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Yeesssss.

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Alright, my sheet is done.
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Updating mine, it'll be done in a minute.
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@The Bork Lazer


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And that's the first round of reviews done! I'm glad all the characters thus far have definitely fallen into place. It's never fun having to decline a character and breaking a player's spirits. I am still waiting on Carlotta to be finished before I review our two potential scouts. @Xandrya and @thedman, could you both please let me know of an alternative role you'd take if your character isn't approved as the scout? Just so that I can start looking into making my own character in one of the unoccupied roles.

And for everybody, I have a plot worked out in my head for this RP. With a very menacing antagonist, and a definitive end to the story should we manage to make it that far. I'll preface this with something akin to a book synopsis.

The nights are getting longer as winter looms over the remnants of Falcon squad. Low on supplies, ammunition, and people to call allies, Falcon team makes a desperate attempt to keep their personal war with ADVENT strong. But as they draw closer to their new hope, they too draw closer to the Elders' secret, and the ire of a Chosen menace.
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Alright, done. I spent like 20 minutes trying to remember a song and in the end I didn't end up using it...
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Alright, done. I spent like 20 minutes trying to remember a song and in the end I didn't end up using it...


Shit I should have waited 20 minutes before doing the reviews. xD
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@Whoami I am considering the Tech as an alternate role.

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I edited Jimbo's profile to take into account the suggestions that you have made. Thanks for the review by the way.

Once the other members of the squad have been confirmed, I'll start working on Squad Relations.
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Made the suggested edits. I'm definitely looking forward to this.
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Ditto with the alternative role of tech.
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With some company at the moment. Will do the reviews when I'm later tonight.
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So I just wants to say I liked both of the characters going in for the scout slot. And it was tough to decide to ultimately got it. But I'm going to have to give it to David. At the end of the day, I felt David's character fit more into the scout role, having plenty of hunting experience and needing to know how to sneak around ADVENT patrols.

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Now, I'm getting to work on my character. So expect another post from me in a hour or two... or three.
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Now, I'm getting to work on my character. So expect another post from me in a hour or two... or three.



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And here is my character, Sara Lancaster! I felt I could have written the background a little better, but it was essentially paraphrasing the 'Shangri La Incident' that can be read in Sara's miscellaneous section. She is a psionic, but she hasn't yet discovered her true psionic potential. At this point, her psionics have only shown through unusually keen intuition and occasional ESP. The squad just sees her as keen and lucky for now.



As a final note, a Discord Server has been set up for this RP!
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@Xandrya, let me know when you're finished modifying your CS. ^.^
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Sure thing. Was PMing back and forth for another RP but I'll have it done tomorrow as it's time for girl's night out!
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Gotcha! If you have discord, I recommend you join in the server so we're all directly communicating rather than playing tag on the forum.

I'll also be getting to work later tonight on the OOC and IC.
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OOC is now up!
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Alright, tweaked the second biographical paragraph and added a new item.

EDIT: I keep getting an invalid link notice for disocord.
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Alright, tweaked the second biographical paragraph and added a new item.

EDIT: I keep getting an invalid link notice for disocord.


Try this one.
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