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Current Recently returned from an extended period of. . . not being here, I guess? Looking to start some stories, so gimme a message if you've got ideas you think I might like!
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@LostDestiny
Yep. Sure are and please do. Also, my own character is up. She's missing a couple things but I need to figure them out or they're already in the cs lol
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I would love to read it over, but what kind of critiquing are you looking for?

And... here are some questions, since the OP doesn't have a ton to go by...
-Would it be possible for Catalina to have a car, albeit an old one?
-Is the group meeting all at once, already together, or a mix?
-Where is the group (state, region, country, etc)?

-Do you want me to make up some graphics for the RP?

I'll stay out of the advanced vs casual debate, except to say this: I STARTED rping in advanced, and have been at it for several years now. I am coming to this forum BECAUSE of the casual, as it's something that can be written relatively speedily (with quality, of course) yet still give me that rush from reading other posts, which will be coming faster due to the casual nature. Not that I am dropping advanced styled writing, this is just a nice relaxant. Like a chef making a sandwich instead of a three course meal.


Whatever needs to be said about it really. My writing has some improvement to go though, I just can't pinpoint all my own shortcomings all the time myself.

The OP has enough to go by, and if you follow the outline you know what you don't have :)

1) No she may not. All weaponry, supplies and vehicles are in a group inventory to be set up as of yet.
2) If you missed this then you weren't reading it.
3) Montana
@ViolentViolet I can't promise that I will be able to post 3 paragraphs. Sometimes I get writer's block or my brain is just generally fried. I will do what I can and I am usually good at adjusting to the length other people are posting to but mine may be short sometimes, not one liners (god no never will I ever give a one liner) but it may be anywhere between a paragraph or two. I will do what I can to keep it at three I just thought a fair warning was in order.


Reasonable. I am strict, but compassionate and understanding when it comes to writers block. Angel knows I'm cursed by a picky Muse myself. If you can keep it at two well written ones, with action that gives everyone something to react to I'm happy. I just prefer three, even though I only require the two. Given a week to respond you should be able to manage that. I would hate to play the only female character in our little role play.


The she cat touched noses with her mate once more before he left the cavern with the others in search of the small kit, her tail reaching around the two kits with her and flicking Sagekit on the back of the head lightly. "You do not worry Ravenfeather like that. She's been nothing but good to you." She scolded the kit, acting like a mother already even though her own kits had yet to be born. It bothered her rather easily when any of the kits disrespected the older Queen, or worried her since they were children. They should have known better by then, but none of them paid enough attention, or thought about what they were doing before they went wandering off.

Riversong removed her tail from the kits, curling it over her own paws and watching the remaining warriors within the cavern camp. Her annoyance with Sagekit was clear, even as her own mate was gone, though her worry never faded. Owlkit was small, easy prey for a fox or, more likely, a raptor. He may not have even gotten for before falling or eaten by something and she knew what kind of devastation that would bring to Ravenfeather.





The tom stood as the apprentice paced around him, talking as if he had all the time in the world and for the second time that day, the former rogue realized he was given the most ignorant and idiotic apprentice of them all. He would have much rather have had to answer to the idiot Amberleaf then to deal with this dim-witted apprentice. When the grey tom was finally done talking, Brimpelt was sitting down, his tail curled over his paws, watching something in the distance very intently. Gradually, he forced his attention back to the bore he just had to suffer though speaking and nearly just killed the kit there and then instead of subject those in the clan who were actually worth time to the useless blather this one was spitting out.

The warrior looked at Granitepaw, eyes focusing on him with such sharp attention he could have cut him, and what appeared to be a sly smirk twisted his lips upward, uncovering sharp canines. "Go tend to the elders Granitepaw. Check them for flees and ticks, change their bedding and bring them breakfast. Any word of complaint and you'll never learn to be a warrior." He didn't sound threatening, or call him names this time, instead his order was as firm as that of any respectable leader, and he turned around to walk away from him again, refusing to waste anymore time. "Let's go Snowthorn, we have a fresh kill pile to stock."





