@Dead Crusier I understand, that makes sense. How should I descibe it then? Should I say that they used destructive magic? Also, I would like to see an example of the style section.

I think what your CS could benefit from most would be more detail, especially pertaining to the Plane you've invented. Red magic and executions in a coliseum give me a very sort of Klingon feel to the Plane, or at least that culture within the Plane. I'll leave it up to you what the specifics happen to be. I'll write a sample CS when I get off work tonight.

Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.

A vast improvement. Both your character and Mars' are accepted. @Apollosarcher I'd recommend that your character take on a color. The only truly colorless Planeswalkers we've so far seen in canon were quite special cases. Just as recommendations, Blue is pretty much the go-to color for artifacts, and your character's personality gives me a sense for White.

Hmmm im glad my backstory will be easier to do since I have a base to go off, can I call dibs on Isochron Scepter by the way xD I'll give a nice reason why I'll have it.

Well the reason's he's colorless was he came from a plane during a time where almost all the mana was gone, thus anyone there who relied on mana used colorless. Dominara was nearly dead at the time of his birth, so I was actually going to make him blue-white but I read more into it, he couldn't have based on lore. It does mean he knows about the great and powerful planeswalkers from before.

The issue with that being, the Great Mending was over a hundred years ago.