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4 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
4 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
4 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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Well, I obviously want it to start, at least. ^^;
Spandez looks like fun! Now, um, need to work more on my character definitely. I think I have a pretty solid basis, I just need to work on personality and backstory for the most part.
I believed it was better to stop addressing your posts. I found them highly insulting but the high road is not to reply to them. And you are still being insulting by declaring that everyone in the RP is a child. I'm not going to say anything more on this subject.
Alright guys, I've had enough of Sicarius. The best way to deal with a guy like him is to just ignore him. Just don't respond to anything he says. Even if what he says is highly insulting or anything, just pretend like he isn't even there. He's banned for a reason, after all.
So my current idea is a mostly-powerless kind of character. Anything supernatural/sci-fi about her comes from the weapon she uses and the goggles she wears, and the goggles are only heat vision, night vision, and flash-proof. The weapon's kind of magical, though.
Scorpionmen: Scorpionmen are large, powerful beings that wander the desert. Possessing rudimentary sapience, they have a very basic language. However, given that their sapience is the barest minimum, they are more likely to respond to their aggressive animal instincts and fight one another then speak to each other. They possess no inherent magical capabilities and instead rely on their massive size and strength. Scorpionmen are aggressive and violent, similarly to some species they get their name from. Their massive claws can bend steel and crush stone, and their sharp tail can deliver a deadly poison directly into the blood of a victim. However, they are dim-witted and their head is very vulnerable to attack. Scorpionmen have no qualms with devouring members of other sapient races, and in some cases even smaller members of their own kind. They are a hazard in the desert that seems concerned only with eating and nothing more complex than that. As stated, their heads are highly vulnerable, and Nem archers are well-versed in sinking arrows directly through their skulls. To the nem, they are known as Hadrid.
Alright, going to work on them. ^^; Hope the activity picks up here a little more.
Tanya regarded the campfire when the extra-small Nem said 'Dinner'. Well, there was no denying that. There was no way someone that small could have eaten something that large all by herself, unless the Nem had an appetite to match the apparent strength she wielded. She didn't at all appear similar to the other Nem that Tanya had seen before. She was even smaller, and clad in less clothing. Tanya wondered how she was managing not to get tremendously severe sunburn, unless the girl was wearing more when it was brighter out. Regardless, it was a matter of deciding whether or not cooking wild boar as opposed to stealing anything made up for sneaking into the campsite in the first place. Those who had followed her seemed rather at ease with her... and given her apparent strength, the less-irritable portion of Tanya's mind contemplated the fact that she could be quite useful. She sighed. "You can stay, Eriksdottir." That was such a strange name for a Nem, as well... "I'm sure someone can go ahead and fill you in while we're eating. I've already had to do it for everyone else once. As for you..." The small purple-haired paladin turned to face the taller newcomer. A Mage from the College in Meridan? Hmph, whatever. "At least I don't have to waste more time telling you about it. I am Tanya Palayen of the Church of Reon, and I have gathered a party to reach the depths of the Prison-Castle. I suppose we'll be departing..." She glanced over her shoulder back at the boar... "... As soon as we've eaten."
I'm not the GM or co-GM and I haven't actually gotten my character signed up, but I think I can help explain why these characters don't seem acceptable. They are ridiculously over-the-top dark. Seriously, what do you honestly expect to happen when, tonally(at least from what I've seen) this is supposed to not be too far off from the Teen Titans cartoon. Which had a brain in a jar and a talking Gorilla as some of the final villains. I mean, they were serious and it's been ages but I remember it being a really cool arc, but they were still a brain in a jar and a talking Gorilla. Not "organ thief druglord who murdered his own parents for basically no reason aside from evil crazy and who imprisoning will somehow just make things worse". This isn't some super-dark, gritty, "realistic but not really" RP. As for the "hero", he's flat-out too dark as well, and he has very poorly-defined powers that you haven't really defined after being directly asked about them. ... I'm sorry I'm going off like this when I'm not even a GM but it was really bothering me that you don't seem to get why they're not acceptable when it's pretty obvious to me as well. I'm sorry if I came off as rude or something and you don't really have to listen to me but I'm pretty sure those are the reasons you're being declined.
Okay, I was distracted a lot today, but tomorrow's pretty open if I don't get the post up tonight. Going to try and get things moving quickly to the dungeon as well.
So um trying to work out my character for this at least. ^^; So far I have, um... "Japanese girl who is in the US sometimes and also has a magical lightning sword" but I need to do more work.
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