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7 yrs ago
The Truest and Most Ultimate Showdown has beguneth. Goofykins V.S. SpongeByrne!
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7 yrs ago
Does anyone know where I can figure out how to unfabricate memories? Asking for a friend.
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8 yrs ago
Check out our new and improved thread. Just an interest check for now, but oh boy is there so much more to come! roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
10 yrs ago
Oh Bleach RP oh Bleach RP where art thou oh quality Bleach RP. Why hast thou forsaken thee? Seriously though, WHY!?!
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Well, yes and no.

It makes sense for her to have to get the mass to transform, I just didn't take it all the way and so it is mostly magical.

It also keeps her power in check because there is theoretically no limits as to what she could transform into.

I usually apply a certain amount of logic to magic, but not usually this sort. Still, it's certainly one decent way to balance this sort of thing.
Kk. Accepted. Move him to the bin and I'll add him to the roster.
Mmm, Now Dornae's gonna have to go out and buy about a dozen pounds of raw meat so Mithera can change forms.

Mithera's magic is weird. If you're lucky, Dornae will be kind enough to go back out, but I don't know if he's willing to.

We'll see.
@Desire

Shouta was born 14 years before the Shinobi war to an Uchiha father and a woman native to the Village Hidden in the Mist.

So the shinobi war, as it says in the OP, was 10 years ago and it lasted 15 years.

You state that he is 24, but if he was born 14 years before the war, then that would be 14+15+10=39. So either he was born one year into the war and didn't participate because he was too young (which is totally fine), or you increase his age to answer what you stated.

Everything else you mentioned seems fine, but you do need to alter that timeline a bit so he's either older or the same age.

Once that is corrected then I'll take a second look and then accept it.
@Burthstone you are the worst kind of person.
Wanna post, but dont wanna...

WELL IF FERRIN HADN'T LEFT THE HOTEL MAYBE YOU'D WANT TO!

Sorry, Dornae's suppressed rage slipped out for a moment :P
Edited my post @Burthstone, @Crimson Raven.
@Tuujaimaa I lol'd at his rank, but seriously give him an actual rank please.

Hmm. So while I can see some issues, most of them are solved by the fact that there are a few, though less straight forwards, ways around most of his particularly powerful techniques. Still, I may request some changes in the future, but for now Accepted, put him in the bin.

EDIT: Acceptance rescinded till I see his equipment and approve of it.
Kk, I just thought it better not to assume. Thanks. I'll tag you in the OOC once I edit my post ^_^
Dornae Namari - The Luckless Enchanter
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Stopping and turning back towards the man as he got his attention--heart leaping slightly in his chest as he did so--he heard the man's next words and forced himself to look thoughtful, as if he were trying to remember something. He made sure to force his swallowing to look natural rather than forced and nervous as he did so.

"I don't recall seeing anything like that. It seems like something I'd remember haha," he said as he smiled, a slightly awkward, slightly apologetic laugh following after. He hoped the man bought it, granted he didn't have any reason not to.

When the man didn't stop him he gave him another wave and departed the scene, heading back to the hotel through a weaving path once he was out of the man's range just to make absolutely sure he wasn't being followed. After a few minutes he deactivated the spells he'd set up, reallocating the magical energy to a new spell, which would seek out the ethernano trails of his comrades and sweep them. The spell would be essentially undetectable except to a select few. If detected the spell would notice, copy the ethernano signature of those who noticed it and then scatter only to eventually return to Dornae.

Once he had finished this he entered the hotel proper and reached the room they were using. He knocked before entering, then waved at Valak and Mithera, not initially noticing Ferrin's absence as he entered the bathroom and swiftly enchanted all three articles of clothing properly. It only took several minutes, after which he exited the bathroom, letting the bag sit next to the door as he walked over and sat on the bed. He had now noticed that Ferrin was gone, "Mithera, I got you the clothes." He gestured at the bag by the bathroom door, "Feel free to change whenever. Just...don't be surprised when they change to suite your figure." He then glanced at the place Ferrin had been and sighed, "Let me guess, right after I left he came up with some plan and went off without telling anyone what he was doing...." There was a look of irritation on his face as he said it. It was clear that he was not pleased about the development. Why did no one listen to him?

@Burthstone @Crimson Raven
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