The soon-to-be apprentice settled back on her ledge when the warriors left the cavern, her eyes closing as if she was just going back to sleep though she was listening to everything she could hear. Granitepaw was being scolded by Brimpelt, and Riversong was clearly worried about Owlkit. The she-cat, who's pelt matched her nameksake, listened to the mentor-apprentice pair and scoffed quietly at them. The tabby tom could have done much better with an apprentice, herself being the top choice with Harepaw just beneath that. Both had drive and an attitude to match the rogue leaders, though the dolt of a male that bounced around as if he owned the place made her regret coming back here. She had never had much choice in the matter when she was found in clan territory by a ready to attack patrol. If she had refused she would have been chased from the hunting grounds she quite enjoyed, and thus put out of the place she had called home.

With her arrival at the clan she had quickly befriended Brimpelt, having pegged him as the one worth following, and she hadn't been the only one either. Timberfoot had been one of the rogues to come to the clan with the rogue leader, and was also a very respected warrior. Brimpelt had been quick to spot out the difference with Leopardkit, with her abnormal size and solitary attitude, he had begun training her in secret, knowing she may not have a worthy mentor soon. If he was ever leader she was to be his right hand, and most trusted, with his former second dead after a battle with the clan. They both intended to place him at the top of the clans, officially or not.

Standing then, with fewer warriors in the camp, she looked up toward the top of the cavern at the hole in the ceiling, but thought against climbing out it with so many cats able to watch her. If the kits did something stupid trying to mimic her the Queens would blame her instead of the kits stupidity. Leopardkit turned her attention to the cavern floor and jumped from her ledge, unafraid of any injury from the high fall and her rapid descent upon the dirty floor. Once down she glanced back at Riversong watching her, though the young cat didn't care to be seen as the walked straight toward the tunnel that acted as the main entrance to their camp. The place was harder for kits to wander out of unlike the Oakclan camp, and as the young cat walked out she wondered if she should go visit one of the rogues, or perch upon the Oakclan boarder until someone found her. Perhaps something interesting would happen then.
@OneStoryToMany
You can pm me then.

And that goes for anyone with an interest in critiquing my work.
@OneStoryToMany
I can share the first chapter with you on google docs if you want to give me some input on it.
@OneStoryToMany
It's a passion for me, not an obsession. I fully intend to publish the novel I'm writing, via publisher or on my own.

And that, is exactly why I require a single quality post of (preferably) three well-written paragraphs, every week. And I will be satisfied with that as long as you actively participate within the OOC and plot planning. All suggestions are welcome.
Anyone interested in developing the idea/world with me?
@OneStoryToMany
I don't have the time right now to put the work into writing like I would love to. What with school, therapy, and work plus trying to maintain the guise of a healthy social life and my online activities. Oh and playing with me cat. That's really important. I just don't have time. Given enough time and material, and assuming that their Muse is cooperating with them, I think everyone is capable of a good and length, well written post. It's just a bit of effort. But it really does pay off.
@ViolentViolet
Well hey, once he runs out of ammo then Nate'll be practically useless; pretty much all he'll be able to do is punch zombies, and you can make him horrible with a melee weapon (never mentioned him being good at that, did I?).


That is quite true indeed.

Mildly impressed you? Gotta say I feel like I've accomplished something great!

And you're using a crippled college student? That's an interesting character (more realistic too. It's always bothered me how healthy everyone is until *poof* they dead.) I wonder how that'll effect the rp.

Also I'm with theWizardLizard, mindless horde, rage infected, new and vastly suckier, what kinda zombies we dealing with?

@ViolentViolet


You should feel like you accomplished something. It's next to impossible for a casual role player to impress me. <--- is actively an advanced role player but has no interesting ones going on or the care to try right now.

I'll be posting information on the zombies as we get it started, but right now I'll pretty generic. We won't have anything really fancy, like in Left for Dead, but we can have radioactive zoms if we're close to somewhere like that. Their speed and dexterity will depends mostly on the level of damage to the body and decomp.
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