trimmed. While otherwise never dressed in any ornate garmentry, Valrel will usually be seen wearing a sumptuous yellow cravat, a color recognized only to fellow Dusthawks as a symbol of accomplice.

Personal

Biography

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Born of a harlot in the Scarlet Quarter, Valrel never gained the satisfaction of knowing his father, though his mother would always claim the begetter to be an esteemed Juggernaut officer – whether such a claim was for the boy’s own regard or his mother’s regret, Adnos could never tell, though he developed a distrust of the law all the same. Often subject to his own care, Valrel developed a habit of making himself the head of coteries of street urchins, getting his band of misfits into trouble by picking the pockets of fattened dwarves or swiping biscuits from the window stalls of bakeries. Mostly, he did this to occupy his time away from the bordello, but he soon developed a knack for larceny and talking the other children into taking what he knew he couldn’t.
By his twelfth year, Valrel’s sly practice had assembled him a fairly substantial gang of brats and juveniles, an unfortunate number of them the children of hookers who worked in the same brothel as his own mother. A particularly fateful prowl in the Quarter one afternoon resulted in a substantially-sized stone-purse catching the boy's eye – a prize he couldn’t ignore. After careful deliberation, he and his posse were able to outwit the owner into aiding one of the younger members, while Valrel swiftly snatched the purse, replacing it with a bag of sand. However, just as his team was to make their exit, a gloved hand seized the boy's arm, throwing him off-guard as the man he believed to have fooled leaned down to inspect his catch. Expecting a fierce beating, Valrel was further surprised when the character laughed pleasantly, taking the stone-purse back and asking of the boy his name. The man called himself Lorick Vahn, and after bringing the child to his mother, observing the squalor they lived in, made a startling proposition – take the boy under his care, in exchange for supporting the woman, as she was obviously getting too old to continue her prostitution. Though initially hesitant, Valrel’s mother was fully aware of her imminent lack of income, and accepted the proposal believing her son to finally be receiving a more proper home.
Vahn’s custody proved to be a profitable, albeit profane tutelage, moving the boy into the slums of the Gray District where he could act more accordingly to his talents with significantly less penalty. The man was himself the leader of a fairly furtive company, and took the boy under his wing to show him the ropes of managing a true crew of criminals. Valrel’s fascination was piqued, and in only a few years he began conscripting full-blown heists across the district, all with the gift of Vahn’s guidance. By age twenty, Adnos Valrel was designated Second-in-Command of Lorick Vahn’s Dusthawks, a growing criminal enterprise that was beginning to truly make a name for itself in the bottom-most precinct of Lower Shenul.
Just as Valrel approached his mid-twenties, tragedy struck the organization. In 2E523, the city’s elite police force, the Juggernaut Castigates, successfully assaulted the Nest, the base of operations for the Dusthawks, at the same time the crew had organized for a meeting. The casualties were immensely one-sided, and Lorick Vahn was among the many who fell in the ensuing conflict. After the Castigates finished their onslaught, those who hadn’t been captured or killed believed a defector was among their ranks, and many members simply walked away without another word. Adnos was overwrought with grief, but the disaster didn’t end there – only a few days later, a more personal agony enveloped the young man as his mother passed away, falling ill in her middle-age. For the first time, Adnos felt the sting of loneliness, and though he was now the de facto leader of the Dusthawks, there was hardly anything that remained of the organization, and he spent the next two years looking over his shoulder, wallowing in anguish and avoiding all contact from those that wanted to rebuild the organization.
At twenty-seven, Valrel was discovered badly beaten and unconcious in an alleyway by ex-Dusthawk members, who brought him to one of their homes to help him recover from wounds that would eventually cause him to acquire a slight limp in his left leg. Though the perpetrator was unknown, Valrel recognized his necessity for companions in the crime-ridden cesspool resting in the bowels of the city. In respect of Vahn's memory and response to the calls for leadership, Valrel decided to finally head the Dusthawks and restore them to their former ill-gained glory.
While a fair amount of the old crew had made its way into other gangs, a handful of the previous membership was ready and willing to wear the hawk’s talon, and in 2E525 the Dusthawks were officially restored in a new Nest with a new chain of command. The reinvigorated enterprise saw a boom in business, as old associates of the gang had amassed countless marks for the crew to complete, and many new members were added to the ranks to keep up with demand. After only a few years, the Dusthawks seemed to be back to the same fervor they had experienced half a decade prior, and Adnos began to see the group of convicts as if they were his family.
When he received a mark from an anonymous source calling for the pilfering of a Councilman’s estate, Valrel truly recognized the scope of the Dusthawk’s influence at large. At first troubled by the mark's enigmatic origin, Valrel quickly began plotting its operation, concerned that they were not the only gang contacted by this mysterious bidder. The plan and its execution were flawlessly successful – thousands of stones-worth of regalia were pinched, plucked, and purloined from the manor, delivered expediently to the drop-off and the monumental payment was received in full. However, when news began spreading the next day of collaboration between the Dusthawks and the Lexian Resistance, Valrel immediately sought out a meeting with Rikoris Lex, the Resistance's leader, disturbed that his crew had received such publicity for their heist – the last thing that Valrel wanted was for another engagement with the Castigates.
Lex promptly accepted, and met Valrel with a proposition – aid in the overtaking of a regional Juggernaut department, and the Resistance would pay the Dusthawks thrice the amount received from the heist, as well as renounce any collusion between the two parties. Backed into a corner, Valrel had little choice but to accept – a decision that would cost him the respect of his crew and the resignation of some of his most prolific members. Regardless, the Dusthawks carried out the operation; and with the aid of the armed rioters of the Resistance, were able to infiltrate the facility and execute the Juggernaut Sergeants that were stationed there. The payment was delivered, and the leaders of the Resistance denied all connections, yet rumors still circulated of the Dusthawks’ assistance with both undertakings. Lex had gotten what he wanted, and Valrel was played the fool.
It's been five years since the gang first met the face of celebrity, and Adnos Valrel has seen countless Dusthawks come and go. Though he holds no judgement toward those that leave, Adnos still feels guilt for acting on the mark that ultimately brought about the substantial attention the Dusthawks continue to receive, putting the crew in significantly more danger than they would have otherwise. Perhaps, though, he could put such status to good use – if only Valrel knew what would be in store for them all when he does.

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Prime Motive: Retribution
Accessory Motives:

• Esteem
• Stability
• Kinship

Internal Conflict: Being in the position he is, Valrel wants nothing more than to ensure his Dusthawks get their job done without any complications. However, knowing how much danger they're getting into with every mark he assigns, he can't help but feel at fault if anything were to happen to his men, putting the full weight of any consequences on his shoulders.

Vocational

Occupation: Leader of the Dusthawks
Talents:

• Cunning Conductor - With an eye for detail, Valrel has an effective ability to construct elaborate schemes and strategies to employ for the marks he assigns from the Nest
• Proficient Pickpocket - A lifetime of thievery has given Valrel a skill of swift, nimble fingers, allowing him to pluck or place just about any item in the pockets of passers-by without their detection
• Delicate Diplomat - Valrel's first-hand experience with the law and as leader of multiple gangs has garnered him the craft of careful articulation, giving him a step-up in the ways of negotiation
• Literate Logistician - In spite of never having a proper education, Valrel was able to acquire basic reading and writing skills from his time under Vahn's tutelage, a skill coveted by most Gray District residents

Flaws:

• Obsessive Observer - Valrel is often the subject of his own fixation, being overly concerned with what the Dusthawks think of him and keen to draw false conclusions about other's reactions to his behavior
• Unkempt Countenance - Having never taken the time to acquire a hygienic regimen, Valrel often looks - and smells - as poorly as his resident District, a trait that causes many upper-class citizens to recoil in disgust at his presence
• Lame Leg - The drastic thrashing he recieved seven years ago broke Valrel's left leg, which healed in such a fashion that he now walks with a minor limp, slightly affecting his mobility and possibly drawing him out in a crowd
• Reliant Ruffian - Valrel has minimal capacity to fight on his own, causing him to depend on others to take hits during a scrap

Equipment:

• Dagger, right boot
• Spark Pistol w/ iron pommel
• Gray duster
• Leather satchel, contains:
  • Written marks (often on parchment, rarely on paper)
  • Spare parchment for scribbling notes
  • Black & white chalk
  • Spare socks
  • Boot stain
  • Stone purse, rarely filled
• Vahn's Ring, with spark crystal inset

Supplemental

Quirks:

• Left-handed; left-eye dominant.
• Valrel has developed a taste for the cuisine fished up from Deepwell, finding the uniquely pungent, salty flavor of the aqueous creatures to be quite delicious.

| Glimhollow | a Tale of Dust and Dissent

@Hero@The Wyrm@Pupperr@Atrophy@Romero@webboysurf

Here you go:

https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/172625/ooc#post-4685769

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Reserved.

