@Suku: She could, that would probably work.
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STATUS: I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography. 3 yrs ago
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I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
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At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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Well, right now we've got characters upstairs and downstairs, some going for a bath upstairs, others reacting the limes and the news of the Princess's Ball.
And accepted.
I'm probably going to get my character posted tomorrow.
Okay, it might be how late it is, and this might seem nitpicky, but can you split it into two paragraphs? ^^; It'd make it a lot easier to read.
I'd just go into a bit more detail about the rift between her and her father and how she got knighted, really.
Thank you.
Also, decided to make a reply, but it's my last before the guys post. ^^;
We'll also be moving further along shortly after someone tells Fanilly that they have a ball to attend, whenever that happens. ^^;
Also, decided to make a reply, but it's my last before the guys post. ^^;
We'll also be moving further along shortly after someone tells Fanilly that they have a ball to attend, whenever that happens. ^^;
"... I... er..."
Oh, how to respond to that question... What could Fanilly say? That they'd mobbed her and asked her all sorts of embarrassing questions? Ah, no, she had to stand firm. She had to make sure that she didn't let herself slip again. She had to be a good captain, and a good captain did not turn into a blushing, embarrassed mess in the face of social duress. She couldn't let herself do that. She couldn't. Of course, the teenaged knight failed to stop her cheeks from remaining hot and red.
The only thing that solved the issue, really, was the revelation that the maids had returned instead to apologize to her. For a few moments Fanilly stood silent, then took a deep breath.
"Ah. Yes, um," she stumbled over herself for a few moments before managing to continue speaking. "You are forgiven. Thank you, very much, for your apology and future service."
Fanilly was reminded of her own family's maids, in that moment. Even when she was a young child, that had taken care of her when her parents were unavailable. Which was, in truth, quite often... Fanilly had elected only to take three along when she became captain. She had to stand on her own two feet and prove herself as much as possible. She couldn't let herself lose confidence, and so... she had to do it alone. Well, as alone as she could.
"I was about to take a bath, and speak with a new recruit," Fanilly continued, putting the embarrassing situation firmly in the back of her mind as quickly as possible. "I can talk to you again later if you're not busy, to see if there is any way you can assist."
Oh, how to respond to that question... What could Fanilly say? That they'd mobbed her and asked her all sorts of embarrassing questions? Ah, no, she had to stand firm. She had to make sure that she didn't let herself slip again. She had to be a good captain, and a good captain did not turn into a blushing, embarrassed mess in the face of social duress. She couldn't let herself do that. She couldn't. Of course, the teenaged knight failed to stop her cheeks from remaining hot and red.
The only thing that solved the issue, really, was the revelation that the maids had returned instead to apologize to her. For a few moments Fanilly stood silent, then took a deep breath.
"Ah. Yes, um," she stumbled over herself for a few moments before managing to continue speaking. "You are forgiven. Thank you, very much, for your apology and future service."
Fanilly was reminded of her own family's maids, in that moment. Even when she was a young child, that had taken care of her when her parents were unavailable. Which was, in truth, quite often... Fanilly had elected only to take three along when she became captain. She had to stand on her own two feet and prove herself as much as possible. She couldn't let herself lose confidence, and so... she had to do it alone. Well, as alone as she could.
"I was about to take a bath, and speak with a new recruit," Fanilly continued, putting the embarrassing situation firmly in the back of her mind as quickly as possible. "I can talk to you again later if you're not busy, to see if there is any way you can assist."
Hmm, wait for a response from the two guys or post again... ahh, this is a hard decision.
@Suku: Hmmm. Her backstory seems more elaborate then others, so maybe put a bit more detail into it?
@Suku: Hmmm. Her backstory seems more elaborate then others, so maybe put a bit more detail into it?
And Fanilly is trying desperately to regain some kind of dignity in this moment, and failing.
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