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A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

@TheRider: Okay, um the last real issues I have now are more, um, well I guess I just never really though of vampires being a thing for their setting. ^^;

But the bigger issue is kind of one of my IC ones. Basically, um, as a paladin of Reon, Tanya really dislikes undead. She won't hurt sapient, non-malevolent undead, but she's be VERY unhappy if she discovered his nature by surprise.

@Darcs: Accepted.

@Closet Nerd: I still don't feel his backstory fits in well(the insinuation that the towns around Meridan are disease-ridden hellholes, for one), and I don't really thing the whole "ratman alchemist" thing fits in so well.

On top of that, your decision to make him "add randomness" really does not fill me with confidence.

@Sadko: If you are going to include a backstory, I want to see it. The backstory's only optional if you're not going to include one at all, in the RP or otherwise.

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

Looks like I won't be judging everything tonight. ^^;

Definitely tomorrow, though. For everyone accepted you can get to working on your dungeons.

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

Um, might not have judgment up until tomorrow but we'll see, okay?

I will say I am very sketchy on the idea of a "potion of randomness".

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

I'll look at the edits shortly.

For the moment, the backstory matters if you're going to make one. I want to know what the backstory is before accepting you, if you're going to include one. If not, I'm operating under the assumption that the character's backstory just wasn't that noteworthy.

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

@TheRider: Okay, I want to know how old he actually is(since that determines some of the things he may have been around for) and what shadow manipulation entails.

@Darcs: My issue here is that the descriptions still don't convey what they actually do. Increases defense could mean they get huge suits of armor, or that they get some kind of magical shielding temporarily. "Enemies more susceptible to physical attacks" doesn't really mean anything outside of a context like a video game where enemies can have strict weaknesses and resistances. Unless it's heavily armored or incorporeal, everything's going to be susceptible to physical attacks, and armor can be weakened or worked around. I don't know how these apply to a prose RP at all.

@Archangel: One little detail I didn't quite notice and it's honestly just kind of one of my pet peeves, but obsidian, especially since there's probably not many volcanoes around, probably wouldn't be very useful to make into a longsword. ^^; Otherwise he's fine.

@ThePatriarch: Since you're still planning to add a backstory, I'll wait for now.

@Scarifar: Dungeon accepted.

@Exodus: Accepted.

@LordSanta: My issue is less that he couldn't carry so many weapons and more that he's a bit too adjusted for a whole ton of combat roles since he has so many different weapons.

@ClosetNerd: Okay, um... I have a lot of problems here. ^^;

First off, his backstory honestly doesn't gel well with the rest of the setting at all. You don't explain his abilities, or what orc fever is. His equipment, like the bombs(to a lesser extent) and the spinning flamethrower(biggest offender) are also a bit on the too high tech side for this setting as well.

Transform! A Kamen rider/Sentai inspired RP!

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Magitech Girls! A mecha musume/magical girl monster-fighting RP relaunch!

I'll be posting hopefully soon sorry. ^^;

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

I'm still accepting characters.

I'm going to try and get through the remaining bios I missed or need to judge as well. ^^;

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

@NobleArchangel: He's accepted. Though keep in mind that it's fine to pass through the Veil if you're allowed to, it's more of a "this was so horrendous and tragic that we don't want to" thing for many high elves.

It does make a good defensive position, though.

@Exodus: Change class to champion and he's fine, sorry. ^^;

@Scarifar: Looks good to me!

@Darcs: Sorry, um, that's not quite what I meant. The names were fine, I guess I should have been more specific. I wanted less video-gamey descriptions. I don't really know how "lowers attack damage" and stuff like that applies to a prose-based RP.

A Dungeon-crawling adventure RP interest check and signups

I'll be judging bios tomorrow, since I don't approve or decline anything after 12:00 until I get some sleep. ^^;