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Ah yes, everyone's favorite section. I've done my best to combine basic rules for etiquette alongside the expectations I'm holding for people's writing, so as to make this as simple and straight-forward a list as I can manage. So, without further ado:

• GM word is law. Civil discussion can often impel me. Arguing will not impress me.
• On a similar note, treat your fellow RPers with respect. IC asshole-ery is fine, so long as such behavior matches your character. OOC asshole-ery will not be tolerated, and will result in a swift kick (from the RP).
• Recognize the 'group' aspect of this RP -- making characters that prefer to go it alone is fine, but take the time to discuss things with other players, IC and OOC. Collaborations will be happening quite often as the story progresses. Blatantly disregarding other's efforts to communicate will not be tolerated.
• Be consistent with your character's personality, values, etc -- it's true that people change, but it's almost always a gradual process.
• This is in the Advanced section for a reason -- proper sentence structure, punctuation, and an absense of redundencies is expected. I am not going to be your English teacher. If you can't take the time to proofread your own posts, don't take the time to post them.
• This is likely to be a moderately slow-moving RP. While a post-per-week is ideal in the IC, I'll be lenient toward people who keep in contact with me OOC. However, if this interferes with the progression of the story's plot, or if you go MIA, I will not hunt you down; your PC will be deemed a NPC after a seven-day period, at which point I can do with them however I please. Re-appearing after this seven-day period and asking for your character back will result in the negatory.
• Quantity is of the same preference as quality -- the minimum for post length is 3 full paragraphs, or equivalent. Make sure that you give other players something to work with.
• Characters can, and probably will, die. You're free to create another character in the event your original character is killed off, barring you have not been removed from the RP. For now, I'm limiting each player to 1 character at a time, save for those in co-GM or GM positions, who are limited to 2. This rule may change in the future, but don't hold your breath.
• Please, ask me about the lore. I love discussing the worlds I build, and if it gives you more insight into your own character/posts, by all means, I'll make the time for it. You can even add things to the lore, so long as it doesn't contradict what already exists -- PM me if you are interested in this.
• For the sake of control, the RP is limiting the total amount of players outside of GM membership to 8. If a player drops/is kicked, the RP will open back up to accepting new membership.
• I reserve the right to add or subtract from this list, the Character Requirement list, and any other lists I present throughout this RP. In the event that any changes are made, a new post will appear in the OOC detailing what has been altered.

Failure to meet the standards presented above will result in a warning, unless otherwise stated. I only give one warning for each player -- any additional offenses will result in being kicked from the RP.

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• Must be a member, or prominent associate, of the Dusthawks -- outside affiliations are acceptable, so long as they are justified.
• Follow the CS Template provided below. The Supplemental subsection is entirely optional -- the rest isn't.
• "Magic", in the conventional sense, is a nonentity; as such, no arcane abilities will be permitted in any facet.
• Provide a plausible, sensible biography that falls in-line with the world's lore. Let this not deter artistic creativity, but do NOT blatantly disregard the details in the lore above this post, OR make the backstory entirely unrealistic/infeasible.
• If planning on using a picture for a character, only semi-realistic drawings or paintings are allowed -- this means NO photographs and NO cartoons/anime.
• Post the CS application in the OOC, NOT in the Character Tab. Once I have reviewed and accepted it, post the finished character in the proper tab.
• Upon review, I will provide a detailed assessment of your CS in a hider within the OOC. If constructive criticism isn't something you're comfortable having done in public, state so below the CS, and I will PM you my review. Note that my assessments will sometimes appear rather... demeaning. You have been warned of potential hurt-feelings.
• I reserve the right to deny a CS outright, though this will hopefully be a rare occurence -- in such an event, I will clearly, and explicitly state why they are not suitable for the RP. This does not mean you can't try again with a new character.

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Character Sheet

General

Name: Should include full birth name, as well as any alias(es)
Race: If Half-Breed, detail parents' races
Age: Half-Breed age cap is halfway between those of parent-race age caps
Appearance: Regardless of whether image is used, detail aspects such as facial features, usual fashion, and typical demeanor.

Personal

Biography: Birthplace and personal history. Minimum 3 paragraphs. Please put in hider.
Prime Motive: One word, or a short phrase -- this functions as the backbone for your character's story.
Accessory Motive(s): Similar to Prime Motive -- should be short and concise, and serve to further describe your character's goals. Can be as long or as short as the player's discretion; try and maintain 3-5 range. Not required; highly recommended.
Internal Conflict: What your character wants to achieve of themselves, and what personally is holding them back -- their aspiration versus their diffidence.

Vocational

Occupation: State clearly and concisely your character's role in the Dusthawks.
Talents: Skills, abilities, strengths. List at least three.
Flaws: Ineptitudes, defections, weaknesses. List at least as many as there are talents, if not more.
Equipment: Weapons, tools, outfit, accessories, supplies. Not all fields are mandatory.

Supplemental

None of the below fields are required, but are still recommended.

Secrets: Things the character doesn't want others to know about. If you don't want other players to know, PM me the details.
Quirks: Mannerisms, tastes, peculiarities.
Other: If I left something out you just need to write down but have no spot for, do so here.

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| 𝔊𝔩𝔦𝔪𝔥𝔬𝔩𝔩𝔬𝔴 | 𝔞 𝔗𝔞𝔩𝔢 𝔬𝔣 𝔇𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔇𝔦𝔰𝔰𝔢𝔫𝔱

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Welcome, traveler, to...

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Deep in the core of the Dunes lies there a City – Marvel of the world it be, as not such a magic as it exists. The stories which are told to you and I about this captivating oasis in the heart of the Ocean of Dust are true: I have seen it with my own eyes, though many years have passed since my great expedition through the desert. For many long, sweltering days and deep, biting-cold nights we plowed our way through the sands, driven on by the peculiar kevol who drew our carriages across the Dunes. Twice we encountered the accursed, colossal sandstorms of the desert, whirling as high as the very heavens, and spreading from horizon to horizon. After a month’s journey – and what felt like an eternity – we saw the glimmering point of a great tower: Paragon Keep of the Mirage City. I blinked one-thousand times and shook the sand from my eyes until my neck was sore, but in spite of my disbelief we were just as soon upon the phenomenal city gates, and I knew then for it to be true.

There is no greater mystique in all of Peylor than the City of Glimhollow.

--Boris Nirloff, Annals of Peylor

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Here you stand at the Gateway of Glimhollow, the Lone Oasis at the heart of the great desert known simply as the Dunes – a monumental blemish within the center of the world of Peylor. The City of Sand is widely regarded as myth to those who live beyond the Dunes, as the connection to the outside world is nearly non-existent, save for the monthly visits from the Kevol Caravans. A nation built within a single city, Glimhollow has survived for centuries thanks to the mysterious energy of the spark crystals that it lies atop of, as these peculiar jewels fuel every fire, enrich every crop and power every machine within the city’s sandstone walls, as well as below the nation’s mines in what has been dubbed Deepwell – an immeasurable, blackened ocean, extending in every direction but upward for as far as any sparkboat has been able to venture, and return.
You are here for whatever reason it may be: your elfen grandfather sought refuge from the genocide of his people; your dwarfen ancestors were among the first to mine the crystals that were found here, so long ago; or you’re a simple human traveler, looking to prove the city’s existence to yourself, and discover what secrets it may hold. But alas, you have unwittingly or willingly been snatched into the clutches of the greatest political feud that has ever occurred within this desert metropolis, as the populace has been forced under near-militaristic rule by the Paragon – the council of nobility that dictate every significant action within the city. Beware, as there are dangers lurking behind every corner, and even the sand beneath your boot are more treacherous than it seems…

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the World of Peylor

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The world of Peylor is a super-continental landmass, with an inland sea cutting the northern-most region off from the jungled west and the magnificent Dunes acting as a near-impassible barrier in the center of the continent. It is thought that Man originated from the northeastern shrublands, before spreading northward toward the tundra of Yrthor and southward toward the far more hospitable forests of Berevin in the southeast. Elves claim their heritage to the western jungles of Eir, though little of their ancient kingdom remains except for their half-forgotten tales and forlorn songs. Finally, Dwarves boldly lay claim to the southerly cragged fields of Gasholl, as well as the mountain-range splitting upward between Eir and the Dunes and along the northwestern coast. The most common route of travel across the desert is between Glimhollow and Berevin, as the Dunes between these two regions are smallest and the sandstorms that occur are among the tamest – though that isn’t to say that they’re easily managed.

