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Fio Mal-Rai

Fio shrugged.

"It doesn't make much sense to be carrying all this stuff around when we go out to investigate things," she said with a shrug, raising the bags slightly, "I guess we'll have to head back."

When her servant returned to spirit form, Fio headed back. Jeez... maybe having such a methodical Servant was going to be more annoying then anything. I mean, he had a point, but going all the way back before visiting the sights was going to kind of be a pain. Oh well. With a sigh, Fio headed back. Maybe it'd give her time to try and work out what was up with the sigil that was marking part of a bounded field. What purpose could something like that have? It wasn't active, at least, as far as she had been able to tell. Her Servant didn't seem to think it was either, and as Caster he naturally had a pretty good idea about that kind of thing. So the question was what its purpose was and when it would be activated. She could guess that there were other sigils, but it was difficult to say.

It wasn't long before they had returned to Fio's temporary home. She placed the bags aside, for Caster to pick up and investigate.

Saber

Saber shifted uncomfortably in her clothing, but nevertheless she was quick to follow her Master out the door. Outside, she was instantly on guard. Her Master naturally needed the best defense possible, and so the black-haired Servant rapidly circled around her, watching every possible angle as carefully as she could. Threats could come from anywhere, after all, and it was important to keep her Master completely safe. At least as safe as she could be when they were outside and without further defenses. Saber had faith in her abilities, however.

... Still, her constant circling and vigilant watch on her surroundings must have seemed rather strange.

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I don't really mind tweaking it. Hard-fisted is a better way to put it anyway while still preserving the contrast.

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Well, I know, it's about how he can take a lot of physical damage as a joke, not his attitude.

I mean, I can change it if you like, it's not a big deal. It's just a silly little title thing.

Edit: And edited.

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Kind of meant to be a joke about how he's hard to hurt. ^^; The warrior part's because he's a warrior.

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Okay, sorry about the misunderstanding.

Hey, as long as there's enough room you can knock over and trample goblins or whatever else with it, eh-heh.

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I don't know if I'd call this low fantasy, unless you mean the character herself was built for that kind of thing. ^^; That being said, she still fits a lot better and I probably just misunderstood you there.

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@Descartes: Okay, I'll be honest and say that first bio made me kind of wary since it was so bizarre and unfitting. But... this is a marked improvement and seems like it fits the setting pretty well.

I'm still kind of wary, but I'll accept your bio.

@Raineh Daze: Accepted, as discussed.

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Okay, I can understand that. I was just curious if there was more to it or not. Anyway, he looks fine so he's accepted.

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So it's just a matter of working out a lot then? I thought it might be something else since you put some emphasis on it.

Also, could you put a clear age in? It gives a clearer image of the character when you don't have a description or something in appearance about it.

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@IncredibleBee: This doesn't seem bad, though I'm wondering if you had anything intended for why he's so much stronger than he appears? I mean, it's fine if he is, just curious if there's more behind it or not.

@Descartes: Absolutely not. Dwarves can't do magic, your spell list is completely absurd(I'm not expecting dour doom and gloom but seriously?) and broken, and I honestly see nothing acceptable here.