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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by vertigh0st
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Hello there~

I'd also like to express interest for this thread. Have room for another?
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@PaulHaynek - I've decided to change the second character to downplay the reanimation concept so now it's more organic in nature. The only thing missing from the sheets currently are the appearances. I'll be adding those after a short break but I felt like sharing what I've got written thus far since all of the sufficiently important details are already covered. Hopefully these two are acceptable. The appearances shouldn't take long to write.


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@PaulHaynek

Alright, so, what exactly is 'Dark' magic? I have a fairly decent idea of where I want to take my dark elves magic, but I just wanna make sure before I make any final decisions.
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@Infernal Flame @vertigh0st

This RP is open. And it'll be open as long as the Join Status up there says 'Apply'.

@Rune_Alchemist

Dark magic is generally the antithesis of Light magic. Where the direct Light magic has you hurling orbs of Light at your enemies, the indirect Dark has you placing orbs of Darkness for your enemies to step on or leaving them inactive for a few moments before exploding.

Although, I'd also say just go with whatever you think dark magic spells are and we'll go from there.

@A Lowly Wretch

I still need time to think about Gangraena since on one hand, her justification of being undead is solid but on the other hand, I'm not sure if that is enough to actually justify her existence. Though I do admire the lengths you're willing to go just to get an undead character up here. Again, I need to think about it more so long as you have nothing more to add.

Oh and her abilities seem OP to me since she appears to be invulnerable to damage from what I've read. Also, dark magic is under the domain of Aylama so there's that too.

Leomund's good though.

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I've also updated some info about the Beastkin and the Character Sheet.
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@PaulHaynek

Cool, cool, just wanted to make sure. I can use that to make some nifty stuff, I think.

I'll see about finishing my Dark Elf tomorrow. Late here and I need some sleep~
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@PaulHaynek - There are a couple things I'll argue in her defense.

Firstly as far as toughness goes she's fairly strong but her flesh is no tougher than most light elves. She's far easier to put together but depending on the damage sustained that can be made quite a bit harder. I've put a high resistance to dark spells and the ability to shirk certain types of curses but all other forms of magic work just as intended on her. By herself she's a powerhouse physically but her range and especially her speed are both lacking. Her attacks tend to be big single hit strikes while she makes little effort in dodging, usually opting to sustain blows in favor of a more aggressive attack.

Secondly while she is definitely more powerful than Leomund who quite frankly sucks when he's left alone they do make a potent team. This said she is not a student at the academy so plots that exclude outsiders will typically leave her uninvolved. She is by large a secondary character so her involvement will be largely circumstantial, especially for the tournament arc where her role will be quite passive indeed. When she is involved as a team they are quite powerful but Leomund will always be the weak link in the duo. Taking him out makes Gangraena much easier to fight as it deprives her of his support magic.

If needed I can remove the resistance to dark spells to give her a bit more magic vulnerability since she lacks the ability to cast spells herself. If you have any other suggestions regarding changes I'll definitely be watching out for input.
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Alright here's my character, I've intentionally implied he's experimented with some types of magic to both add to his personality and allow you to judge if they're allowed without having to make major changes to my character either way,if you deem either of the variations I've added to be not allowed I can simply say the tests failed.

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@Pyromaniacwolf

Errm, don't you have a picture that shows off the face?

You also have one glaring problem about your sheet.

@A Lowly Wretch

Alright. I still need to talk to the voices in my head think about it so in the meantime, please finish their appearances.
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@PaulHaynek Yeah I thought that when I got the image >.> I'll find a face for him soon.
Also crap I need to write the sample post right? Or is there another issue?
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Heyo, here's my character. Thought you guys might need a bruiser.


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Alright so I found a image that works for his appearance, I'll begin working on the sample post now. I'll be honest it completely slipped my mind until you mentioned in.
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@PaulHaynek

Heyo, here we go.

Kinda skimped on that sample post as I ran outta time and I've been working on her for awhile. Got a little caught up in the Bio and Personality section, but I think she's finally good to go.

Spells aren't all inclusive of course, and I'll add more 'spells' later, but I think this is a good example of how I'm gonna use most of them.


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@Pyromaniacwolf

Now he just looks too old to enroll as a student. If you'd like, you can have him as a guest competitor.

@Polaris North

Accepted.

@Rune_Alchemist

And so are you.
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@PaulHaynek Honestly I'm having trouble finding a decent image for him but I was considering making him a guest competitor anyway, I'll slightly modify his backstory to fit with that change.
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@PaulHaynek

Great, will wait patiently to start~
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@PaulHaynek - I got the character's appearances up. I'm planning a joint writing sample featuring the two of them but I'm holding off because if Gangraena simply cannot be I'll have to do some major rewrites to both Leomund and the character replacing her and that's if I don't scrap both of them and write up someone else. Also I made the changes to Gangraena, removing the resistance to dark magic as well as her healing effect from curses.

Anyhow here's the updated sheets, complete with everything except the writing sample.


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@A Lowly Wretch

Yeah, my reservations about Gangraena were confirmed. She looks too much of a monster not to be reported to the authorities.

At best, she might get taken in by the scholars in Zauberheim and separated from Leomund, removing her from the RP proper. At worst, well... we can leave that to the imagination.
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@PaulHaynek - Alright then. I have two choices for alternatives.

1: I swap Gang out for a fellow student who uses alchemy to enhance himself at a severe cost.

Or

2: I scrap them both and replace Leomund with a student that's a rogue elf who uses darkness magic to conjure shadowy hands that can grapple opponents and wield weapons.

Which sounds better?

Edit: Actually, I'll just go with the second choice myself. I like the idea better and it's easier to work with being a single character.
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@A Lowly Wretch

Alright. I shall look forward to your character.
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Oh man this is going to be sweet!

Here are my 2 characters:





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