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“The Ocean of Dust”; “Heth’s Bane”; “Desert of the Damned”; these are just some of the countless titles given to the Dunes, though none can fully encapsulate the sheer barren and accursed qualities inherent of this region of the world. Centrally located in the supercontinent of Peylor, the Dunes are a gigantic blemish on the otherwise fruitful landscape, blocking the majority of the world’s nations from direct route to one another and forcing a semicircular design of the hospitable sections of the continent. Considered to be the resting place of the human God of Ruin, Heth, the Dunes have adopted a similar connotation as a place of desolation and destruction. Constantly blighted with gargantuan sandstorms, infernal heat by day, and freezing-cold by night, these comparisons aren’t entirely misplaced, and it truly is a wonder that such a metropolis as Glimhollow has survived for as long as it has amidst the regular devastating forces of nature blighting this desert.

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The nation of Yrthor spans the whole of the northern tundra, home to the fair people who are descendant from the Yrith Kol: Men of Frost. These men and women of the frozen lands are masters at sea, having established significant trade routes with the coastal cities across all of Peylor long before the Westward Conquest.
Few Yrthorian men and women ever travel to Glimhollow, as the Dunes are monumentally hotter than the temperatures they are regularly accustomed to. However, salt from this region is often exported to the city, as the people of Glimhollow view such a mineral as an invaluable commodity.

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The homeland of humanity, Hulstead is an arid shrub- and grassland known for its ranchers, silk-farms and sprawling cityscapes. These peoples, referred to as Steadfolk, are a hardy bunch, making do with the minimal agriculture available while establishing economies from livestock and wood-stone quarries, making the region surprisingly wealthier than the land would at first make it seem.
A significant amount of trade occurs between the nation-states of Hulstead and the city-state of Glimhollow, exporting livestock and silk in exchange for the city’s abundance of fine jewelry and metals.

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Seat of the largest nation of mankind by populace, Berevin is a temperate landscape of sprawling forests, rolling hillsides and winding riverbeds. The olive-skinned peoples of Berevin, often called Bervites or Bervians, are shorter than their northern cousins, but still substantially taller than the dwarves and elves to the west.
Berevin is the most prominent trader with Glimhollow, as the only navigable route through the Dunes stems from the northeastern border of this country. As such, most humans who live in Glimhollow have Bervian ancestry, and the city has occasionally – though rarely in the city itself – been called “Little Berevin”.

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Gasholl is the cragged homeland of the dwarves, with jagged ranges and furtive valleys crowding the sprawling southern landscape. Most inhabitants of the region preside within the mined halls of the mountains, tunneling great channels and subways between the rocky cities, many of them illuminated by either fire or spark-light. Only in the south is it still common to see the trade of gold and silver, as most other regions of Peylor have adopted wood stone as their currency, a transition surprising to the metal-loving dwarves that see little value in fossilized lumber.
All dwarfen residents of Glimhollow can trace their heritage back to the many underground chambers of the southern lands, as their old country is still an item of pride for those who now rarely make the trek back home.

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The Western Ring acts as the great barrier between the west and east, circling the whole western perimeter of the Dunes and housing the sporadic dwarven clans of the north. A region of frequent earthquakes and sprawling fissures, the Western Ring is a hostile environment with the highest peaks in the world, and it comes as no wonder that few choose to live here. The only reasonably navigable passage across the mountains is between Eir and the Dunes, which was ground down by the mass exodus of elfenkind at the end of the second era, in the wake of an event known as the Burning Egress.

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The once-impenetrable and humid jungles of Eir were the homeland of the elves, but these forests were almost entirely burned away following the destruction of elfen society dubbed the Burning Egress. The charred landscape has since sprouted new life, but no civilization has settled in this region for over five-hundred years, with many humans deeming the region cursed or haunted. Regardless, it comes as little surprise why few would want to make the journey to Eir, as the only boundary not blocked by sea or mountain lies along the southern border, where thick swampland spreads across the landscape, and the wildlife in this region count as some of the most vicious predators in the world.

Peoples of Peylor

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The most wide-spread and populous race of Peylor, humans have conquered the majority of the known world and established great nations throughout its borders. Often regarded as adaptable, resourceful peoples, this short-lived race has been noted for their positions in leadership and trade, using their charisma and wits to spread their influence across the continent. With the oldest among them lasting into their upper sixties, most humans will live until their mid-fifties, though they make up for this brevity with a decisiveness and determination often not witnessed in the other races.
Though once plagued by centuries of internal conflict, humans bound together in the wake of the second era to seize power over the entirety of Peylor, even going to far as to ally with the solitary dwarves against their common enemy of elfenkind. This union was short-lived, however, when just as the elfen nations of Eir were burned from their jungles, humanity turned on the dwarfen kingdoms, usurping the stone thrones of Gasholl for the establishment of pretender monarchies in the south. Now, after five centuries of relative peace, the gluttony of mankind has grown starved for power, and a new era of war is on the horizon – one in which the disparate nations of man will contest for the establishment of an empire.

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Found primarily in the southern nation of Gasholl and the mountain ranges of Kregoth, dwarves have notably spread into their neighboring nations in recent years after the replacement of the stone thrones. The shortest, stockiest race of Peylor, dwarves are regarded for their strength and ingenuity, having built some of the most magnificent structures in the world and made leaps in technology centuries before the first human and elfen colonies dotted the map. Though stubborn, boorish, and loud, dwarves are still respected for their inventiveness and imposing authority, living twice as long as that of a man and being nearly five times as strong as the brawniest of elves.
Naturally keen to seclude themselves from the outside world, the existence of dwarves was very much a mystery to both humans and elves until the turn of the second era, after the surface races had done well to expand across the rest of the continent. Unfortunately, the suspicious nature of elves quickly escalated into hostility between dwarfen- and elfenkind, resulting in numerous conflicts throughout the second era until its culmination with the Burning Egress, a destruction of elfen society and culture which the survivors still hold against the dwarves to this very day. After this battle, the deceit of mankind saw the supplanting of the stone thrones, seats of immense power and heritage that caused a dwarfen civil war, fought almost entirely underground. At the end of the war, a new dwarfen society emerged from the earth and began to readily spread outward, integrating its culture into that of the predominant human civilization that had established itself across the former dwarven countryside.

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Bordering on the edge of extinction, elves are a proud, tentative race born of the jungles of Eir, now reduced to minor populations dotting their scorched homeland and scattered throughout human civilizations, though there is a significant concentration of them settled in notable esteem in the city of Glimhollow. The longest-lived peoples of Peylor, elves can savor a lifetime of nearly two-centuries, while remaining quite quick and spry for the majority of that time. This makes the oldest elves seem both incredibly wise and agile and are regarded as sages within their communities. While hardly any taller than dwarves, elves are significantly more slender, and often use this lithesome physique to their advantage, being swift runners and talented climbers.
Elves have had a hard time recovering since their near-genocide at the end of the second era, as these peoples have extraordinarily slow gestation cycles, as well as the men having only brief periods of their extensive life during which they can inseminate. As such, most elves are required by their families to beget as many children as they can during these periods, to ensure that their race can continue to exist in spite of their waning population. This same responsibility also garners a rejection for mating outside the species, as half-bred elves are absolutely sterile, and are often shunned by their kin in spite of their contributions to society as a whole.

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While not altogether uncommon throughout the south of Peylor, Half-Breeds are regarded as the mules civilization, always being born impotent, and as such believed to be incapable of contributing wholly to society. While such repression has eased on these peoples in recent generations, this belief is still held firmly in Glimhollow, where nearly a sixth of the populace is of some sort cross-bred but are so heavily discriminated against that little evidence can be presented to incite the contrary. Half-Breeds are most commonly seen being crossed between a human and a dwarf, as the two races so immeasurably outnumber elves that it only makes sense to see such a divide between the commonality of certain mixed races. Human-elf breeds are next-most common, and dwarf-elf is the least, considering that many elves feel hostility towards dwarves for their orchestration to the destruction of their people.
All Half-Breeds do inherit some of the finer qualities of both of their parents, though they also inherit some drawbacks. A Half-Breed’s lifespan is typically measured around a median between that of their parent races, as well as their physical features appearing as a sort of fusion of the separate species. However, while a Half-Breed does gain the sum of their parents’ strengths and faults, they’re often not nearly as prominent, making them more rounded in ability, but almost always incapable of being exceptional at a single type of feat.

