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Thus far: Kudos to Kitsune, card captor (J-keet lol) and venom.

KillerKitten my friend, I do believe we are on the right path to make something out of you yet BUT, I'd ask that you edit away one of your two CSs to only keep the good one, as I find this confusing. Second, while I can accept your CS as it is, I'd invite you to perhaps consider a more humorous pattern since (I may be wrong, your CS is rather thin) it seems your character would be rather dickish. I'd invite you to consider something like a personality quirk to make him likable, maybe being overly theatrical in everything he does? (Talk like he's in an opera with wide arm movements (Oh bitter irony! I, the bringer of justice to this world saved by a demon like you! Why must certainly you mustn't be all evil! I will call you Judah and you shall be my faithful follower! May this name I baptize you in his holy name not be prophetic of things to come!) Or maybe the overly arrogant with the most creative insults ever for all situations? (You cheeky dick waffle, you think you can stop me with this blobfish arse face of yours?!) Then again, just ideas.

Also, your char name needs more pun and/or clothing reference lol.

I'm open to counter arguments however and those are just suggestions.
KillerKitten said
Name:CastusAppearance: Time on Earth: A week (Not used to it)Heaven/Hell Coins:0Virtues and Sin: (Select between each two)-Lust or Chastity: Chastity (not STRICTLY this. He may in the future act SLIGHTLY seductive but still stay a virgin.)-Gluttony or Temperance:Temperance-Greed or Charity:Charity-Sloth or Diligence:Diligence-Wrath or Patience:Wrath-Envy or Kindness:Kindness-Pride or Humility:PrideWeapon: His necktie turns into a massive red and silver greatsword that slightly glows gold.Transformation move: He pulls off his tie seductively and whips it to the right, and it straightens out and grows into a massive sword. He swings it once and holds it forward with both hands, flashing a smile.Heavenly/Demonic Items: None yet.Special powers and drawbacks:He can make humans trust him with a smile at the chance that they will follow him around constantly in obsession and won't leave him alone to the point were he has to run away from them. He can touch someone on the forehead and make them forget any amount of time. The disadvantage is right after doing it he has one mkinute and then he falls asleep for as long as he made them forget. Example: makes somebody forget an hour of memory, one minute later he falls asleep for an hour. This also applies if he were to make them forget a year or even more, but I don't think he would do that.Bio: Castus always enjoyed talking, and if someone interrupted him, he would yell at them, and continue speaking. But one day he met an archangel and the archangel kept droning on and on until Castus yelled "WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP AND LET ME SPEAK ALREADY YOU FOOL!?" and was sent to earth for his impatience and disrespect.


Twas confusing, with the orange eyes and red hair, but an angel uh? Well, I think people could afford to write a little more in the bio as to be more descriptive of who they are outside of the 7 sins and virtues, but I'll say ok.
Venom said
Weapon: Her corset becomes a multi-rocket blasting physically impossible cannon!


Can you be... more descriptive? Also, keep in mind the rule of cool, what matters is not as much destructive power as it is looking awesome destroying everything.

Also, as a general rule humans are doing a fine job corrupting themselves without much help from the outside and also: Society in hell is not so much based around corruption and meddling with the mortal world as much as it is based on constant punishment. Demons may think of themselves as powerful beings ruling the damned but the truth is this also a punishment for their sin: Never be able to truly call someone a friend without lying, constant backstab and hate. Sloth being an appreciated sin because then demons delegate to others constantly which leaves them open for another climb on them and crush them under his heel in the mud of hell.

The role of an intern serving Exomis isn't impossible, but I feel it may create a boring RP for you as you would be like Charles, meaning without a weapon and with bureaucratic obligations. I think there are other opportunities for your Scanty/kneesox demon of order and diligence expy.

Was creating some form of lasting order in hell to make an actually livable society?
Was without knowing part of the game of an archdemon and yet she kept coming true since her diligence allowed her to not give up?
Was minding her own business but was sold out by someone close to her?

In general, I'd keep the banishment theme present, if you know what I mean.
Card Captor said
In that case, I'll wait awhile to see if anyone else has a problem with it before making a CS. And if I wasn't clear, he wasn't hidden from the Archangel's to protect him, but because his mother was afraid of him. How well she managed to hide him is up for debate. And he wasn't cast out of because he was half demon, but for pretty much the same reasons as every one else


Thinking about it I think it would make a good plot point for him not to actually be aware of the nature of his father. Discover it on earth, etc.


Well... I sometimes wonder if I'm accepting too many 'special snowflakes'... I'll tentatively allow it but, if anyone as any objections about this, I'd like them to be voiced and I will consider all arguments.

Otherwise, I don't think he'd receive any special treatment in comparison of others but I don't think he could also be hidden from an Archangel's mighty sight. As god grants free will they wouldn't have casted him out of heaven right away, after all kindness is a virtue, buy if he reaches a point where he can be considered responsible from his actions and aware of their consequences on others, the Archangels would be merciless and cast him down from the heavens. I guess this could lead to interesting power sets.
I'd call items as a plot ticket, basically something that if you break it its gone for good and will generally serve as an ace in the hole. Got a frigin awesome car for a getaway? It most likely you'll trash it in this process. Basically: Items are not stuff with a recharge time or drawback other than the amount of time it can be used before it's turned to shit.

As for powers, I say about as many powers as you have drawbacks with me looking through them for validation first to see if it balances.
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Something inspired by this wonderful anime that is Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt.

Sometimes, there are oddities in both heaven and hell, being Angels of Lust or Gluttony as well as Demons of Order and Law. This of course will simply not do and the masters of their original realm seek to get rid of the nonconformists trying to put chaos in order, order in chaos, sin in virtue and virtue in sin. Fortunately for those cast out of the divine realms, redemption is possible as God is merciful and Satan is greedy. Coins, referred to as heaven or hell coin depending on which side of good and evil refer to it, can be gained, 1,000,001 of them being needed to repent and go back to heaven or hell.

These coins can be gained in multiple ways:
-For demons destroying particularly good individuals or entities called 'Spirits'.
-For angels destroying particularly bad individuals or entities called 'Ghosts'.
-Both angel and demons can convince individuals or spirits to change their ways by redemption or corruption but while this method rewards with more coins, it is considered time much more time consuming and difficult than finding wicked or good individuals and then straight out kill them.
-Bargain with angels or demons to get their coins in exchange for services.
-Beat up other angels or demons to steal their coins.

Some Lore:













CS and Extra Info





Accepted Characters:
Look at page one for my character, police Sergeant Christian Conti. I'm game.
I think it would be important for something major to happen to the whole Romanian business, either thing settling down or on the contrary heating up since in game its been 2 months Romania has been on the fence. France as expressed that it will not tolerate further Russian expansion and has taken steps to arm itself and form a sizable force as well as seize Russian assets and freeze any debt repayment to Russia or Russian companies. While I doubt the scale of things would be as large in other parts of Europe, especially in poorer countries, I'd expect everyone to be more than willing to seize Russian assets and stop debt repayment.

Also, the 5 billion gift to Russia, is this something official or given under the table?
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