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3 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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@AtomicNut: Aww, I'm really sorry to hear that. I'll just have your character fade into the background in case you can come back.

For now I still need more people to post, especially @Tarquin since Fanilly addressed their character.
That's fine, they can be a little ways back. The battle was pretty quick and the bandits were vastly outnumbered.
Most of the NPC knights are going to have at least been with the order for a few years. There should really be a majority of knights who've been there for a few years or more. ^^;
He looks fine, accepted! Nice to have another experienced character. So may fresh knights.
Well I just feel awkward now. ^^;

It's a bit later then I usually do acceptances but on last look he seemed fine so accepted.
That might be for the best, but some people are mid-conversation. Hm.
It's just the way you described his swordplay, and the picture of the sword, both make it seem really big. ^^;

Sibling-esque bond is fine, that's perfectly fine.

Looking over abilities, they seem better now as well.
The sword looks really big in the picture, and it's natural to assume it's the same size as shown in the character appearance when nothing else is indicated.

As for the thing about range, I think it's more that a focus on ranged is fine since we don't have many ranged fighters anyway? I just wanted it to be cut down if he wants to do more stuff.

I haven't looked at the edited bio in detail yet, but I'll say "special bond" is really vague and could mean a lot of things. Strictly speaking it could even mean dislike, but I doubt that's what you were going for. So just discuss it with me? ^^; Again, it's vague as it stands.

Besides, Fanilly's my character so I could explain some things about her and stuff to work it out more deeply.
Oh, right, um, I forgot to mention this before: I'd like any new signups to place their character with the order for at least two or more years. We have a lot of new knights already.
Where is everyone? I'm a little worried. : (
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