City of Glimhollow

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Though it seems that the world is limited to only the confines of the city, let this not deter you – Glimhollow is a gargantuan oasis in the sands, with well over a million citizens presiding within its walls, all of them spread throughout the great height, width, and depths of the city. Glimhollow is split into five primary Districts, with each District housing essential sectors that support the entire metropolis.

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Serving as the backbone of the entire city, the Drop-Ferry acts as the primary causeway of travel to-and-from the five districts in Glimhollow. Extending from the base of the Sky District to the mouth of Deepwell, the Drop-Ferry’s two main elevators make the normally arduous ascent or descent from each district significantly faster, at minimal expense to the average civilian. While numerous other such hoists exist across the entire city, most of these conveyors are either privately owned or dangerously constructed, making the Drop-Ferry the obvious choice for the majority of the populace.

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The city of Glimhollow is contained by two monolithic sandstone walls, both of which constructed to block the majority of the city from the ravaging sandstorms that normally threaten the perilous Dunes. The Inner Wall is the taller of the two enclosures, reaching all the way up toward the foot of the Sky District, while the Outer Wall meets the roof of the Gold District and grips the edges of the Gateway – the single looming entrance into and out of the city. While the Outer Wall has only one entry, the Inner Wall has an assortment of doors and gates scattered across its surface, allowing easy access to the space circling around the two walls for both Juggernaut patrols and repairmen.

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Set at the highest region of Glimhollow, Hallivarr is predominantly housed by the upper-class members of society – nobility, military officials, and wealthy businessmen alike. Amongst themselves, the residents of the Sky District refer to each other as the most sophisticated, well-mannered, and well-dressed members of the entire city. To the rest of the populace, these same characters are regarded as the most pompous, arrogant, and deceitful snobs which recoil at the sight of sand on their boots. Frequently, the large towers and theatre halls of this district are tenanted by an array of festivities and feasts, which all are invited to attend – though whether you can pay your way in is entirely another feat.
Access to the Sky District is practically hopeless for those born below a noble stature, as there is a notably high price on placing your name on the selection ballot for access into the district, let-alone the purchasing of one’s license to ride the drop-ferry up after you’ve been deemed worthy of admittance. This impregnable restriction is truly in place so as to keep the ‘common rabble’ from disturbing the Hallivarrian community, though the members of this society would never admit such prejudice in mixed company – heavens forbid they have to face the reality of the growing poverty sweeping across the populace beneath their very feet.

Paragon Keep
Standing alone as the highest peak in all of Glimhollow rests Paragon Keep – a vast white tower jutting into the sky, serving as the beacon of the city and the first point seen by those who journey there from beyond the Dunes. Inside this monolithic building is where almost all political proceedings of the city occur, as it serves as both housing and workplace for the Paragon Council – the list of fifteen elected officials from each of the five districts who are selected for office every nine years.
The first-floor of the building serves as the commons area, where every day hundreds of citizens pour in from across the entire city to voice their complaints, grievances, suggestions, and demands – though recently, such activity often comes to little or no avail. The second-floor acts as the center of the city’s treasury department, office to the governmental lapidaries and always being heavily patrolled by the most elite guards of the Juggernaut forces – the Castigates. Floor three is the official Council chamber, where each member of the Paragon carries out their duties to discuss issues from across the city and attempt to find the means to solve them, though anymore most discourse ends in heated debate with little solution being reached. The remainder of the building serves as the housing chambers for the Paragon, with floors nineteen through twenty-three acting as the housing for the Prime Paragon – the five chief officials elected from each of their respective districts to oversee all Paragon proceedings.
Though there is a twenty-fourth and twenty-fifth floor, the actual purposes of these levels are entirely hidden from the general populace. On the few occasions that the reason for their existence were called into question, the Prime Paragon has stated that these floors are either extensions of the living quarters or perform as worship space, though the validity of these claims have come under much scrutiny in recent inquiries.

Juggernaut Citadel
Just beside Paragon Keep sits the broad, gray, and cold Juggernaut Citadel, headquarters for the city’s elite military force. Though only half as tall as it’s neighboring spire, this stronghold houses the thousands of officers required to thoroughly police the grandiose magnitude of Glimhollow, and as such measures the girth of an extravagant fortress. Though little is known about the interior of this monumental building, it is commonly understood that the center of the bastion is the Chief Commissioner’s residency, and that rank-residency decreases as one moves closer to the outside, with trainee Cadets being stationed along the outer walls.

Ivory Way
The Ivory Way serves as the main path of travel through the Sky District, starting and ending at the mouth of the Drop-Ferry and wrapping its way around the entirety of Hallivarr. All along the edges of the white sandstone brick-way are an assortment of elegant shops, exquisite restaurants, majestic theatres, and refined museums. Upon witness of this marvelous display of art and décor, it comes as no surprise that this road is acclaimed as being the most beautiful display of wealth in nearly all of Peylor.

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Appropriately dubbed the Pale District, Wid is home to the largest concentration of elfenkind in all of Peylor. After the attempted genocide of the elfen peoples at the end of the second era, an exodus of elves flocked into the Dunes so as to find refuge in the city of Glimhollow; a decision considered to the rest of Peylor as an assurance of their demise. Surprisingly enough, the elves were able to brave the Dunes for a long three-month journey – now referred to as the Burning Egress – and even assimilate into the predominantly human culture upon arrival; and as a consequence, most of their culture was either lost or integrated into that of the general populace.
Notably opulent when compared to the other districts – with the exception of Hallivarr – Wid is set just below the Sky District, illustrating the pyramid of wealth that Glimhollow is established upon. Though it isn’t entirely uncommon to see dwarves or humans sauntering about this district, the residents of Wid pride themselves in their elfen heritage, believing themselves to be the last remaining symbol of elfenkind – despite the evident diminishment of their language and traditional lifestyle. However, Wid has recently come under severe hardship, as the divulgence of the Pale Plague has the entirety of the elfen community in disarray, worried that such a contagion cannot be suppressed.

The Gardens
The Gardens are the city’s main source of vegetation, managed entirely by the once jungle-dwelling elves and quenched by a continuous supply of water from the Deepwell. Since the Garden’s construction, Glimhollow has been able to sustain a growing populace exponentially larger than before, and as such is regarded as one of the most important sites in the entire city – with well-regarded recognition of the Bellows that keep the water pumping upward. While the main Gardens are located on the western side of the Wid, the actual expanse of the growing verdure circles the entirety of the Pale District, lining the Inner Wall with an abundance of fruits, vegetables, and herbs.

Silver Square
Silver Square is perhaps the most elegant section within Glimhollow that isn’t confined to the Sky District – set in the center of Wid, this hub of commerce and gossip encircles the Drop-Ferry station, where citizens come to spend their hard-earned coins for high-end clothing and dining that is still reasonably affordable. From the Square stems eight main brick-ways that lead to the different sides of the District, until they all meet along the edge of the Inner Wall where they connect to the Silver Ring – the outermost brick-way that circles the Inner Wall and connects each of the main roads.

The Ivy Leaf
On the southern edge of Wid, a small wooden building rests tightly between two larger sandstone structures, standing out in its mahogany color as one of the few establishments in the entirety of Glimhollow built entirely of lumber. This is the Ivy Leaf, an esteemed tavern and inn serving as the headquarters of the Eildi Society – an elfen-nationalist organization that has grown in influence over the past half-century among the residents of the Pale District. Their goal: establish a contingency to traverse their way across the Dunes and reclaim the jungles of Eir.
Of course, you could always order yourself a couple of drinks and fall out the door, even if nationalism isn’t your style.

