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Well, that was short but it's the best I can do at the minute - I'm sure once we get down to Cekrov and things start exploding go exactly as planned I'll have something more substantial for you all!
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I'll do my best to get a post out as soon as possible. In the meantime, @Jbcool I feel compelled to mention that the image given for the power armour colour scheme of the Order of Our Thrice-Pierced Martyr has stopped showing itself. You may want to rectify this at some point.
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"Caroline Adalard, Retributor, order of our Thrice-Pierced Martyr."

Name: Caroline Adalard

Gender: Female

Role/Order: Retributor, order of our Thrice-Pierced Martyr.

"The heretics will know my fury."

Personal Demeanour: Caroline is an angry person, putting it simply. From the way she growls her words to how every step she takes seems like it was intended to crush a skull into dust, Caroline makes it know that she is a threat. She maintains this intimidating aura not wanting to show any signs of weakness, the weak cannot carry out the God Emperors wishes without strength, this belief leads her to be very competitive when it comes to proving ones strength. She is also very snide and sarcastic at the best of times always ready to insult someone if the opportunity presents itself. Despite her rough exterior there are scraps of humor hanging about, not to mention Caroline's fierce loyalty.

Caroline is supremely loyal to the God Emperor and will ruthlessly slaughter any who oppose his will or abandon the righteous path. She struggles to contain her hatred for heretics often indirectly stomping over their corpses making sure to distort what little remains of their filthy flesh.

"I am a brutal instrument of the God Emperor's will.

Speciality: Caroline's primary focus is to mow down any and all enemies of the imperium with the largest gun she can get her hands on. This is usually in the form of a heavy bolter which she wields with impressive skill. Aside from serving up enough lead to dismantle a building, Caroline is also very skilled with hand to hand combat, namely things like grapples and pins.

"A rank I earned through victory."

Rank: Retributor.

"I made myself strong for the Emperor."

Description: Caroline is a large individual standing at 2.25 meters or 7'5 and weighing 180kgs or 396.8lbs. She takes immense pride in her body, making sure to exercises and keep it in pristine condition. Her weight can be attributed to her muscle mass, and boy is there a lot of muscle mass. Her arms are like tree trunks and her abs look like they are carved from stone. Aside from the muscle Caroline is actually rather voluptuous having a shapely form despite her toned musculature. Her face is also something you wouldn't expect to be paired with a large imposing person such as herself, being rather beautiful with its soft slim cheeks, deep amber eyes and a nicely shaped chin. The only impurity on her face is a massive scar on he right cheek that runs from above her right ear to the right corner of her mouth. Lush black hair that runs down the back of her neck ending just before it reaches her shoulders. But she wears a bucket on her head all the time so you can't see her face anyway.

Caroline lumbers around in a large power suit and helmet that are the typical colour of her order. These colours being black and gold. Almost everywhere, the breastplate, the shoulder plates, greaves, boots, gauntlets everything. There are some silver trims on top of the greaves and the shoulder plates, the only other place silver can be found is on her helmet in the form of a plate covers the top half of the helmet excluding the left and right sides of the head. The rest of her helmet is black.

"My history is none of your concern."

History: Like all adopted into the Schola Progenium Caroline was orphaned at a young age after her lone farther passed away in the service of the guardsman, she was the tender age of three when all this happened and still to this day remembers nothing of life before the Schola. Even when she was young she showed a great deal of enthusiasm for fighting in the name of the Emperor, and wished to become as strong as she could as to not disappoint him. Her nearly unmatched drive and almost constant physical training saw her quickly molded into a worrier who's strength was only matched by her will and bad temper.

She took to the teachings of the Adepta Sororitas like a moth to a flame, spending almost every waking moment praying, training or learning. She had great respect for her superiors knowing them to be such great warriors, she aspired to be like them, brutal instruments of war who serve the Emperor and are now training others to do the same. This admiration combined with her determination led her to perform exceptionally in most of her studies and training. Caroline served as a Sister of battle for many years sharing many victories with her sisters in arms, but victory did not come without sacrifice. Caroline had witnessed many of her sisters fall before she eventually earned the rank of Retributor.



"I deliver the Emperor's wrath."

Equipment and Armament:
  • Godwyn Pattern Heavy Bolter.
  • Adepta Sororitas Power Armour (including a helmet).
  • Combat Knife.
  • 2 Fragmentation grenade.
  • 1 Melta bomb


Miscellaneous: N/A




OK I think that's it done!
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Jesus christ she sounds like she's built like a brick shithouse!

Good luck finishing her and not dying of demotivation and all that!
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Just a reminder: fat cunt master race

But seriously, I do think carol would provide an interesting juxtaposition to the rest of the squad
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Just a reminder: fat cunt master race

But seriously, I do think carol would provide an interesting juxtaposition to the rest of the squad


down with the fat cunts

ratlings forever
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Why thank you. I may have had to search up what a juxtaposition is. But I am glad that I could be one, a little bit of contrast is always great.
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@LemonZest1337 Good stuff, Zest. We did need a heavy weapons operator, and it appears we may well have one!
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Alright I think that is me finished with Caroline. What are the thoughts? (I am actually not 100% sure if I'm done.)
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I thought all the Sisters were supposed to be members of the Order of the Thrice-Pierced Martyr, the one discussed in the OP?
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I'm not 100% on if she is allowed to be a Bloody Rose or not, it obviously suits her personality. But the line that I made bold makes me think I can have one from a different order. But if that isn't allowed then I'll just go through and fix it.

Rank: Obvious – they can range from a standard Battle-Sister, down to a Novice Advance, specialist ranks such as Repentia, Dominion/Retributor (Heavy Weapons specialist) and the like are also allowed; if your character is part of a different Order, then feel free to use Order-specific ranks.
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@jbeil is actually correct, I blame my bad phrasing personally; what you've highlighted @LemonZest1337 is actually supposed to mean a different branch of the Order (Hospitaller etc), rather than an actual separate Order itself. Again, that's my fault for bad writing, but she would indeed be part of the Order of Our Thrice-Pierced Martyr.
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Looks like I got some editing to do! I searched up Our Thrice-Pierced Martyr and the third option on google was actually this thread.




OK popped some little edits in, I'm ready to be judged!
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@LemonZest1337 That's because I made up the Order specifically for this RP. ;)

I'm fine with the CS, looks good!

What say you, @jbeil, @Andreyich, @BCTheEntity and @Kratesis?
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@Jbcool I admit, I was confused by that phrasing too. I will admit some blame on my part in that regard, since I was helping guide LemonZest through the writing process; that said, I reckon his CS looks pretty good.
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Looks like I got some editing to do! I searched up Our Thrice-Pierced Martyr and the third option on google was actually this thread.




OK popped some little edits in, I'm ready to be judged!


Wait, what were the other top two mentions?

I'm all for it, and even if I weren't, I wouldn't want to say so for fear Carol would crush my puny man-skull with her enormous fists of steel.
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Looks good by me. As an aside, will get off my cheeks and post relatively soon.
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YAY people like her so far! Also I was just wondering if this RP had a discord?
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@LemonZest1337 I can make a Discord, and please feel free to add her to the Character tab. :)
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