Tatsua Aiisen said Diamond Blizzard, this is the second time I've seen you around, making things that probably shouldn't exist.
Your sig is cute though, so I forgive you.
Too bad I'm not so forgiving.
Diamond Blizzard said Well, I don't mind losing the Mental Gekirinken so much, but I would really like to keep the first Gekirinken. Also yes, excuse me for not posting the time limit in which it has to be activated, there are two scenarios in which it can be activated and thus go into auto-hits, also perhaps the Taijutsu/Physical Gekirinken could do more damage depending on the hit of the technique? Example: a Tsunade punch would be suicidal where a normal kick would just hurt a bit.
Scenario 1
-I activate Gekirinken
-Opponent attacks me anyway-
-I go into Gekirinken, trapping them into an auto-hit combo.
Scenario 2
-Opponent Attacks me
-I activate Gekirinken
-Opponent chooses if Gekirinken hits or not or attacks me again anyway
-Goes into Gekirinken auto-hit combos
For Forbidden Gekirinken the same scenarios apply. Also I think a prep time of (one post) would be great IF the lengths of the jutsu activation were to be extended, but I don't get it, I expected Forbidden Gekirinken to be denied and normal Gekirinken accepted xD. So my technique would counter all jutsu minus S-rank jutsu if I keep feeding my barrier chakra.
Also, for my weapons and custom techniques; let's get it out of the way before we go into any arguments.
Custom Kenjutsu Techniques
[B-Rank] Kenjutsu: Sunlight/Moonlight Dance: The user raises their sword up into the air to absorb the light of the sun or moon into the blade, if the moon is out the blade is a light glowing blue color, if the sun is out, the blade is yellow and blinding like the sun. The user then performs elegant and powerful blows in in a combination of finesse strikes. Sunlight = Blinding and yellow. Moonlight = Glowing Light Blue
(Think Dancing Blade from Super Smash Bros. (Marth) but a more elegant manner and different combinations)
Scenarios Response: Wait, so when someone hits the barrier, the damage they'd inflict is reversed and strikes back at them? I mean, the barrier could absorb the force of the blow and then send a pulse or something, or augment your own hit, but you'd still have to land your hits for that to work. If you mean anything except for that, I am going to outright say no.
You can't simply reverse attacks like that, because (as I said for Mental Gekirinken) it does not make sense. You have to understand that I am coming from a place where I have a very strong understanding of how the mechanics of naruto function. Literally the only manner in which this ability would work is if it was augmented into an item of some sort, and even if that were the case that item would be OP as all hell and I'd have to outright deny it.
So basically what I'm saying, is either you can have the physical and forbidden Gekirinken be defensive techniques, or you can have them not at all. That is not debatable, because the nature of the techniques are OP, and that's not okay. End of story.
We use time as a measure here, not post count. The amount of time that transpires in a given post is relative, so using a post as a charge up, cool down, or use time is inconsistent and illogical. Sorry. I hope no one else has a problem with that, if so I can at the very least show you how using time as the counter works. It's actually pretty simple.
Basically all you have to do is figure out how long your movements and techniques would realistically take.
Such as a punch taking Half a second to 2 seconds to execute, or less depending on the speed of the punch and the distance the fist is traveling (both of which you do not have to calculate with any HARD numbers. Just approximate really). Things like "How long would it take my fireball jutsu to reach my opponent over the distance between myself and him/her". Simple things. Very straightforward. Moving on.
Fire Dragon Gauntlets
They can absorb and seal any fire jutsu, and then release blasts of flame offensively. No, they cannot. Want to know why? It's a logical thing. Unless they have an infinite pocket dimension inside them, or an infinite amount of seal space (newsflash, they do not), they can't do that. Chakra takes up space just like matter does, just less of it because it is energy. The amount of chakra that any given thing can absorb has to be limited or it is OP, because it has no limitation and thus can be abused with extreme ease.
While I don't mind it being able to seal several jutsu and then basically regurgitate the jutsu, I do mind the absorption aspect. You are trying to put way too many different things onto your character and at the moment it would be beyond OP. This is without considering the jutsu that can be utilized with the gauntlets or any of your scorch techniques, or the techniques of your blade.
So yeah, these laser techniques are a no, since lasers are composed of light not fire, and are also sort of the domain of a special affinity (Water+lightning). The firebending would be fine, that's pretty basic. The hidden blades and weapon materialization work too, but keep in mind these fireweapons wouldn't be solid since fire isn't solid. Unless they are composed of hardened chakra that happens to be on fire, which would be fine as well.
Sukochi
The fire will be capable of being extinguished. The rest is fine as it is basically running chakra through the blade using Chakra Flow and fire affinity, which superheats it.
Chance of temperature; That's not how the body works. At most the blade would cut flesh easier and would instantly cauterize the wound. Only the immediately effected area would change heat.
Acid of Fire: No.
Eruption: Has a larger chakra cost the longer it is charged. This also means it gains power with time.
Kenjutsu: Volcano: This is fine, but keep in mind the fire can be put out via normal means.
Kenjutsu: Ripture: This seems more like a genjutsu.
Custom Scorch Release Jutsu
Banishment of Hades: No. Just...no.
Internal Burning: No. OP due to being uncounterable for the most part.
Fire Pillar Fortress: Extremely chakra taxing. This would be S rank, not A rank. It'd also need to have a continuous cost per homing fireball, in addition ot the initial high cost of creating the fire pillars.
Fire Pillar: Would be effected by water techniques of equal rank as well as higher rank. Could be weakened by C rank water jutsu as well.
Hundred-Thousand Degree Armor: Newsflash, the armor cannot be that hot, it's ridiculous. people who can sense or see chakra can detect its use, but otherwise that's accurate. Also earth, lightning, and wind affinity techniques are unaffected. Earth, when melted, becomes lava which is more dangerous to your character...soo. Wind would just be heated. Lightning would be totally immune to the technique.
Heat Inhalation Technique: No. I already established why absorption is kinda ridiculous.
Melting Shoes Technique: Sure you can heat the ground, but this is at least B rank depending on the area of effect.
Kenjutsu: Sunlight/Moonlight Dance: Um...no.
@Celaira: I'm really loving how the site's gonna look hon :) Good job *thumbs up*
J2 said Arggh, stupid autocorrect. Meant dojutsu
Yes, yes you can make a custom doujutsu/Kekkei genkai. Though it being descendent of the Uchiha might not make sense at the moment since the Uchiha still exist in the current timeline and would not be terribly old. Nonetheless, it's possible that the offshot clan/kekkei genkai is relatively new/small. That'd work :)