The Wan Veranda
In the wake of the Pale Plague’s proliferation, a ward for the sickly and dying was necessary to ensure that any outbreak from the disease would be swiftly subdued. As such, the Wan Veranda was constructed in the northern portion of the Pale District, placed opposite the Inner Wall to ensure that entry to the disease-ridden populace was properly secured from any possible spreading of contaminants. Though originally built to be a temporary clinic, the Veranda has since been converted into a full-fledged infirmary, housing hundreds of afflicted elves that have had the unfortunate circumstance of showing symptoms of the Plague.
The entirety of medical personnel here is strictly human or dwarfen, as they have proven to be impervious to the disease and as such can offer the best treatment without risk of catching the contagion. This distinction of racial care can be quite taxing on the mental state of some patients, as many elves feel discomfort when being handled by members of races that had previously sought an elfen extinction. However, no matter the elf’s outlook, one thing is for certain: if an elf finds himself inside the Veranda, he will almost certainly never leave.

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The first level of the city visited by travelers and geographic center of Glimhollow, Brenson is the most populated and busiest district of the entire metropolis, appropriately named the Gold District for its distinct yellow coloration and role in the city’s economy. Experiencing the heaviest traffic at all times of the year, Brenson is built upon a thick level of sandstone, iron, and rock mined from the Pits to ensure that it can withstand the sheer weight of the city above it. The Gold District is split into a Northern and Southern precinct, separated by the Bazaar stretching to the east and Roberham Hall to the west. Both precincts are housed by the city’s human population, making this District the heaviest populated of all the city’s sections, as well as the previous seat of the old government when Glimhollow was still primarily a mining community.
The Southern precinct is predominantly populated by engineers, artisans, builders, and craftsmen of similar trades, whereas the Northern precinct is home to the majority of the city’s human scholars, orators, alchemists, and clergymen; though such a divide becomes less prevalent the closer one gets to the District’s central latitude, where the majority of the merchants and shopkeeps set their stores and boutiques.

The Gateway
Broad as thirty dwarves and tall as a hundred men, the Gateway to Glimhollow rests along the eastern side of the Outer Wall, opening only twice a month as the much-anticipated Kevol Caravan enters and leaves the city, bringing with them an extensive variety of goods, travelers, and reports from the rest of Peylor. While technically separate from the main portion of Brenson, the Gateway is maintained and operated by a combination of Juggernaut patrolmen and Brensonian engineers, as is the space dividing the Inner and Outer Walls.
Built from two monumental slabs of limestone from the ceiling of Deepwell, the Gateway is elaborately cut and decorated with a mosaic of artwork from some of the finest stonemasons and sculptors in Glimhollow’s history, making it perhaps the heaviest piece of art in all of Peylor. Despite the severe sandstorms that erode the sides of the Outer Wall, the Gateway is coated in a protective resin from the Gardens each year, allowing the artwork to remain practically untouched by the sands and winds that so thoroughly grind against the city’s most prominent portal.

The Bazaar
The Bazaar is the single-largest marketplace in all of Glimhollow, stretching through Brenson’s central avenue to the mouth of the Inner Wall, where each month thousands of residents flock to peruse the incoming wares and outgoing merchandise with the Kevol Caravans. The majority of the city’s more prominent storefronts are located along the north and south sides of the Bazaar, as well as a variety of pop-up stands and stalls filling the alleys and brick-ways nearby when there is no longer room to set up these makeshift shops. Almost any variety of goods can be bought here, from fresh, exotic fruits to treasured and costly textiles, and even the somewhat-illicit armament of sparkpistols – so long as they aren’t supplied with any sort of crystal canister.

Roberham Hall
Following the Bazaar past the Drop-Ferry station and across the Golden Court lands one at the entrance to Roberham Hall, prior seat of the city’s government and renovated housing for the Kevol Caravans. Though only occupied a single evening per month, Roberham Hall still acts as a monument for holidays and city-wide festivals, as its width stretches from the center of Glimhollow toward the face of the Inner Wall, allowing an immense occupancy of nearly ten-thousand if required. The building has been used for an assortment of important events, from the wakes of prominent officials to wedding ceremonies for members of the Paragon and Juggernaut Council.

Quillsman Manor
Approximately set in the center of the Northern precinct, the Quillsman Manor house is the base of operations for the Librettist’s Guild – a fellowship of playwrights, poets, and scripters whose professions are otherwise banned in Glimhollow. Due to the severe scarcity of paper in the city, the task of writing with quill and ink is reserved to chiefly members of the government, however a demand for calligraphic education in the year 3E194 established the Guild as a distinct school of writing, where members of the city’s elite can go to gain the skills necessary for pencraft. As such, the Manor is a uniquely distinct area of Brenson for its pomposity and exclusivity, making it one of the wealthiest and most difficult leagues to gain admission in the whole city.

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As the site where the first pick struck the stone that would later widen out into the bottom half of Glimhollow, Shenul is a region of heritage and history, despite its modern charge as a colony of thugs and degenerates. Upper Shenul fortunately has the higher esteem of the two districts: previously a natural deposit of the enchanted spark crystals, this district was entirely carved out of the landscape for its coveted jewels over the span of two-hundred years, carefully etched and mined away to leave the rocks shaped so they could support the weight of the growing community above them. Now colloquially the Red District, Upper Shenul is given such a crimson title in reference to both its scarce glow from the sun and as the seat of the Bellows, giving the entire district a distinct vermilion hue by day and a deep maroon shade by night.
Populated by predominantly dwarfen families, Upper Shenul is built like a funnel, with the highborn households dispersed across the upper rim in the August Estates, and the laboring tribes scattered throughout the slanting cone. While it isn’t unheard of for humans and half-breeds to inhabit this region, such individuals are typically to be found along the lowest levels of the district, falling in-line with their social standing.

The Bellows
The Bellows are the heart, lungs, and veins of the city – burning the energy from the spark crystals mined below, the Bellows push water, heat, and energy through the whole of Glimhollow, ensuring a continuity of power for the various districts and keeping the metropolis running. With hundreds of forges filling its chambers, the workers of the Bellows are often exposed to heat greater than even the Dunes themselves, and as such can come under exhaustion and stroke if extreme amounts of labor are requested of them. As such, the Bellows also has its own clinic to service these individuals (almost all of them dwarves), as well as a pool of water pumped directly from the aquifer below.

Drop-Alley
The plans for an automated, sanctioned conveyor system across the height of the city underwent numerous developments, including a popular choice of numerous different lifts split across all of the districts. However, partway through this plan’s original assembly, due to the incredible cost and manpower needed for such a system, the idea was scrapped for a more streamlined, singular model. The resulting abandonment left the residents of Upper Shenul with a conspicuous crater in the western sector of their district, and the rock and sand that was exhumed from this hole was already being implemented in numerous other city projects. So, instead of filling the void, Drop-Alley was ingeniously devised – a gorge of stores and repositories, serving as the Red District’s hub of commerce and storage.

August Estates
Scattered across the upper perimeter of the Red District are the dignified manors of the August Estates, where the majority of the dwarfen highborn make residence. These families can trace their lineages back to the foundation of Glimhollow, when the first dwarfen miners discovered the great deposit of spark crystals in the most unlikely region of the Dunes. As such, these clans often also hold lead political, social, or economic positions, ruling over the majority of business and culture within Upper Shenul.

Scarlet Quarter
In the lowest portion of the Red District rests the Scarlet Quarter – the unofficial filter of perversion from either half of Shenul. Aptly named for the notable concentration of courtesans and hustlers, the Quarter is where many men of the Gray District travel to escape from the regular turmoil of the streets below. The most notable building in this area of town is called the Rusty Rut – a rather conspicuous brothel that gets away with its perverse business practices by buying off and ‘servicing’ the regional police.

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In stark contrast to its brother district, Lower Shenul embraces the connotation of abhorrence often belittling the underground portion of Glimhollow, being populated almost entirely with lawless lowlifes, impoverished outcasts, and apathetic addicts. The Gray District is dimly lit with the greenish-glow of sparklamps, allowing for the frequent infractions that plague the Underfolk. There’s notably a minimal Juggernaut presence here – save for the dense guard patrols inside the Pits – as the elite police force seems only interested in pacifying the populace enough to keep them from acting on anarchistic ambitions.
As the Gray District was dug away, a sharp decline in the amount of spark crystals harvested from the stone brought with it a concern that the entire city would have to be abandoned, though with the breakthrough to Deepwell, as well as the discovery of a giant deposit in what would come to be known as the Pits, hope for the continued growth of the city grew as the population rose upward into the sky far above. However, this expansion left behind a despondent community of those Glimhollow cared little to remember – particularly half-breeds, as the children of these bastard unions of man, dwarf, or elf have the deplorable affliction of sterility, making these scorned souls appear as little more than mules in the eyes of the pure-bred living above.

