@Progenitus No, you won't have to. I realize that it would be better to have that little speech BEFORE the story begins. It was an error on my part to have it come during the story when I specifically announced that he made the big changes as he was inducted as Director. i.e., before the terms started.
@M127 Yeah, bio and personality asides, I've got no problems with it.
Current Goal: See if the New Director can make Trinidad Academy a place for heroes.
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Anyway, I've got no immediate problem with your characters Noble Arm, but it's going to have to be monitored. His ability is very subjective after all, as things like feelings are often unreliable, given how they tend to flip-flop with the situation.
Anyway, I've got no immediate problem with your characters Noble Arm, but it's going to have to be monitored. His ability is very subjective after all, as things like feelings are often unreliable, given how they tend to flip-flop with the situation.
1.) Yeah...Pablo just betrayed a certain amount of naivete.
Name: Reinhard Age: 17 Height: ~1.85m Weight: 57kg Nationality: German Noble Arm: Called "Speer des Waldes" (ger. 'Spear of the forest'), this wooden spear has plant-like properties.
Rank: D+ The wielder of this spear can apply telekinetic forces onto it, and only it. The force, while theoretically limitless, is limited by how much the spear can withstand, and the wielder's remaining stamina, as exerting the forces on the spear is as exhausting as if one would apply the same force with one's own hands(in case of forces meant to alter the orientation of the spear) or legs(in case the forces are meant to alter the location of the spear). However, apart from how quickly the wielder is exhausted, the spear does not grant additional senses for its location or velocity, if one were to lose it, one could still control it, but one would not be able to know what the spear is doing and where it is. Still, this can make this spear a dangerous long-range weapon, as continuus application of the telekinetic force could accelerate it to extreme speeds over long distances. If accelerated long enough, the sheer impulse of the speer could allow it to destroy about anything, although it would likely be a one-time move, in light of the required distances.
Derived from this, if the one was to balance on the spear, one can fly on it, until one falls off or becomes too exhausted.
While spearhead normal is a hardened bud, it can blossom if the wielder desires. The unfolded blossom is rather large, making the spear look like an umbrella. In this state, the blossom can easily be used as a shield against blunt forces of most magnitudes, and due to its high water content it can also shield heat very well. Due to the leidenfrost effect, very extreme heat can be shielded almost perfectly. The blossom's leaves can be comparatively easily cut or frozen though.
Lastly, the blossom can release special pollen, which will speed up the healing process of any lifeform greatly. The pollen will also cause the spear to quickly regrow any damaged parts, and plants exposed to it will start growing quickly. (The telekinetic force can be used to shape the cloud of pollen.) While already created pollen places no strain on the wielder, creating the pollen is a rather large strain, comparable to a marathon 1:600 (one second of creating pollen is comparable to 10 minutes of running a marathon).
Aiming to make as few mistakes as possible at any point in time, Reinhard always considers the consequences of his actions before doing anything, and as such naturally always prefers fully reversible actions over irreversible ones, even if an irreversible action seems to be the perfect solution. Due to that, whenever something happens, Reinhard is very inclined to just watch and study what happens, even if his inaction causes people and other lifeforms to get hurt, although that is most likely to happen when he sees something he hasn't seen before. This analytical nature allows him to use his abilities with brutal efficiency, exploiting every weakness of an opponent and every strength of an ally. Despite this he is usually kind, as most of the time he comes to the conclusion of kindness being the most efficient for his goals, in a sense making him brutally efficient in being kind. In day to day life Reinhard still appears as if he is a complete procrastinator, since free time is amongst his top priorities, simply because free time can be freely used to accomplish his goals. His moral compass is the rather simple "everything helping me is good; everything working against me is bad", yet he oftentimes doesn't do anything considered immoral by others, as that would turn them against him. In addition, he doesn't dwell on past hostilities, thus not going after people, who once were on his bad side, but have since stopped working against him.
*Likes: Biology (especially botany); reasonable people; free time
*Dislikes: Anyone making easily avoidable mistakes due to not considering consequences; having to use inefficient methods
Fears: Most of the world turning against him.
Reinhard was born in Germany, and had lived there for most of his previous life. His parents, while not rich, were a bit more wealthy than most of Reinhard's peers, his father worked as a chemist, and his mother for the government, handling agriculture and environmental funds. His noble arm was discovered when it materialized while Reinhard was angry at his mother for forbidding him to use his computer while he hadn't done all his chores. This almost accidentally caused him to kill his mother. Since this first appearance the spear has never dematerialized, and thus had caused a few messy situations when not within Reinhard's senses' range, especially in the first few months. He applied to several local noble arm academies at the time, but was either rejected from the start or didn't pass the entry exams, forcing him to eventually apply at Trinidad Academy.
Student Rank:1024
Hopefully this fixes the problems with the last version. Appearance may still be lacking, but because I am generally bad at describing people, I will only add to it if asked for information about specific features.
Well, with those proportions he probably looks like this man here, more or less:
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as a person who is exactly 190cm, I agree that 48 kg is extremely underweight. If you're going for lean or lanky, somewhere along the lines of 70~75 kg is more like it.
Azkaban Contingency - Pablo, when pushed to despair or desperation, can emit a field from his Kalis that siphons hope from all individual beings capable of feeling it (including animals), up to the distance of one square kilometer. The hope used can be channeled into A+-ranked arts, making Pablo someone to watch.
1. You only clearly responded to the incomplete draft, and as such I'd like confirmation on whether or not the character is accepted.
2. The character is intended to be a bit too thin, but not to the accidental extreme from before. I will revise the values again should they conflict with other elements of the character sheet.(e.g. by not meeting the academy's standards or similar)
@M127 Well, if that kind of look for your character is what you're going for, then alright. And I still need a little more description. The bio is fine, unless you want to add more to it.