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[Drake]

Quick question, can our planeswalkers have companions, like a caracal, or something?

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[Melkor]

How will we do the whole 'turn' thing? This is more of a question regarding instants and sorceries.

[Apollosarcher]

I have a question regarding the use of spells and colors, is this like commander where you cannot control mana that is not it your color?

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[MarsAdept]

Dear Dead Cruiser, I sense you get the idea i was trying to get at with my character. If you want more diversity with the overall characters I can do that and still maintain my idea of a frontline warrior no problem. Please give me a bit.

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[WriterRaven]

For several reasons, chief among them being other projects that have started to pick up speed again - and I really want to get them done - I must withdraw my interest in this thread. My apologies, and I wish you guys good luck.

[Melkor]

@Dead Crusier I understand, that makes sense. How should I descibe it then? Should I say that they used destructive magic? Also, I would like to see an example of the style section.

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[Melkor]

@Dead Crusier I understand, that makes sense. How should I descibe it then? Should I say that they used destructive magic? Also, I would like to see an example of the style section.

@Melkor

I think what your CS could benefit from most would be more detail, especially pertaining to the Plane you've invented. Red magic and executions in a coliseum give me a very sort of Klingon feel to the Plane, or at least that culture within the Plane. I'll leave it up to you what the specifics happen to be. I'll write a sample CS when I get off work tonight.

@Dead Cruiser

Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.

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[Melkor]

@Dead Cruiser Thank you.

[Pie Flavor]

Hmmm im glad my backstory will be easier to do since I have a base to go off, can I call dibs on Isochron Scepter by the way xD I'll give a nice reason why I'll have it.

[Apollosarcher]

Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.

@Melkor

A vast improvement. Both your character and Mars' are accepted. @Apollosarcher I'd recommend that your character take on a color. The only truly colorless Planeswalkers we've so far seen in canon were quite special cases. Just as recommendations, Blue is pretty much the go-to color for artifacts, and your character's personality gives me a sense for White.

@Dead Cruiser

Well the reason's he's colorless was he came from a plane during a time where almost all the mana was gone, thus anyone there who relied on mana used colorless. Dominara was nearly dead at the time of his birth, so I was actually going to make him blue-white but I read more into it, he couldn't have based on lore. It does mean he knows about the great and powerful planeswalkers from before.

[Melkor]

Hmmm im glad my backstory will be easier to do since I have a base to go off, can I call dibs on Isochron Scepter by the way xD I'll give a nice reason why I'll have it.

@Pie Flavor

The way it seems to be working, with artifacts, is a 'first come, first served' basis.

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[Apollosarcher]

Well the reason's he's colorless was he came from a plane during a time where almost all the mana was gone, thus anyone there who relied on mana used colorless. Dominara was nearly dead at the time of his birth, so I was actually going to make him blue-white but I read more into it, he couldn't have based on lore. It does mean he knows about the great and powerful planeswalkers from before.

@Apollosarcher

The issue with that being, the Great Mending was over a hundred years ago.

@Dead Cruiser

Yes but that simply mended the plane, it would have still been a waste land with little mana for next hundreds of years, in the lore they state nearly all the mana on the plane was gone. People barely got by and the's planewalkers used themselves to supplement the lack of mana. It would take thousands of years all the colors to get back to a normal state.

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