The Pits
The Pits are the city’s penitentiary, as well as the site of the largest known supply of spark crystals that have yet to be harvested. As such, the unfortunate souls that find themselves unlucky enough to be locked up here are forced to mine the rock in penance for their misdeeds, whether they be serving short spouts for petty thievery, or life-sentences for the murder of a noble.
Heavily patrolled by some of the most elite members of the Juggernaut forces, the Castigates, no one has ever managed to escape the confines of the cragged prison, as even fights between inmates are swiftly cut short with a single shot of a sparkrifle from these brutal jailkeepers. There is no consequence for these Castigates if they should kill a prisoner, as those who are forced to work here are already deemed the lowest members of society and would be better off killed than to have valuable resources wasted on their preservation.

The Nest
Just a few stories above the mouth of Deepwell sits a run-down, rickety cabin simply called the Nest. This ramshackle shed is the headquarters of the nefarious Dusthawks, a rag-tag team of lowlifes and miscreants that have gained some prominence in the Gray District over the past few years for their involvement with the revolutionary movement started by Rikoris Lex – the self-proclaimed liberator of the half-breeds and impoverished presiding within Lower Shenul. Though they don’t necessarily run with Lex’s organization, the Dusthawks have been regarded as Lexian sympathizers, despite the fact that they’ve only been employed by Lex’s men twice in the past five years.
Upon entering the Nest, the interior is little more than a typical Underfolk hut: a cramped, musty room with a few chairs, a hearth, and a bar against the north wall, with enough space beside the eastern hearth for about four individuals to lie in relative comfort. Though uncomfortably congested when the whole Dusthawk team is present, the space is typically only inhabited by two or three members at a time, as most affiliates will drift in and out to receive payment and pick up their next mark. Other than the western doorway, there are two exits from the building – one through the hearth’s chimney and another under the bar, opening into a hatch that tunnels through the floor to the sewers below.

Drunkard’s Compass
The one good place to get some brew in Lower Shenul is in the unlikeliest of places: set just above a prominent sewer ditch, the Drunkard’s Compass’s motto dictates that if you can’t stand the smell, buy another drink. One of the few establishments in the Gray District that has security outside the Juggernauts, the Compass serves as the single haven of refreshment below the surface that has minimal regulation or rules. Just don’t cause any problems, or Bruto’s brutes will throw you into the muck and filth below.

The Weeping Fiddle
A popular alternative to the Compass, the Weeping Fiddle is set in a slightly more aromatic side of town, though with a much greater presence of Juggernaut forces policing the area. A surprisingly decent place to catch some live musicianship and order half-decent booze, the Fiddle is set just a few plots above the mouth of Drop-Ferry station, and as such enjoys a livelier crowd than the impecunious inns below.

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Beneath the mines of the city lies a vast, pitch-dark aquifer with no known edges – Deepwell. Discovered during a tragic mining accident when the Pits were still active quarries, Deepwell has since become a major role in the preservation and development of Glimhollow, acting as the city’s primary source of water and continuous provider of the marvelous spark crystals – the very lifeblood of the city’s energy. Stemming from the base of the Drop-Ferry to the air just above the aquifer’s waters is the masterfully crafted Cranelift Marina, where the numerous sparkboats tie anchor after their journeys into the Deep. While most within the city regard Deepwell as a foul, accursed sea, few would dare discount it’s necessity as Glimhollow’s sustenance.

Cranelift Marina
The Marina is the single place below the surface that is devoid of the social and economic feuds plaguing the rest of Glimhollow. A colony of seafarers, Cranelift Marina is home to a variety of men, dwarves, elves, and half-breeds alike that seek adventure and solitude amidst the waves of Deepwell. If one can afford themselves a sparkboat and a crew, they can proudly bear the title of Captain, regardless of how they’d be looked upon in the city above. Most residents who spend their time at the Marina operate the cranes that transport shipments of spark crystal or tend to the dockside, repairing and maintaining any damages incurred from falling stalactites or the wear and tear of the waves upon the hanging anchors.

Factions of Glimhollow

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Though numerous gangs exist within the Gray District, few have gained as much notoriety in recent years as the Dusthawks. Historically a band of thieves and cutthroats, these criminals have seen a growth in business and recognition since their involvement with the Lexian Resistance, earning them respect among the impoverished Underfolk and unwanted attention from the Juggernauts. Such status has been the subject of controversy within the group, however most members that were defiant to the prestige have since left the gang or endured the cost of celebrity.
Led by the attentive and resourceful Adnos Valrel, the Dusthawks make their base at the Nest: an admittedly shoddy abode toward the bottom of Lower Shenul, where members come to pick up payments for successful hits and select their next mark. While they rarely have full-blown meetings, Valrel will on occasion call for all of the Dusthawks to return to the Nest in the event they have a significantly sized job to settle, as with the growing unrest stirring the people from complacence in the lowest district, the Dusthawks must ensure that they maintain their foothold within the community, and so long as Rikoris Lex’s little rebellion continues to distract the Juggernauts from their primary duties, this gang is sure to have major plans in store for their own rise to power.

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With fifteen council chairs and five executive desks, the Paragon Council is a coalition of twenty elected officials chosen for their intellect, oration, or beliefs to ensure the continued prosperity of the whole of Glimhollow. Though, in recent elections, the division of cooperation has widened beyond feasible proportions, causing the majority of time in assembly to be little more than petty squabbling and fierce debate, with minimal legislation actually being passed. The only thing that the Paragon can seem to agree on is that the city is erupting into a state of chaos, and that so long as they cannot come to a consensus, the city will remain just so. This infighting and ferocity has resulted in the growing prevalence of the Juggernaut Corps in most municipal affairs, while the wealthy elites who make up the Paragon work behind each other’s backs to ensure their election this next cycle and the failure of their adversaries.
The Prime Paragon is perhaps the most enigmatic of the membership, as the five governors have recently taken to spending an unjustifiable amount of time in the height of Paragon Keep, locking themselves away in the upper floors for days on end without any word being sent to the rest of the Council. Rumors have spread across the city of brilliant lights being shone from the windows of the twenty-fifth floor of the Keep in the dark of night, but these suggestions are often dismissed as hoaxes or fabrications as no great audience has ever witnessed these occurrences. Regardless, the increase of absences from the Prime Paragon, as well as the omission of resolution amidst the remaining Council has brought the encroaching election into the forefront of nearly everyone’s mind – for if something cannot be done to resolve the crisis spreading throughout the city, many citizens are expecting the very worst to occur.

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The Juggernaut Enforcement & Castigation Corps, often shortened to Juggernauts, is an elite military police that administers legal prosecution and civil order across the whole of Glimhollow for the sake of maintaining a sense of peace for the residents and civilians of all five city districts. At least, this is what they advertise themselves to be: in truth, the Juggernauts are the executive and judicial branches of government within Glimhollow, acting as the iron fist of the Paragon to ensure that social stability is maintained, allowing for the division between the wealthy and impoverished members of society to continue stretching in opposite directions.
Led by the delusional and domineering Chief Commissioner Delin Òllivar, the Juggernauts have evolved into a ruthless martial power, using their strength in numbers and authorized weaponry to brutally punish those that would question the law. For many, the only way to escape such persecution is to simply join the Corps, subjecting themselves to near-torturous indoctrination for the sake of protecting their families.
The Juggernaut Enforcement & Castigation Corps has a unique chain of command, stemming into two separate branches that work to maintain order in the city and within the Corps. Most Juggernauts begin their service as a Cadet, undergoing significant training and indoctrination to ensure that they are physically and psychologically fit to serve the Corps. After being promoted to Officer, Juggernauts are finally stationed throughout the city under a Corporal, a position an Officer can achieve after five years in the service. Corporals report to the regional Sergeants, who are the last members of the force to maintain a rank outside of the advanced branches.
Upon attaining the rank of Sergeant, Juggernauts have undergone severe mental and physical conditioning, and are then promoted to either the rank of Castigate or Controller. Castigates, the more prominent membership, are considered the pinnacle Juggernaut Enforcer, and are used as guards for members of the Paragon, as well as the guardsmen patrolling the Pits below the city. After serving as a Castigate for seven years, and with the request for promotion, each Castigate is assessed for advancement to the rank of Captain – a position not unlike that of a Corporal, but with a significantly higher paygrade and esteem. Most Captains will maintain their rank until retirement, though those who have distinguished themselves in the line of duty can gain the rare opportunity to be promoted to Commander, at which point they can oversee the operation of a precinct: any of five regions within a city District, with a total of twenty-five precincts in all. From here, though it is exceptionally infrequent, the Commander can achieve a station of Commissioner, who supervises an entire District, as well as being one of five individuals who can gain the honor of becoming Chief Commissioner – the figurehead and spokesman of the entire Juggernaut Corps.
Controllers, on the other hand, are a unique and little-known echelon of the Juggernauts: selected for their intellect and discretion, these Sergeants are given the opportunity to work in the internal affairs department, dealing solely with affairs pertaining to current or ex-members of the organization. Presumably led by a Chief Controller who acts independently of the Castigate branch, these reconnaissance officers have the harrowing task of keeping Juggernaut secrets within the Corps, ‘taking care’ of ex-members that would go about spreading this information to the public. Though few claim to have seen a Controller in action, each of these officers do well to cover up their tracks, making any such claims easily dismissible and the distinguishing rank seem like no more than a rumor to deter Juggernaut-related discussions among ex-officers.

