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I've decided to take a slightly different path on account of the many changes that would need to be made to fit Markus in somewhere, and swap from a silver-tongue to a more conventional lordly archetype -- though a good deal of focus is still placed on charisma and persuasion and intimidation.


Now do me a favor and shower me with criticism. I'm particularly worried about the level of remaining civilization that i've implied the more central polis of the former Atlanteans still retain.
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Although I PMed it to our fancy GM (and received the feedback needed), I'll share my CS here so as to join the cool club of having written something. ^_^



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What is someone from Thule? A Thulian? :D
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Yay! I was starting to think mine would be the only character who wasn't lord/king/overtyrant of something. :p

Thulian, I would think. Maybe Thulite?
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Thulese, I believe is actually the proper usage.
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Thulesque, Thulish, Thuline, Thule-American. all good possibilities.
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Nice little cast we have setting up. I am somewhat curious as to how all these characters are going to be thrown into the mix together; are we looking at like, a Warcraft 3 situation where your character approaches us all with ominous messages about fate and whatnot?
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"A Witch King, a True King, a grizzled old Sage, an Over-Tyrant, a hunter and an alchemist walk into a bar..."
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...The seventh person ducks.
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Flint's done! Sorry I took forever.
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So, no rush, but are we waiting on a few more of the people from earlier in the thread/the interest check, or are we ready to go? I'm rarin' to get started, I think this is going to be very interesting.
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Color me interested! Mind if I make a CS?
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@Dead Cruiser Here it is. Tell me what you think.

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I like him! I wondered if we'd have a more soldier/warrior oriented character. One question: did you mean to write 'the ends justify the means', in his Ideals, or was it an intentional play on words?

Oh, and just letting y'all know, Emily is going to start her story on a game trail, hunting the biggest, baddest mutant anyone's seen in Borea for a while. Anyone who wants to hop on that train/connect their character's plot to it somehow is hereby invited to do so!
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My only minor, mostly-baseless criticism is that it seems a little bit strange for the ambitious leader of a mercenary company to also value friendship and loyalty. Generally mercenaries were considered to be of very wavering loyalty (which seems to match the character's goal to eventually carve out a kingdom for himself) -- hence why the term nowadays describes someone who forgoes ethics for the sake of money.
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@TheWizardLizard Thank you for the kind words. And no, it wasn't intentional - I must have missed that on my revision. I may have Damion and the Crimson Company tag along/meet up with Emily if they get approved :)

EDIT: @DeltaV I probably didn't make it clear enough - Damion only values loyalty/friendship towards him. He truly does value his friendships though, and perceives them as so. I think it adds a bit more nuance to Damion's character and makes him less of an archetype. Although, I value blank slates, as it allows (in my opinion) for greater and less restricted character development.
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