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3 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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@Belwicket: You're really not addressing the fact that I still find your character offensive and I find the content of your post bad(which is frankly an understatement) and I have repeatedly attempted to clarify why. Other people have also posted other problems.

I don't want to acknowledge that post because I find the character offensive on top of every other issue I have with how she's written and presented.
... This is her first action. In the entire RP. You have given her no traits but this.

She has also performed sexual harassment to a random stranger in front of an ex-cop, who is only "ex" because she died in the line of duty.

If I posted and didn't ignore your character because yes, I still find them offensive and your explanation doesn't change that, Mimori would kick her to the ground, tie her hands, and drag her to the guards.

It's not just the post. It's the entire character being made for this.
That doesn't excuse how the character is being played and how the character was written.

You haven't made them a full character. Literally their entire personality is basically "perverted". There ARE perverted characters I really like(Kuroko from Railgun for example) but there's a lot more to them then just that.

When a character's literal first act in the RP is to molest another character they're meeting for the first time, I don't care what your real life circumstances are. That doesn't make it okay.

Like I said, I'm a lesbian in real life as well and I'd never make that a character's first act. I'd also make the character more of an actual character.

Just because you're also a lesbian doesn't mean you haven't made a character that comes off to me as offensive.

And that doesn't address the other grievances raised.

I mean, hell, if you want to make a comedic pervy character... first off don't make their backstory a mass of edginess about murder and death and nothing else. Secondly make them a full character that doesn't come off as an offensive stereotype. Third... don't make them just wander up to someone they've never met before and molest them out of no-where. I mean there's so many other ways to handle this.

You could have her internally think about how cute another girl is and want to talk to them because of that, make some cheesy goofy flirting, make ANYTHING else.

I mean it's not like the "pervy character gets a bit too grabby" stuff can't ever be funny or something, but as literally your first action to a stranger in an RP?

I'm sorry, it doesn't matter. This is bad.
That would be fine.
Not very good, but done.
"... Awww," Torako pouted, flopping on the table and causing the tower of empty bowls to worryingly rattle. However, thankfully, they did not topple. They were all out? But it was so good! ... She'd have to come back later, when they had more ingredients. Then she could indulge more. Or she could order even more food of different kinds... but it looked like it really was time to go. Swiftly, the light-haired girl paid for her meal and stretched, quickly heading back to the others.

"Okay, I'm ready!"
@Animal, @Great Sogeking: I'm going to ask @Grey Star to take over GMing the power armor mooks at the Market, as I'm having a bit of trouble working with them and this is one of the benefits of having a partner when GMing.
Aya's Apartment


Humming a song she'd heard recently from an animated series that one of the scientists had shown her, Kiko set to work. The ingredients were all here, so she didn't have to worry about that. Not wishing to bother Aya again, she settled on making pork ramen. Most people seemed to like pork ramen. Kiko knew she certainly did, but then, the robot girl liked literally every kind of ramen that she'd ever tasted, so she supposed that wasn't particularly a unique circumstance. Still, she swiftly set about preparing the soup. Kiko was practiced at this after months of preparing all kinds of ramen, so it went rather well, and rather quickly. Certainly, a rather delicious smell would soon be emanating from the kitchen as the robotic girl prepared their meal.

Ahh, it always smelled so good... and there was easily enough for the both of them. Taking both bowls in her hands, Kiko quickly left the kitchen. There definitely wasn't enough energy left in her to fight, now... but there was certainly enough to make some delicious ramen! The blonde girl grinned cheerfully.

"It's ready!" she called.
That's better, yes.
They're going to have to edit, or we can just ignore those posts.
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