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Rikoris Lex and his rebellion have gained a rather significant foothold in Lower Shenul, stirring the oppressed populace into action against the Juggernaut forces and staging a surprisingly successful campaign through the entire Gray District. By the end of 3E525, Lex had risen from obscurity as an unusually rousing orator, criticizing the apathy weighing over the destitute Underfolk and calling for a revolution; a treasonous act that often results in severe penance or execution. However, in spite of the massive bounty on Lex’s head, the freedom fighter has somehow managed to remain active in his insurgency for seven years, avoiding countless assassination attempts and rallying an immense crowd of half-breed followers, each of them enraptured in a fervor to break free of their destitution.
Officially established in 3E527, the Lexian Resistance has staged successful coups across numerous regions of Lower Shenul, deposing three minor Juggernaut departments and even plotting a raid on one of the five precinct offices, though this incursion was cut short after the arrival of Castigates broke the crowd and resulted in two half-breed deaths. Such anarchistic tendencies have elicited unfavorable views from the upper districts, with the majority of the city’s populace discrediting the Resistance as nothing more than an unwarranted disobedience. The fact that the Paragon nor the Juggernauts have called to mobilize against the Resistance suggests that there is something deeper fueling this continued rebellion, though nothing can be explicitly pointed out as the agent or catalyst.

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In 3E463, the grandchildren of the nobility of Eir gathered to establish a long-awaited and much-anticipated contingency for a homeland reclamation. Calling themselves the Eildi Society – an ancient elfish term for Liberty – these elves affirmed themselves independent of interracial support and vowed to develop a self-sustaining society within the city-nation of Glimhollow, determined to use their influence to gain the support of Widish residents for their appointment into the Paragon. Now, over half a century later, the Eildi Society holds one of the three council seats from the Pale District and is determined to completely fill the offices in the upcoming election.
However, with the sudden disruption caused by the Pale Plague, the Eildi Society’s goals have switched to more pressing matters – the preservation of its waning race. As such, great measures have been taken to ensure that pure-bred elves are continuously given treatment against the Plague, and that funding is being given to the developers of the cinder tonic to mitigate addiction and withdrawal symptoms from the otherwise remedial potion. This compassion is limited to pure-breeds, however, as the Eildi Society sees half-bred elves as the downfall of their already diminishing species and will do anything in their power to prevent the reproduction of these sterile peoples.

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The Kevol teams and their drivers are some of the most hardy, tenacious caravans in all of Peylor, making the journey through the Dunes with a vast cargo of supplies and commodities from across the known world. The Kevol are a peculiar kind of creature, broad in build and standing tall on two muscular, leathery legs, their beaks jutting out from their stout bodies as if Nuen, God of Creation forgot to give these orange-bellied sand-farers a neck to bend with. Their elephantine stature enables them to drag or carry monumental loads across the Dunes, and their blackened, rough hides aid in deterring the sun’s heat during the day and keeping them warm at night.
There are three trains of caravans, each over one-thousand kevol strong, that traverse the Dunes, each of them traveling for two full cycles before resting for their third cycle. This ensures that there are always two active expeditions, so that when the two caravans intersect one another in their voyage, they will bring with them information crucial to both profitability and security. The three trains are referred to as follows:

• the Red Team, led by the dwarven driver Gondyr Horvold;
• the Yellow Team, escorted by the Irin Brothers, Nevvy and Dilly;
• and the Violet Team, guarded by Madam Frostyearn’s mercenary-brigade.

Timeline

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Conventionally regarded as an amassing of mythology and folklore, much of the First Era is regarded as the time when the races of Peylor had their conferences with the Gods, became familiar with their corners of the continent, and identified themselves as beings distinct from, but still a part of the natural world.
Dwarves were swift to retreat into their mountain caves, imagining their Gods abandoning them as they delved into the realms of science and theology. Humans praised their Gods as beings who crafted the world and became pieces of its structure, resolving the race to spread across its surface rapidly in search of each deity’s place of rest. Elves, peculiarly, thought of the Gods as being all of the same God, and this God being a piece of everything, contenting the race to remain in their jungles, exploring and expanding only when the call for adventure deafened the ears of their youth.
The actual length of the First Era has often been the subject of debate between scholars and clergymen, ranging anywhere from some few-hundred years, to an immense, incalculable number of millennia.

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The beginning of the Second Era is regarded as the first occurrence of cross-racial communication, set between the adventuring elves of the far west with the dwarves of the south. Spanning over a five-hundred-year period, this era is regarded as a time of knowledge, navigation, and conquest.

Prominent Dates:

2E01: Dwarves emerge from their mountain-halls to discover established colonies of elves throughout the western hills of Gasholl. These elves, in their suspicion of these brawny figures, withdrew from the region. Both sides view the other’s presence as an aggressive stance, and due to miscommunication and a lack of trust, fighting between the two races occurs over the next five-hundred years.
2E143: Shenul, the mining colony which would eventually grow into Glimhollow, is established in the central Dunes, after the discovery of an immeasurable horde of a powerful, brilliantly beautiful green jewel, dubbed spark crystal.
2E304: Glimhollow is officially founded as the Beacon of the Dunes, as the continued growth and prosperity of the desert colony has amassed an influx of travelers from Berevin and Gasholl to stake their claim and seek their fortune.
2E486: The Burning Egress occurs; an exodus of elfenkind traverses the Dunes toward Glimhollow to find shelter from the death or slavery otherwise ensured for those who remained in Eir. The Deposition of the Stone Thrones also occurs this year, starting a civil war among the dwarves that last for nearly a decade.
2E495: The final year of the Second Era; the dwarven civil war ends, with the usurper kings remaining in power and pledging their aid to the human nation of Berevin; mankind has officially succeeded in their conquest of Peylor, ushering in a new era of peace.

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After mankind finished their conquest of Peylor, a new era of relative peace fell over the known world as the established nations settled into their borders and focused inwardly on growth and outwardly on trade. The elves that had been enslaved into dwarven and southern human societies gradually integrated themselves into the general populace, with most of their culture and past way of life dissolving along with this integration. Now, five-hundred years since the beginning of the era, petty feuds and rivalries have begun to resurface within human nations, ushering in a prospective new era of war – but this conflict has yet to come to much fruition.

Prominent Dates:

3E174: Firearms are invented in the shrublands of Hulstead as an alternative form for hunting; this ingenuity quickly spreads throughout most of civilization and is recognized for its efficient ability to maim and kill.
3E194: The Librettist’s Guild is established in Brenson of Glimhollow, as paper – an expensive commodity in the city – is allowed usage within the guild, the first and only instance of the Paragon permitting the sale of paper outside of their own service.
3E463: Descendants of the elfish nobility of Eir gather to establish the Eildi Society, an exclusive elven membership to begin planning for the exodus back to Eir.
3E470: Spark-arms are successfully constructed in Glimhollow, with the invention of the wheellock mechanism and oval boring design.
3E472: Paragon legislation passed to deter the selling of fully constructed spark-arms in Glimhollow, as sanctions are put on the application of spark crystals and their technology.
3E497: The Dusthawks are established in the slums of Lower Shenul by one Lorick Vahn
3E510: The Pale Plague appears in the elder elven community of Wid; the contagion appears limited to the elder or already-feeble
3E517: Cinder Tonic is successfully synthesized and released to the general public as a precaution against the Pale Plague; addiction to the Tonic amongst sufferers of the Plague begins to run rampant, prompting an immediate withdrawal of the concoction.
3E518: Cinder Tonic is re-released in spite warnings of addiction due to a hysteric populace, as the tonic is the only known deterrent.
3E520: Numerous cases of the Pale Plague begin to sweep across Wid, prompting the construction of a ward for the quarantine of elven patients.
3E523: Juggernaut Castigates lay siege to the original Nest, headquarters to the Dusthawks; Lorick Vahn is among the fallen, eliciting Second-in-Command Adnos Valrel to become the new leader of the gang, most members disband immediately after, and Valrel disappears, causing the Dusthawks to cease operations indefinitely; construction of the Wan Veranda in Wid is completed, prompting the influx of numerous Plague sufferers from across the district to be isolated from the masses; half-breed elves with the Plague are refused admittance into the Veranda due to Eildi Society discrimination.
3E524: Most recent election of the Paragon; Eildi Society have a notable victory as one of their prestigious members, Rolim Omakas, is given a seat in the Paragon Council.
3E525: Adnos Valrel resumes leadership of the Dusthawks, ushering forth a new wave of membership within the gang along with the establishment of a new Nest; Rikoris Lex rises from obscurity around this same time, provoking the civilians of the Gray District to rise up against the Paragon.
3E527: The Lexian Resistance is officially founded; the Dusthawks unwittingly conscribe into the Resistance’s plan to raid a Paragon Councilman’s estate as well as depose a prominent Juggernaut department in the bottom-most precinct of the Gray District; the Lexian Resistance declines all collusion between the parties, while the Dusthawks and Resistance become household names.
3E528: The Lexian Resistance deposes a second and third Juggernaut department in the lowest city precinct.
3E530: The Lexian Resistance attempts to besiege a Juggernaut Precinct office in the Gray District, though Castigate presence deters the assault.
3E532: Present year

Life in Glimhollow

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The city of Glimhollow is significantly different than the normalcy experienced throughout the rest of Peylor - here, mechanized power and devices are the norm, permeating into everyday life and expediting menial labor. Of course, such technological advancement wouldn't be possible without the main lifeblood of the city - spark crystals, and they're manufactured application.

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The strange, pulsing green jewels found beneath the earth in the Dunes glow with an eerie, ethereal energy. Spark crystals, as they’ve come to be called, are named for their diamond-like durability, causing sparks to fly off of the pickaxes that strike them. Imbued with incredible energetic qualities, these precious stones have since been converted into sources of power for the numerous machines developed across Glimhollow, most notably being used to fuel the Bellows in the Red District and be cut into cylindrical capsules that can be mounted into automatons and tools. One such peculiar use for these gems is the enrichment of soils, whereupon being ground into a fine powder and strewn into the dirt will enrich seemingly barren plots of land and have thus been employed in the Gardens of Wid to maximize crop production in ways that weren’t fathomable to these same plants in their native climates.
Despite swaths of alchemical research and countless experiments, very little is known of the chemical properties of spark crystals, and their synthesis for creation is entirely unknown. Theories suggest that millennia of intense heat and pressure placed upon the remains of deceased creatures could cause for their formation, but nothing is truly understood about these stones beyond their immense source of energy.

Machinery
Most mechanisms in Glimhollow are built of metals found beneath the city; the majority of which are bronze, copper, and iron. Powered by spark capsules – a cylindrically cut spark crystal often locked in a glass canister – these machinations can perform a variety of tasks, from basic tools performing more expediently to automated tramways assisting the transport of peoples and goods, from self-rowing spark-boats stirring the waters of Deepwell to gargantuan automatons, built to haul monumental loads and pacify aggressors. While these larger automatons are typically restricted to city officials, advanced gadgets and apparatuses are rather commonplace in Glimhollow, causing the majority of simple tools to be viewed as obsolete.

Spark-arms
The ordnance of Glimhollow is far more advanced than the firearms of the rest of Peylor, whereas most foreign guns use a matchlock firing system, spark-arms employ the wheellock mechanism into their design and implement a thin plate of spark crystal, dubbed a spark disk, into the wheel-axle. While still relatively costly in production, spark-arms have been heavily implemented into the Juggernaut arsenal, praised for their reliability and ease of preparation compared to their matchlock counterparts. Both varieties of spark-arms are predominantly muzzle-loaded, though recently breech-loaded designs have surfaced in the market, though often these guns are significantly higher in price.
Sparkpistols, being the only variety available to the general public, are technically not allowed to be sold in a finished state, with their spark disks being entirely absent from the wheel mechanism due to the governmental sanctions on spark crystal manufacturing, though most craftsmen will still be allowed to sell the gunpowder and rounds to accompany their weaponry. However, spark disks can still be bought and sold on the black market, often at an exceptionally greater price than they would be found otherwise due to their significantly small size.
Sparkrifles, however, are strictly limited to the usage of the Juggernaut Corps, and any civilian caught wielding a rifle will immediately be apprehended, regardless of whether the spark disk is present in the wheellock’s axle. While the gun’s barrel may appear a simple smoothbore, the barrels of these guns are actually slightly ovular in shape, which is spun to create the effects of rifling, improving the gun’s accuracy and range significantly. This enables the usage of a variety of munitions to be fired from these rifles, allowing the wielder to choose between a long-ranged, tactical fire or an up-close, scattered shot.

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Across the whole of Peylor are sites of petrified forests, even buried beneath the sands of the Dunes, suggesting that the entire continent was once lushly covered in an array of immaculate, gargantuan wooded flora. The economies of the world began to use the polished and rounded carvings from these trunks as a form of currency, with certain colors representing different values and being used as a commodity to measure weight and length. While gold and silver can still be seen trading hands in Gasholl, wood stones, as they have come to be called, or simply stones, are accepted as a viable form of payment across the whole of Peylor, as they’re difficult to counterfeit and have even been used in jewelry for their vibrant color and elaborate engravings from their craftsman, called a lapidary.
There are five different types of stone, each of them being cut into a disk approximately an inch in diameter and weighing in at about half an ounce:

• Wood, a yellow/brown color, is the lowest denomination and most common variety
• Jet, a deep black shade, valued at two wood stone
• Rose, either red or pink colored, valued at five jet, or ten wood stone
• Vert, a range of green hues, valued at two rose, or twenty wood stone
• Tarn, a deep blue shade, valued at five vert, or one-hundred wood stone

Due to the relative scarcity of vert and tarn stones, most people carry around an assortment of wood, jet, and rose, paying for the majority of goods in these units.

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Though the origins of the disease are still a mystery, one thing is absolute – the Pale Plague is a contagion that has swept across the elfen populace of Glimhollow with inconceivable celerity. First noted among the older members of the populace, the sickness is usually identified as an extreme discoloration of the skin, accompanied with wet cough, uncontrollable sweating, fever, and even minor tremors. More severe cases will result in vomiting, seizures, fainting, heart palpitations, and, ultimately, death. While most sufferers are quarantined off in the Wan Veranda, its difficult to discern whether an elf has the sickness until it’s no longer treatable, at which point they can attempt to mask it with the curative, but highly-addictive cinder tonic, or submit to the frequent calls from Juggernaut patrolmen to join the masses in the Veranda.
Unfortunately, the Plague isn’t isolated to just pure-bred elves. Half-breeds with an elfen parent are just as susceptible to the disease, though due to their lowly status, they aren’t allowed entry to the Veranda, and can rarely afford the tonic to deter the affliction from spreading. As such, the Plague has made swift work of the Underfolk, with countless bodies piling up in the district’s sewers with no location for them to be buried. This has caused an even greater outbreak of pestilence in Lower Shenul, as humans, dwarves, and their half-bred kin are just as likely to fall ill from the contamination riddling the streets.

Cinder Tonic
Synthesized just as the Pale Plague was beginning to adversely affect the whole of Wid, cinder tonic is the single-known medicine to deter the effects of the Plague from the drinker. A horrifically bitter, spicy brew, the tonic is horrifyingly addictive, with most elves developing withdrawal symptoms after a single dosage. This usually isn’t an issue for the elves of the Pale District, as their affluence affords them numerous prescriptions, but for the impoverished half-breeds of the Gray District this can often only worsen their suffering, causing rashes to sprout across the whole body, as well as mind-splitting migraines interrupting their everyday activities. The recipe for the tonic’s creation is still kept secret from the masses, adding to the outrage of the Underfolk’s grievances, though no quarter is being given to dampen their pain.

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